Ben_McSterbensky Posted August 22, 2021 Posted August 22, 2021 Albaid Zainmaskhad On July 23rd, 2000, a child named Albaid Zainmaskhad was born in Riyadh, Saudia Arabia. Albaid is the third child of siblings, he is the son of Mr. Shairoq Hanmack and Mrs. Aminah Denhaim, he has been treated spoiled since childhood and he has no friends because he has been alone since childhood because he was locked from home because his parents were busy working, he was entrusted with a maid at his house, and this is the reason he has a quiet nature. Albaid even forgot his parents because he was left behind for several years with his parents working abroad. After the teenager Albaid flew to San Andreas with the minimal money his parents, gave him to continue his education in the U.S. High School while wandering and living in a dormitory there, he has a roommate named Dylan who wants to be a security guard for the San Andreas police and wants to register with the police there. Albaid also wanted to register at Security there, after he entered school for the first time there, he was immediately tested in athletics with his friend Dylan, and immediately got the first and second seeds, which Dylan won. he excelled in the field of Sports and was immediately seen by the teachers there. he was nervous about what he was doing, even though he had never left the house since he was a child. Long story short, Albaid graduated from school and wanted to continue his dream of being a policeman and making his parents happy, the next day Albaid enrolled in Security Policing in San Andreas and he was immediately accepted because he had excellence in sports at his former school. Then Albaid and his friend Dylan started working after being accepted as Security. he took some equipment and vests in the Locker Room there and immediately guarded the Police area there from morning to night, long story short, Albaid has been a Security for a year and managed to buy an apartment in the Idlewood area. he lives alone with his friend Dylan. he is always grateful for the events. he lived from childhood until now, he always prays for the smooth running of his life for the future in San Andreas and time continues to pass. Questions Character Story Pertama: No Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 1 - 2 tahun URL Namechange: https://jogjagamers.org/topic/179208-cn-zenmasta-mclucky-to-albaidz-zainkhad-berlindlucky/?tab=comments#comment-1744962 Account UCP yang saya miliki:@Ben_McSterbensky Account Forum yang saya miliki: Saya Ben_McSterbensky selaku pemilik account UCP berlindlucky bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Albaid Zainmaskhad) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.
$SilumanUlar$ Posted August 22, 2021 Posted August 22, 2021 Halo, Sebelum saya respon Character Story kamu, dimohon untuk jawab pertanyaan dibawah ini dengan jujur: Berapa level karakter kamu saat ini? Apakah UCP kamu sudah sinkron/sesuai ? agar proses Character Story bisa berjalan lancar Apakah kamu mempunyai UCP lebih dari satu? Dipastikan kamu memahami peraturan sebelum membuat Character Story, Apakah sudah membacanya? Bersediakah kamu di banned account permanent jika kamu ketahuan Copy-Paste Character Story?
Ben_McSterbensky Posted August 22, 2021 Author Posted August 22, 2021 2 minutes ago, GulaGula said: Halo, Sebelum saya respon Character Story kamu, dimohon untuk jawab pertanyaan dibawah ini dengan jujur: Berapa level karakter kamu saat ini? Apakah UCP kamu sudah sinkron/sesuai ? agar proses Character Story bisa berjalan lancar Apakah kamu mempunyai UCP lebih dari satu? Dipastikan kamu memahami peraturan sebelum membuat Character Story, Apakah sudah membacanya? Bersediakah kamu di banned account permanent jika kamu ketahuan Copy-Paste Character Story? 1. 17 Min. 2. sudah min. 3. Tidak ada lagi mind. 4. Semua peraturan sudah saya lihat mind, dan sudah saya benerkan. 5. Siap kapan saja.
$SilumanUlar$ Posted August 22, 2021 Posted August 22, 2021 Jelaskan dengan jujur, UCP michaelkontol itu milik siapa?
Ben_McSterbensky Posted August 22, 2021 Author Posted August 22, 2021 3 minutes ago, GulaGula said: Jelaskan dengan jujur, UCP michaelkontol itu milik siapa? masalah itu saya sudah confirm di pembuatan CS sebelumnya, saya tidak tau itu punya siapa.
$SilumanUlar$ Posted August 23, 2021 Posted August 23, 2021 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @Ben_McSterbensky, I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, I have reviewed your character story and as a result, I come to the decision to PENDING your character story based on the following reasons: Use the formar available in this thread. Use a font that is easy to read (Arial,Calibri or Tahoma), Font size : 14. Reduce your photo size. On July 23 You need to add rd after the number, e.g.: The 3rd of July or July 3rd. reason He The second word should begin with a lower case letter, e.g.: we'd. After the teenager Albaid flew to San Andreas with the minimal money his parents gave him You might need a comma after the first part of the sentence. now, He This word should not be capitalized unless it is a name or part of a title. to night The last expression is usually written as one word (without a hyphen), e.g.: without, boyfriend, straightforward, etc. I hope that you can correct the mistakes mentioned above so that I may approve your character story. Sincerely,@GulaGula JG:RP Helper Team
Ben_McSterbensky Posted August 23, 2021 Author Posted August 23, 2021 1 hour ago, GulaGula said: Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @Ben_McSterbensky, I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, I have reviewed your character story and as a result, I come to the decision to PENDING your character story based on the following reasons: Use the formar available in this thread. Use a font that is easy to read (Arial,Calibri or Tahoma), Font size : 14. Reduce your photo size. On July 23 You need to add rd after the number, e.g.: The 3rd of July or July 3rd. reason He The second word should begin with a lower case letter, e.g.: we'd. After the teenager Albaid flew to San Andreas with the minimal money his parents gave him You might need a comma after the first part of the sentence. now, He This word should not be capitalized unless it is a name or part of a title. to night The last expression is usually written as one word (without a hyphen), e.g.: without, boyfriend, straightforward, etc. I hope that you can correct the mistakes mentioned above so that I may approve your character story. Sincerely,@GulaGula JG:RP Helper Team Edited, please check again.
$SilumanUlar$ Posted August 23, 2021 Posted August 23, 2021 Fix: Long story = long story now, He This word should not be capitalized unless it is a name or part of a title.
Ben_McSterbensky Posted August 23, 2021 Author Posted August 23, 2021 3 minutes ago, GulaGula said: Fix: Long story = long story now, He This word should not be capitalized unless it is a name or part of a title. Edited back, please check again.
$SilumanUlar$ Posted August 23, 2021 Posted August 23, 2021 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @Ben_McSterbensky, I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely,@GulaGula JG:RP Helper Team
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