omencakep Posted August 25, 2021 Posted August 25, 2021 (edited) Shaun_Robinson Shaun Robinson is a man from the United States, he was born on July 4th, 1990, the son of Henry Robinson and Lori Tracy who lives in Atlanta, Georgia United States. Shaun Robinson has one little sister who is 3 years younger than him, her name is Kimberly Robinson. Shaun Robinson is an independent and mature-minded person, but her sister isn’t like him Kimberly is a spoiled and childish person. And because of that, their parent especially the mom has to pay more attention to Kimberly. Even so, Shaun who is a very mature and independent person doesn’t mind it. Shaun Robinson is interested in business things since he was young, he was always thinking about how to get money without bothering his parent. Many years have passed and Shaun was 17 years old, he decided to start a mobile burger and hotdog business. When all his friends were just going to school and playing, without any shame feeling, Shaun kept running his business after school is over. Shaun's parents were very supportive of their son's efforts, and right at this moment, Shaun became very close to his dad. His dad always helped him, gave him advice, and gave him the motivation to make his son become a successful person. Long story short, Shaun finally graduated from his school and he kept doing his business consistently. One day, Shaun’s dad just came home and he immediately helped Shaun to sell burgers and hotdogs as always. Even though Shaun is worried about his dad's condition which is getting weaker due to his old age, but his dad was insisting to help him out and Shaun reluctantly allowed his dad to help him. The night has come, and they decided to come home as soon as possible. When they got home, Shaun’s dad felt pain in his chest, his heart was beating so fast, and he felt so nauseous. His dad suddenly fell and he was unconscious. In a panic, Shaun told his mom and his sister, they immediately took his father to the nearest hospital. After waiting for so long, their dad sadly died because of a heart attack. Without his dad Shaun is getting lost and stressed, he kept thinking of his dad. His sister always bothering their only parent by asking for whatever she wanted, it made Shaun feel so pity for his mom. And that’s the reason why Shaun decided to go to Los Santos, he wanted to help his family financially. Unwillingly his mom had to let him go, with all the bucks from his business so far, Shaun went to Los Santos alone. Questions Character Story Pertama: No Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 1 - 2 tahun URL Namechange: https://jogjagamers.org/topic/179893-cn-shauno_moretti-to-shaun_robinson-omencakep/?tab=comments#comment-1751688 Account UCP yang saya miliki: omencakep Account Forum yang saya miliki: omencakep Saya omencakep selaku pemilik account UCP omencakep bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Shaun_Robinson) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain. Edited August 28, 2021 by omencakep
Fauzancoks Posted August 25, 2021 Posted August 25, 2021 Selagi saya mengecheck Character Stories kamu, tolong jawab beberapa pertanyaan yang saya sediakan dibawah. 1. Level berapa karakter kamu saat ini? 2. Apakah kamu punya UCP lain selain ini? 3. Apakah kamu sudah membaca syarat dan ketentuan pembuatan Character Story sebelumnya? 4. Setuju atau tidak jika karakter kamu akan menerima konsekuensi banned permanent jika terdapat plagiarism, copy-paste dan semacamnya? You need to read this! 1. Gunakan justify dan spasi yang benar. 2. Menggunakan formulir untuk character story. 3. Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Calibri, atau Tahoma),Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) 4. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme. 5. Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standard bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). 6. Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph.
omencakep Posted August 25, 2021 Author Posted August 25, 2021 (edited) 1. Level 15 2. Tidak 3. Sudah 4. Setuju Edited August 26, 2021 by omencakep
Fauzancoks Posted August 26, 2021 Posted August 26, 2021 Here are a few of the errors you make in your Character Stories. The plural verb live does not appear to agree with the singular subject the son. Consider changing the word "live" to "lives" in the sentence "the son of Henry Robinson and Lori Tracy who live in Atlanta" It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here. Consider changing the word "to" to "for" in the sentence "it made Shaun feel so pity to his mom"
Fauzancoks Posted August 29, 2021 Posted August 29, 2021 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @omencakep, I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely,@David_Tyler JG:RP Helper Team
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