Hills Posted August 31, 2021 Posted August 31, 2021 (edited) Kenneth_Hamilton Kenneth Hamilton was born on June 8, 1998 in the city of Los Angeles, he was born to a fairly simple family his mother named Amelia Brianna then his father Gunnleif Silverlance was very happy finally after 3 years of marriage they were blessed with a son Kenneth's presence for Bella then Gunnleif is very valuable in his simple life become very luxurious after the presence of Kenneth Kenneth since childhood is a very active child cheerful and brings enthusiasm to the people around him Kenneth lives in a very simple environment since childhood he is surrounded by very good friends, the people around him are very happy with Kenneth's presence in their neighborhood. But everything changed when he was a teenager, more precisely when he entered high school in America, the school was famous for the bad behavior of its students, even rumors that almost every year there were students who went to prison or died when Kenneth first entered the school. Ordinary but after a few weeks Kenneth started hanging out with his classmates who could be said to be "thugs", Kenneth began to fall into the dark world he became curious about illegal drugs, heroin, marijuana and so on. When in the middle of the semester a classmate who used to take drugs offered Kenneth heroin. His teacher came, then he was immediately taken to the police and sentenced to 7 years in prison. After he was released from bars he went to his parents and apologized to his parents but both his parents were very disappointed the child he was proud of had disappointed him Kenneth's parents didn't want to accept him anymore, Kenneth was very sorry for what he did at that time he promised to his parents to change into a better person then he will prove to his parents that he can be successful then become a respected person he moves to San Andreas to start a new life he tries to find a job, then he meets a middle aged man in San Andreas Andreas the man named Bonaventura Constantine he is a mechanic in Los Santos Kenneth also asked him for guidance to become a mechanic to him after a few years finally Kenneth managed to set up his own workshop in Los Santos, and now he plans to hold workshops in various cities in San Andreas to prove to the public his parents that he could be successful people. Questions Character Story Pertama: No Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 3 - 6 bulan URL Namechange: https://jogjagamers.org/topic/180640-cn-michelle_rodriguez-to-kenneth_hamilton-hills/?tab=comments#comment-1760653 Account UCP yang saya miliki: Tidak ada Account Forum yang saya miliki:Hills Saya Hills selaku pemilik account UCP Hills bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Kenneth_Hamilton) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain. Edited September 1, 2021 by Hills
$Cherry$ Posted August 31, 2021 Posted August 31, 2021 Halo saya dengan @Cherry akan mengevaluasi CS kamu, silahkan jawab pertanyaan dibawah ini sesuai dengan format yang sudah diberikan oleh saya; Apa nama UCP kamu? Berapa UCP yang kamu miliki? sebutkan semua dibawah ini: - - - Berapa banyak karakter yang kamu miliki? sebutkan semua dibawah ini: - - - - - Berapa banyak kata yang ada di Character Story kamu? cek di www.wordcounter.net Apa kamu siap karakter kamu di BAN jika ketawan plagiat atau copas dari cerita?
Hills Posted August 31, 2021 Author Posted August 31, 2021 (edited) 5 hours ago, Cherry said: Halo saya dengan @Cherry akan mengevaluasi CS kamu, silahkan jawab pertanyaan dibawah ini sesuai dengan format yang sudah diberikan oleh saya; Apa nama UCP kamu? Hills Berapa UCP yang kamu miliki? sebutkan semua dibawah ini: - Tidak ada - Tidak ada - Tidak ada Berapa banyak karakter yang kamu miliki? sebutkan semua dibawah ini: - Kenneth Hamilton - Abayomi Constantine - Amanda Belinda (new account) - - Berapa banyak kata yang ada di Character Story kamu? 411 Kata cek di www.wordcounter.net Apa kamu siap karakter kamu di BAN jika ketawan plagiat atau copas dari cerita? Siap. Edited August 31, 2021 by Hills
$Cherry$ Posted September 1, 2021 Posted September 1, 2021 Insert a header into your paragraphs, such as giving a "space or caps" into your starting paragraphs You're using COMA ( , ) too much, please refrain yourself from using it too much and use other punctuations as your story Fix your mishaps grammar.
Hills Posted September 1, 2021 Author Posted September 1, 2021 11 minutes ago, Cherry said: Insert a header into your paragraphs, such as giving a "space or caps" into your starting paragraphs You're using COMA ( , ) too much, please refrain yourself from using it too much and use other punctuations as your story Fix your mishaps grammar. Semua sudah saya perbaiki, tolong di cek kembali.
$Cherry$ Posted September 1, 2021 Posted September 1, 2021 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @Hills, I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely,@Cherry JG:RP Helper Team
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