pending Derion_Cobb [michael_ward]

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Derion_Cobb

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          Derion Cobb is a teenager from California, Long Beach and 24 years old. She lives with her mother, her father has been divorced for a long time and has left her since she was little. But the father died in his mistress after getting a brutal shooting of his father. He was very sad that his father was gone even though his father no longer considered him his son but still loved his father until the day he died. Derion Cobb lives with his fathers inheritance that has been given to him and he uses the money to splurge and always squander his fathers inheritance. In the middle of the night he thinks how to make money while he always squanders the money he has. He began to stop doing this and decided to move to Los Santos and he lived in Playa Communiting House Project. Starting from building his hobby into a job, namely making music, he also built his own studio and tried to create a new movement in music.

 

          But it requires large funds and is very difficult. Someone who came to him and had the same hobby was Yaqeem Moore who lived next door. Derion Cobb told Yaqeem all his problems and explained Moocies or commonly called Yaqeem Moore suggested to take a job from him. He was also very interested in Moocies' offer, he took something from him and went to someone who would order a large amount. He also earns money from the proceeds of him selling illegal drugs and he also consumes these drugs to live his life for a day.

 

          When he had enough, he could finally build his own studio and buy the things he needed. which is selling drugs and it will get big if he succeeds. He also accepted the job and it was not suspected that Moocies was affiliated with the Blacc Bandit Crip gang. The gang is very feared in the area and very famous among the people around him and makes him very interested in taking him to his studio to collaborate together to create a music generation.

 

 

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Questions

Character Story Pertama: No

Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 1 - 2 tahun

URL Namechange:

https://jogjagamers.org/topic/179549-cn-jaylen_brooks-to-derion_cobb-michael_ward/?tab=comments#comment-1747607

 

Account UCP yang saya miliki:
michael_ward ( yang di pake ) pumpky (dah di block)

 

Account Forum yang saya miliki:
Young-Bitch

 

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Saya CIT PEKALONGAN selaku pemilik account UCP michael_ward bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Derion_Cobb) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

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Oke sebelum melanjutkan ke revisi, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu.

1. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak)
2. Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih )
3. Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange)
4. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
5. Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
6. Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet)

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9 minutes ago, gudaguuddd said:

Oke sebelum melanjutkan ke revisi, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu.

1. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak)
2. Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih )
3. Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange)
4. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
5. Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
6. Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet)

Lah kan dah ada di atas yang kecuali main di rumah atau warnet, ulang lagi dah.

 

1. Ga
2. Otw 2 tahun
3. Namechange
4. pumpky, dah di block
5. @Young-Bitch ama @CIT PEKALONGAN
6. Warnet

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47 minutes ago, CIT PEKALONGAN said:

@Young-Bitch ama @CIT PEKALONGAN

Akun Forum mana yang terhubung dengan UCP saat ini, dan apakah kamu bersedia apabila akun Forum kamu diblock salah satunya? Karena persyaratannya memang setiap pemain hanya diperbolehkan untuk menggunakan 1 UCP dan 1 akun Forum.

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6 minutes ago, gudaguuddd said:

Akun Forum mana yang terhubung dengan UCP saat ini, dan apakah kamu bersedia apabila akun Forum kamu diblock salah satunya? Karena persyaratannya memang setiap pemain hanya diperbolehkan untuk menggunakan 1 UCP dan 1 akun Forum.

Saya pake yang @CIT PEKALONGAN, yang @Young-Bitch dah di ban mint

[humbletin]

Baik, ada beberapa hal yang harus direvisi :

1. Gunakan format Justify (rata kiri kanan) pada setiap paragraf kamu.

2. 2 jam yang lalu, CIT PEKALONGAN said:

   and he lived in a Playa Communiting House Project.

   Tolong hilangkan huruf "a", jadi hanya he lived in Playa Communiting House Project.

3. Jarak antara paragraf 1 dan 2 itu double enter ya? Kamu hapus 1 biar simetris jaraknya.

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3 minutes ago, gudaguuddd said:

Baik, ada beberapa hal yang harus direvisi :

1. Gunakan format Justify (rata kiri kanan) pada setiap paragraf kamu.

2. Tolong hilangkan huruf "a", jadi hanya he lived in Playa Communiting House Project.

3. Jarak antara paragraf 1 dan 2 itu double enter ya? Kamu hapus 1 biar simetris jaraknya.

Editied

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2 jam yang lalu, CIT PEKALONGAN said:

Derion Cobb is a teenager from California, Long Beach and 24 years old. She lives with her mother, her father has been divorced for a long time and has left her since she was little. But the father died in his mistress after getting a brutal shooting of his father. He was very sad that his father was gone even though his father no longer considered him his son but still loved his father until the day he died. Derion Cobb lives with his fathers inheritance that has been given to him and he uses the money to splurge and always squander his fathers inheritance. In the middle of the night he thinks how to make money while he always squanders the money he has. He began to stop doing this and decided to move to Los Santos and he lived in Playa Communiting House Project. Starting from building his hobby into a job, namely making music, he also built his own studio and tried to create a new movement in music.

 

          But it requires large funds and is very difficult. Someone who came to him and had the same hobby was Yaqeem Moore who lived next door. Derion Cobb told Yaqeem all his problems and explained Moocies or commonly called Yaqeem Moore suggested to take a job from him. He was also very interested in Moocies' offer, he took something from him and went to someone who would order a large amount. He also earns money from the proceeds of him selling illegal drugs and he also consumes these drugs to live his life for a day.

 

          When he had enough, he could finally build his own studio and buy the things he needed. which is selling drugs and it will get big if he succeeds. He also accepted the job and it was not suspected that Moocies was affiliated with the Blacc Bandit Crip gang. The gang is very feared in the area and very famous among the people around him and makes him very interested in taking him to his studio to collaborate together to create a music generation.

Ini ketiga paragraf kamu belum Justify. Silakan di edit dulu menjadi Justify (rata kiri kanan).

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3 minutes ago, gudaguuddd said:

Ini ketiga paragraf kamu belum Justify. Silakan di edit dulu menjadi Justify (rata kiri kanan).

Editied

[humbletin]

2 jam yang lalu, CIT PEKALONGAN said:

Derion Cobb is a teenager from California, Long Beach and 24 years old. She lives with her mother, her father has been divorced for a long time and has left her since she was little. But the father died in his mistress after getting a brutal shooting of his father. He was very sad that his father was gone even though his father no longer considered him his son but still loved his father until the day he died. Derion Cobb lives with his fathers inheritance that has been given to him and he uses the money to splurge and always squander his fathers inheritance. In the middle of the night he thinks how to make money while he always squanders the money he has. He began to stop doing this and decided to move to Los Santos and he lived in Playa Communiting House Project. Starting from building his hobby into a job, namely making music, he also built his own studio and tried to create a new movement in music.

Nih paragraf pertamanya belum mas. Masih melenceng-melenceng sebelah kanannya.

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10 hours ago, gudaguuddd said:

Nih paragraf pertamanya belum mas. Masih melenceng-melenceng sebelah kanannya.

Editied mas

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Character Story

Dear @CIT PEKALONGAN,

 

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website.

We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character.

 

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