Alwi_Pratama Posted September 6, 2021 Posted September 6, 2021 Emilio Cailozmemay Emilio Cailozmemay is an 18 years old teenager from Bernal, Mexico. Emilio only lives with his brother since Emilio at 4 years old. Emilio's parents leave them alone becuase they parents dont want their presence. Emilio's brother's name is Veto. Veto always works hard and do his best for his little brother. Veto taught Emilio many thinks that he wouldn't get from his parents or school like how to ride a bicycle, cooking, wash his own clothes and much more then this. Emilio is grateful to have a brother who is always there for him in any situation. Emilio and his brother live in harsh environment or say a gangster's place. Emilio's brother or Veto is the one of gangster at that place and their barrio is not far from his home. Veto always said to Emilio to do not go outside. Emilio's brother said "If you need anything, just call me. Dont go outside okay? I'll give you anything so you can stay at home, it is a phone, a playstation, a xbox or whatever you want and just dont go outside, Vato." that what Emilio's brother said. Emilio is very curious because of why his brother always say not to go outside. Emilio at 12 years old still curious with the reason why he cant go outside. Emilio is getting tired of the rules that his brother makes. Emilio don't know, his brother made that rule for his safety because his brother is a high-ranking member of a gangster. Emilio was o fed up with the rules that he decided to leave the house without his brother knowing. Emilio walks all the way safely safe. Emilio left the house while his brother was fall asleep. Emilio thinks his brother is bad for lying to him. Emilio dont know, his brother following him all the way from far away with his homies on a car, not long after that a group of armed gangsters came and stopped Emilio. Emilio is very suprised by the presence of the these gangster. Veto went to straight to Emilio and shot the gangster then save Emilio. Now Emilio know the reason why his brother told him to dont go outside. Questions Character Story Pertama: Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 1 - 2 tahun URL Namechange: Account UCP yang saya miliki: ReyhanHD Account Forum yang saya miliki: @Alwi_Pratama Saya Alwi_Pratama selaku pemilik account UCP ReyhanHD bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Emilio Cailozmemay) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.
$clamours$ Posted September 6, 2021 Posted September 6, 2021 Sebelum saya review lebih lanjut, tolong jawab pertanyaan saya dengan sejujur-jujurnya! 1. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? 2. Apa kamu sudah baca ketentuan dalam membuat Character Story sebelumnya? 3. Apa kamu sudah pastikan nama dan ucp benar dalam penulisannya? (tolong teliti, di cek terlebih dahulu) 4. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? 5. Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Harap perhatikan petunjuk dibawah ini! 1. Gunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Calibri, atau Tahoma),Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) 2. Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri. 3. Pastikan anda sudah menggunakan formulir untuk character stories. 4. Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. 5. Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standard bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). 6. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme (silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: http://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ )
Alwi_Pratama Posted September 6, 2021 Author Posted September 6, 2021 19 minutes ago, clamours said: Sebelum saya review lebih lanjut, tolong jawab pertanyaan saya dengan sejujur-jujurnya! 1. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? 2. Apa kamu sudah baca ketentuan dalam membuat Character Story sebelumnya? 3. Apa kamu sudah pastikan nama dan ucp benar dalam penulisannya? (tolong teliti, di cek terlebih dahulu) 4. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? 5. Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Harap perhatikan petunjuk dibawah ini! 1. Gunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Calibri, atau Tahoma),Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) 2. Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri. 3. Pastikan anda sudah menggunakan formulir untuk character stories. 4. Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. 5. Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standard bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). 6. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme (silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: http://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) 1.Tidak 2.Sudah 3.Sudah 4.Tidak 5.1 tahun lebih
$clamours$ Posted September 6, 2021 Posted September 6, 2021 53 minutes ago, Alwi_Pratama said: Account UCP yang saya miliki: Tidak ada tulis nama UCP kamu, bukan "Tidak ada"
Alwi_Pratama Posted September 7, 2021 Author Posted September 7, 2021 13 jam yang lalu, clamours said: tulis nama UCP kamu, bukan "Tidak ada" @clamoursudah min
$clamours$ Posted September 7, 2021 Posted September 7, 2021 9 hours ago, Alwi_Pratama said: @clamoursudah min udah gimana, ini loh mas On 9/6/2021 at 6:47 PM, Alwi_Pratama said: "If you need anything, just call me. Dont go outside okay? I'll give you anything so you can stay at home, it is a phone, a playstation, a xbox or whatever you want and just dont go outside, Vato." dialog paragram menggunakan italic ya mas ini, "If you need anything, just call me. Dont go outside okay?" seluruhnya harap diperbaiki yang saya mention, sisanya sudah memenuhi kriteria
$clamours$ Posted September 8, 2021 Posted September 8, 2021 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @Alwi_Pratama, I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely,@clamours JG:RP Helper Team
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