evanuzielramadhan Posted June 17, 2021 Posted June 17, 2021 Tray Brown Tray was an 18 years old kid, that alive in Chicago in Michigan Boulevard stoner street, he was born in 2003 and he father name Dwayne Brown and he mother name Kelly Brown Tray is the only child of both husband and wife and as a child he already knew how hard life on the streets was because he lived in a place where shootings were frequent,his father is a former gangster leader and his mother is a former gangster, Tray has been working since he was 15 years old as a cashier at a del's shop. he has been trusted by the shop owner, and sometimes there are robberies where he works.When he was little he liked to hang out with his friends where he lived, namely michigan boulevard, his father did not forbid him and there were often shootings where he lived because of that his mother was very worried about Tray but Tray still hung out with them who were gangster disciples or called as Ebk stands for every body killa which has as many enemies as any other dangerous street in Chicago.Since childhood he has a cousin named Jevonte William he originally lived in Compton but he went to Los Santos where he has become a rapper there and is quite well known Tray was invited by Jevonte to go to Los Santos and lived with him in his hood , and Tray was interested in that finally Tray at the age of 18 he was allowed to go to Los Santos and he wanted to make his career as a rapper in Los Santos because there were not many famous rappers there. He finally booked a ticket to Los Santos from Chicago o'hare international airport ,and when Tray arrived at Los Santos international airport he was immediately picked up by Jevonte and his friends in their car and Jevonte and Tray were talking like normal young people and Tray met Jevonte's friends, Bobby Dwayne Arnold Wyters, they got along well during the trip they were hungry and wanted to eat they finally came to McDonald's and when they got there they chatted while eating about Tray's life and what was her goal in Los Santos Tray explain to Jevonte that he wanted to be a rapper and Jevonte offer he studio to help Tray , and Tray was happy to hear that he thanked Jevonte when they finished eating and they hop into car when they were on their way to their hood suddenly there was a shoot out and Jevonte's friends immediately took out their weapons and shot their enemy gang named piru and there was a very tense shooting they finally escaped from their pursuit and got to their hood. When they arrived in the hood they calmed down because they managed to escape safely , and they planned to take revenge because they were very upset at that time , and when in the hood Jevonte talked to Tray to be careful here because it was very dangerous here , and Tray replied calm down I'm used to it at that they both laughed , and Tray was escorted by Jevonte to Tray's boarding house and Tray put his things in the boarding house and at that time Jevonte asked if you have thought about the lyrics you will use for your song? , and Tray said I don't know what to think about it and they went back to the hood and they met other Jevonte's friends, who were young people living around there and there were quite a lot of young people there, and most of them brought weapons and some not yet, and they also met and played basketball in the field behind the hood they had fun there and that's where Tray lives now. Questions Tujuan membuat character story: agar bisa membawa senjata untuk membantu pull up Account UCP yang saya miliki: evanuzielramadhan Account Forum yang saya miliki:evanuzielramadhan Berapa lama saya sudah main di JGRP: Kurang dari 1 bulan Saya biasa main JGRP di: Hanya di rumah Saya evanuzielramadhan selaku pemilik account UCP evanuzielramadhan bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Tray Brown) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain. Note : kemarin saya tidak bisa online karna sedang di perjalanan pulang ke rumah dan tidak bisa online pc saya karena ada kesibukan pribadi.
BADRI Posted June 17, 2021 Posted June 17, 2021 Halo brader.. @evanuzielramadhan Saya mengecek Character Stories kamu, Silahkan jawab pertanyaan dibawah. 1. Sebutkan berapa UCP yang kamu miliki. 2. Character yang kamu mainkan ini level berapa ? 3. Apakah CS yang kamu buat sudah 300 kata ? 4. Apakah CS yang kamu ini hasil dari kamu sendiri atau meng-Copy CS milik orang lain? 5. Apakah nama Character kamu dan nama UCP kamu sudah benar? (biasanya, kalo salah di antara kedua tersebut, pas di masukin CS nya ke UCP itu suka ga bisa, jadi tolong pastikan kembali Nama Character dan nama UCP nya benar.) 6. Kamu main dimana? Rumah apa main di Warnet? Note: Selagi dalam pemeriksaan, cobalah kamu periksa kembali Character Story kamu, siapa tahu saja ada kesalahan disana, jika ada kesalahan maka perbaikilah dan kalo belum di respon CS nya, mohon bersabar ya kakak, pasti di respon kok.
evanuzielramadhan Posted June 18, 2021 Author Posted June 18, 2021 1. Sebutkan berapa UCP yang kamu miliki = 1 2. Character yang kamu mainkan ini level berapa ? 4 3. Apakah CS yang kamu buat sudah 300 kata ? sudah 4. Apakah CS yang kamu ini hasil dari kamu sendiri atau meng-Copy CS milik orang lain? tidak saya buat sendiri 5. Apakah nama Character kamu dan nama UCP kamu sudah benar? (biasanya, kalo salah di antara kedua tersebut, pas di masukin CS nya ke UCP itu suka ga bisa, jadi tolong pastikan kembali Nama Character dan nama UCP nya benar.) = sudah benar evanuzielramadhan 6. Kamu main dimana? Rumah apa main di Warnet? Rumah Saja.
BADRI Posted June 19, 2021 Posted June 19, 2021 @evanuzielramadhan Perbaiki kembali: Setelah di beri KOMA, itu di tambahkan SPACE, jangan di sambung. Contoh: kid,that > kid, that | Jika kamu melihat yang seperti ini dalam cerita CS mu di atas, maka perbaiki lah. Photo nya terlalu besar gambar nya, silahkan di kecilkan lagi lalu tepatkan di tengah-tengah photo nya. Berikan 5 atau 10 SPACE di setiap awal paragraph nya, lalu sesuaikan dengan paragraph lain nya. Tepatkanlah KOMA atau TITIK dimana semestinya di tepatkan, jika kalimat tersebut masih bisa digunakan KOMA, makan gunakan lah KOMA, jika kalimat tersebut harus di beri TITIK, maka gunakan lah TITIK. jangan terlalu banyak KOMA maupun TITIK dalam Cerita Character Story kamu.
evanuzielramadhan Posted June 19, 2021 Author Posted June 19, 2021 (edited) 12 jam yang lalu, mariorianto28 said: @evanuzielramadhan Perbaiki kembali: Setelah di beri KOMA, itu di tambahkan SPACE, jangan di sambung. Contoh: kid,that > kid, that | Jika kamu melihat yang seperti ini dalam cerita CS mu di atas, maka perbaiki lah. Photo nya terlalu besar gambar nya, silahkan di kecilkan lagi lalu tepatkan di tengah-tengah photo nya. Berikan 5 atau 10 SPACE di setiap awal paragraph nya, lalu sesuaikan dengan paragraph lain nya. Tepatkanlah KOMA atau TITIK dimana semestinya di tepatkan, jika kalimat tersebut masih bisa digunakan KOMA, makan gunakan lah KOMA, jika kalimat tersebut harus di beri TITIK, maka gunakan lah TITIK. jangan terlalu banyak KOMA maupun TITIK dalam Cerita Character Story kamu. Sudah bang 1. Sudah 2. Sudah, tetapi tidak bisa di ke tengahin bang saya sudah coba pakai yang diatas maalh tambah ke kanan 3. Akan merusak paraghrap nya bang. 4. Sudah Edited June 19, 2021 by evanuzielramadhan Membenarkan jawaban
BADRI Posted June 20, 2021 Posted June 20, 2021 To @evanuzielramadhanI am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to APPROVE your request. Please read the following guide to activate your link your store to your In-Game account: Sincerely,@mariorianto28JG:RP Staff Team.
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