$Stranger4223$ Posted July 18, 2021 Posted July 18, 2021 (edited) Victor_Esposito Victor Esposito, 27 years old man of Italian descent who has the ability to be a leader originally lived in New York before being in Los Santos. In 2011 while still in college, he started to build a Motorcycle Club in New York called Freedom Motorcycle Club initially. He built MC just to have fun with friends on campus but due to internal factors the Motorcycle Club drastically turned into an illegal organization that smuggles drugs and also steals motorbikes, everything he does now is something very dangerous and wild not every member of Freedom MC has such courage to stay in MC, many members left because everything Victor did was too far to control. Why this Motorcycle organization became illegal. It's all because Victor Esposito needs money for his living and college expenses in New York. A metropolis like New York is a city that requires a very large cost of living. Victor has no choice but to engage in illegal activities with the help of his Motor Club members. For some reason, his Italian parents stop paying for Victor living expenses in New York. Victor first step was to strike a deal with another organization the deal was the Freedom MC members would be prepared to illegal stuff like weapons and drugs. Because this agreement is very tempting and of course an organization needs a courier for their illegal stuff the deal happened Few year has passed since his Motorcycle Club became an illegal organization and that leaves him with no choice but to follow the existing path. Because if he goes back to college it will only make things difficult for his friends. Victor just give up and follow his destiny as the leader of an illegal motorcycle gang. Over time the organization created by Victor grew bigger, Freedom MC almost took over New York with Victor determination but because of a wrong move, all ended in vain and Victor was forced to disband the Motorcycle Club for the safety of its members and finally. MC New York's Motorcycle Club Freedom disbanded in 2018 and Victor became a police fugitive. Victor has been hiding for 3 years because he is a fugitive which requires him to move from city to city. He has a lot of money because of the illicit money he got from his old Motorcycle Club. Then he heard the name of a city that committed a lot of crimes, namely Los Santos because he thought it was a safe city for fugitives like himself. He went to the city and started a new life there, with the help of his old friend who is also a former member of Freedom MC as well as a high school friend named Onfroi Langlois, and coincidentally Onfroi had been in Los Santos for a long time. time before Victor and he told me all about the city of Los Santos. Questions Tujuan membuat character story: Ingin mendapatkan feature yang diberikan Jogjagamers. Account UCP yang saya miliki: stranger4223 Account Forum yang saya miliki:victor pelupessy Berapa lama saya sudah main di JGRP: Kurang dari 1 bulan Saya biasa main JGRP di: Hanya di rumah Saya victor pelupessy selaku pemilik account UCP stranger4223 bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Victor_Esposito) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain. Edited July 19, 2021 by victor pelupessy
BADRI Posted July 19, 2021 Posted July 19, 2021 Halo brader.. @victor pelupessy Saya mengecek Character Stories kamu, Silahkan jawab pertanyaan dibawah. 1. Sebutkan berapa UCP yang kamu miliki. 2. Character yang kamu mainkan ini level berapa ? 3. Apakah CS yang kamu buat sudah 300 kata ? 4. Apakah CS yang kamu ini hasil dari kamu sendiri atau meng-Copy CS milik orang lain? 5. Apakah nama Character kamu dan nama UCP kamu sudah benar? (biasanya, kalo salah di antara kedua tersebut, pas di masukin CS nya ke UCP itu suka ga bisa, jadi tolong pastikan kembali Nama Character dan nama UCP nya benar.) 6. Kamu main dimana? Rumah apa main di Warnet? Note: Selagi dalam pemeriksaan, cobalah kamu periksa kembali Character Story kamu, siapa tahu saja ada kesalahan disana, jika ada kesalahan maka perbaikilah dan kalo belum di respon CS nya, mohon bersabar ya kakak, pasti di respon kok.
$Stranger4223$ Posted July 19, 2021 Author Posted July 19, 2021 1. Cuman ada satu 2.Level 3 3.Sudah 4.Tidak 5.Sudah 6.Rumah
BADRI Posted July 19, 2021 Posted July 19, 2021 @victor pelupessy Perbaiki kembali: Paragraf pertama di tambahkan lagi ceritanya hingga sama banyak nya seperti paragraf lain nya. Photo nya terlalu besar gambar nya, silahkan di kecilkan lagi lalu tepatkan di tengah-tengah photo nya. Hampir keseluruhan semua cerita nya menggunakan Koma, tidak ada Titik nya, di perhatikan lagi penggunaan koma dan titik nya. Gunakan rata kanan kiri, bukan rata tengah ataupun bukan rata kiri. (Rata Kanan Kiri: ) Berikan 5 atau 10 SPACE di setiap awal paragraph nya, lalu sesuaikan dengan paragraph lain nya. Tepatkanlah KOMA atau TITIK dimana semestinya di tepatkan, jika kalimat tersebut masih bisa digunakan KOMA, makan gunakan lah KOMA, jika kalimat tersebut harus di beri TITIK, maka gunakan lah TITIK. jangan terlalu banyak KOMA maupun TITIK dalam Cerita Character Story kamu.
$Stranger4223$ Posted July 19, 2021 Author Posted July 19, 2021 Sudah saya perbaiki sesuai arahan dari admin tolong periksa kembali.
BADRI Posted July 20, 2021 Posted July 20, 2021 To @victor pelupessyI am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to APPROVE your request. Please read the following guide to activate your link your store to your In-Game account: Sincerely,@mariorianto28JG:RP Staff Team.
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