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Yaqeem_Moore


 

 

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     Yaqeem Moore is a teenager from New Orleans, Louisiana who lives in a friendly and peaceful environment that makes his life more cheerful and colorful, His parents always spoil him, do what he wants until he grows up to be a teenager he is still a bother to his parents. Even so, he has a tough and strong personality and is one of the most outstanding students, always winning contests at his school and receiving many awards from his school because of his schooling results. When he entered a higher level, he decided permission with his parents to move to the city of Los Santos and start his life and try not to rely on his parents because he felt he had been pampered and always given more attention and that would make both people his parents bothered about it.

 

     Although he was actually forbidden to move, but after being persuaded, his parents allowed him to go to the city of Los Santos and give some money to meet his economic needs. Finally he continued his education in Los Santos and enrolled at Crenshaw High School. Starting from living at a friend's house which is not far from his school, he started to open a small business to fulfill his economy and tried hard to make his parents proud there. By the time graduation was almost here, he had already made his small small business a success and now he will try to use the big opportunity to make him a successful person and make his parents proud.

 

     Now that he has bought his own dream house and no longer lives with his close friends, he also has his own music studio because he was very fond of music from a young age and he has achieved everything he dreamed of, and he sent a fantastic amount of money. for his parents who were in New Orleans as proof that his son had succeeded and became the pride of his parents, a slip of paper he sent, he wrote to go home to his parents as soon as possible. When everything went smoothly, he finally decided to go to visit his parents because he had promised to visit them. After arriving at his parents house, he was happy to see his parents proud of him and made him touched by his struggle.

 

 


 

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Tujuan membuat character story:
Ingin membuat roleplay baru karena habis CK

 

Account UCP yang saya miliki:
BasyarTampan

 

Account Forum yang saya miliki:
$Basyar$

 

Berapa lama saya sudah main di JGRP:
1 - 2 tahun

 

Saya biasa main JGRP di:
Hanya di rumah

 


 

Saya Basyar selaku pemilik account UCP BasyarTampan bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Yaqeem_Moore) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

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Halo, saya Folium yang akan memeriksa Character Story kamu. Sebelumnya, saya ingin bertanya tentang beberapa hal.

  • Apakah character yang kamu gunakan sudah mencapai level 3?
  • Apakah kamu sudah memastikan bahwa Character Story kamu ini sudah berjumlah 300 kata?
  • Sebutkan semua UCP yang kamu punya sejujur-jujurnya!
  • Apakah kamu sudah baca ketentuan dari pembuatan Character Story dan siap menerima konsekuensinya jika melanggar?

Jangan bump Character Story kamu, cukup tunggu, periksa kembali, dan cek ulang kata-kata pada Character Stories yang sudah kamu buat.

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Just now, Folium said:

Halo, saya Folium yang akan memeriksa Character Story kamu. Sebelumnya, saya ingin bertanya tentang beberapa hal.

  • Apakah character yang kamu gunakan sudah mencapai level 3?
  • Apakah kamu sudah memastikan bahwa Character Story kamu ini sudah berjumlah 300 kata?
  • Sebutkan semua UCP yang kamu punya sejujur-jujurnya!
  • Apakah kamu sudah baca ketentuan dari pembuatan Character Story dan siap menerima konsekuensinya jika melanggar?

Jangan bump Character Story kamu, cukup tunggu, periksa kembali, dan cek ulang kata-kata pada Character Stories yang sudah kamu buat.

1. ya

2. Ya

3. Cuma BasyarTampan

4. Ya

@Folium

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3 hours ago, Basyar said:

arriving at his parents' house

  • Hapus tanda petiknya.
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          Yaqeem Moore is a teenager from New Orleans, Louisiana who lives in a friendly and peaceful environment that makes his life more cheerful and colorful, His parents always spoil him, do what he wants until he grows up to be a teenager he is still a bother to his parents. Even so, he has a tough and strong personality and is one of the most outstanding students, always winning contests at his school and receiving many awards from his school because of his schooling results.

  • Berikan jarak pada awal kalimat dari setiap paragraf yang ada di Character Story kamu.
  • Berikan spasi seperti yang sudah saya contohkan pada paragraf di atas.
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11 hours ago, Folium said:
  • Hapus tanda petiknya.
  • Berikan jarak pada awal kalimat dari setiap paragraf yang ada di Character Story kamu.
  • Berikan spasi seperti yang sudah saya contohkan pada paragraf di atas.

 

11 hours ago, Folium said:
  • Hapus tanda petiknya.
  • Berikan jarak pada awal kalimat dari setiap paragraf yang ada di Character Story kamu.
  • Berikan spasi seperti yang sudah saya contohkan pada paragraf di atas.

Oghey @Folium

14 hours ago, Folium said:

Halo, saya Folium yang akan memeriksa Character Story kamu. Sebelumnya, saya ingin bertanya tentang beberapa hal.

  • Apakah character yang kamu gunakan sudah mencapai level 3?
  • Apakah kamu sudah memastikan bahwa Character Story kamu ini sudah berjumlah 300 kata?
  • Sebutkan semua UCP yang kamu punya sejujur-jujurnya!
  • Apakah kamu sudah baca ketentuan dari pembuatan Character Story dan siap menerima konsekuensinya jika melanggar?

Jangan bump Character Story kamu, cukup tunggu, periksa kembali, dan cek ulang kata-kata pada Character Stories yang sudah kamu buat.

Done cuy @Folium

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Dear @Basyar

 

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted Character Story, we have reviewed your Character Story, and we have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request.

 

Please read this guide to activate your Character Story In-Game via our UCP Website.

We hope that you may use this Character Story to further develop your character.

 

Sincerely,

 

@Folium
JG:RP Helper Team

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