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Phineas Fonollosa


 

 

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   Phineas Klaus Fonollosa, Florida, United States of America. 18th July 1995, born in a very modest family. Well, not so modest to be honest. His dad is a drunkard himself. He used to be the good guy that our neighbor talks about. Momma, Phineas's mom or used to be called Momma is a half-Spanish. Back then when she fell in love with Phineas's dad, everything went smoothly. Love affection, butterflies hugs, warm kisses, everything that all humans wanted. But that was in the past.

 

   It all started in the mid-20s when they both moved to Florida. Thugs everywhere, robbery, scammers, murderers, gang war, drugs. Even the government themself don't care about what is happening in the city. On one fine day, Phineas's dad had to finish his breakfast in a restaurant. He was in a rush to meet his own client. But one thing he forgot, he is carrying stuff called portable bone-density scanners. Let's say Phineas and his family is alive because of this thing which is worth 0 each. That day, he left his money machine on the table. Sure thing somebody stole it, it was a homeless guy who thinks it's a time machine. 

 

   He didn't realize it until he has finished with his client. Now that he realized the scanner is gone, the wind blows, cars honking, the crowd being louder and louder. There's only one thing inside Phineas's dad's head, suicide. He tried to jump off of a bridge, but the police are fast response. He failed to attempt his suicide. Now that he thought that he lost everything, he became a drunkard, aggressive, unstable emotion. Until then Phineas's momma decided to move back to her hometown which is Spanish. 

 

   Phineas had no clue why that he was born in such a cruel world. Day by day, week by week, month by month, year by year, he managed to survive his lowest position. Being an employee at a company? It does pay for his hard work. One day, at a bar, the bartender went to his table, ask him how can he be fine while he is only an employee. With a smile and fighting back tears, he answered, "Keep pursuing your happiness, hard work pays it all".

 

 


 

Questions

Tujuan membuat character story:
Membuka fitur yang hanya bisa jika ada CS.

 

Account UCP yang saya miliki:
Qairo

 

Account Forum yang saya miliki:
$utzz$

 

Berapa lama saya sudah main di JGRP:
6 bulan - 1 tahun

 

Saya biasa main JGRP di:
Hanya di rumah

 


 

Saya utzz selaku pemilik account UCP Qairo bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Phineas Fonollosa) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

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1. Level berapa karakter kamu? 
2. Apakah kamu memiliki UCP lain? 
3. Apa kamu sudah baca ketentuan dalam membuat Character Story sebelumnya? 
4. Apa kamu sudah pastikan nama dan ucp benar dalam penulisannya?

 

Harap perhatikan petunjuk dibawah ini!


1.    Gunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Calibri, atau Tahoma),Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline)
2.    Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri.
3.    Pastikan anda sudah menggunakan formulir untuk character stories.
4.    Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph.
5.    Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standard bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English).
6.    Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme (silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: http://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ )

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2 minutes ago, dimdimdam said:

1. Level berapa karakter kamu? 
2. Apakah kamu memiliki UCP lain? 
3. Apa kamu sudah baca ketentuan dalam membuat Character Story sebelumnya? 
4. Apa kamu sudah pastikan nama dan ucp benar dalam penulisannya?

1. 4.
2. Tidak.
3. Sudah.
4. Sudah.

 

2 minutes ago, dimdimdam said:

6.    Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme (silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: http://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ )

Jika itu %4 saja, apa harus diubah?

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To @48kUtz

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to APPROVE your request. Please read the following guide to activate your link your store to your In-Game account:

 


Sincerely,

@dimdimdam
JG:RP Staff Team.

 
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