pending Parks_Wade [aronoww]

[aronow a]

Parks Wade

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     Parks Wade is a 14 year old boy - Crack Dealer. He lives in Idlewood around Cross Street, Since he was 4 years old. Parks has experienced life without the love of his parents. The story begins when Parks' parents left Parks' body in one of the fronts of the Idlewood house and was found by an old woman who was the owner of the house. The old woman took care of Park until she was 10 years old, Park never felt what it was like to go to school because of very serious economic problems. bad. The old woman does not have much money, only enough to eat everyday, with that in mind. Parks tried to go to one of the Pizza jobs near his house, to apply to be a sweeper or whatever to get money, but one of the employees from the Pizza restaurant kicked him out because he saw Parks the geeky little boy aged 10 applying for a job.

     One day when Parks grew up, when he was 13 years old and in the next week he would grow to be a 14 year old child. He got the bad news that the old woman who cared for Parks since childhood had died of heart disease, Parks did not receive love for the second time. Dear parents, and bad news again, 3 weeks after the old woman's death, the house that Parks lives in which belongs to the old grandmother, will be confiscated because the old grandmother once had a large enough debt, and during her life she had not paid it all off, and Parks finally got in 3 weeks to pack up his clothes and think about how he could live in Los Santos.

 

     One week passed after the death of the old Woman. Parks was 14 years old, that day he was walking in Idlewood and he was confused by the car that stopped in front of her, in the car there were 2 people who asked Parks, they offered Crack and a gun to Parks, they intended to offer the illegal object, but Parks refused, and he mentioned he was only 14 years old with a tired face, but suddenly the 2 guys pulled Parks into the car and offered to take Crack from them and Parks sold the thing. Until he willing to give more, Parks agreed, at the age of 14 he was working as a Crack smuggler, and his plans were going well, can't believe it's been 2 weeks, Finally the old Woman's house was taken over by the government, and Parks lived behind Tatto idlewood. There is a building, and he just focused on his job, receiving Crack every day, making sales, and receiving wages.

 

 

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Saya aronow a selaku pemilik account UCP aronoww bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Parks Wade) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

Edited August 26, 2021 by aronow a

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Halo brader.. @aronow a

Saya mengecek Character Stories kamu, Silahkan jawab pertanyaan dibawah.

 

1. Sebutkan berapa UCP yang kamu miliki.

2. Character yang kamu mainkan ini level berapa ?

3. Apakah CS yang kamu buat sudah 300 kata ?

4. Apakah CS yang kamu ini hasil dari kamu sendiri atau meng-Copy CS milik orang lain?

5. Apakah nama Character kamu dan nama UCP kamu sudah benar? (biasanya, kalo salah di antara kedua tersebut, pas di masukin CS nya ke UCP itu suka ga bisa, jadi tolong pastikan kembali Nama Character dan nama UCP nya benar.)

6. Kamu main dimana? Rumah apa main di Warnet?

 

Note:
Selagi dalam pemeriksaan, cobalah kamu periksa kembali Character Story kamu, siapa tahu saja ada kesalahan disana, jika ada kesalahan maka perbaikilah dan kalo belum di respon CS nya, mohon bersabar ya kakak, pasti di respon kok.

[aronow a]

1. Satu, aronoww
2. Level 3.
3. Sudah.
4. Buatan saya sendiri.
5. Sudah fix Benar.
6. Rumah.

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@aronow a

Tolong jelaskan dengan jujur, di bawah ini UCP milik siapa?

• aronow
• GrayWhite18

[aronow a]

Mohon maaf sebelum nya saya tidak mempunyai UCP bernama 

• GrayWhite18

Hanya aronoww, double W

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@aronow a

Perbaiki kembali:

1. Cerita nya tidak perlu di beri huruf tebal, huruf biasa saja.
2. Paragraf pertama dan paragraf kedua di tambahkan lagi ceritanya hingga sama banyak nya seperti paragraf ke tiga.
3. Gunakan rata kanan kiri, bukan rata tengah ataupun bukan rata kiri. (Rata Kanan Kiri: )
4. Berikan 5 atau 10 SPACE di setiap awal paragraph nya, lalu sesuaikan dengan paragraph lain nya.
5. Tepatkanlah KOMA atau TITIK dimana semestinya di tepatkan, jika kalimat tersebut masih bisa digunakan KOMA, makan gunakan lah KOMA, jika kalimat tersebut harus di beri TITIK, maka gunakan lah TITIK. jangan terlalu banyak KOMA maupun TITIK dalam Cerita Character Story kamu.

[aronow a]

@mariorianto28

Update.

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@aronow a

Perbaiki lagi:

1. Paragraf pertama dan paragraf kedua di tambahkan lagi ceritanya hingga sama banyak nya seperti paragraf ke tiga.

[BADRI]

@aronow a

[aronow a]

@mariorianto28

 

Update

Edited August 23, 2021 by aronow a

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@aronow a

 

1. Tidak mungkin dalam sebuah cerita selalu nya menggunakan Koma, banyak sekali kalimat yang harus nya di beri titik, namun malah di beri koma. Silahkan di perbaiki lagi masalah ini dalam cerita mu di atas, lebih teliti lagi dan jangan asal asalan perbaikinya.

[aronow a]

@mariorianto28

Update.

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Jogjagamers Reality Project
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Character Story

Dear @aronow a

 

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website.

We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character.

 

Sincerely,
@mariorianto28
JG:RP Helper Team