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[CN] Keshaun_Lowell to Jaydee Brackston (JUANCHM123)


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UCP Name: JUANCHM123

Old Character: Keshaun_Lowell

Old Character Story:

 

 


New Character: Jaydee Brackston

Gender: Laki-laki (Male)

Origin: African

 


Reason for name change request:

di CK paksa dari Fam.

 

Screenshots of '/myid' and '/mp':

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/MYID /KETIKADI JAIL
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CK Story:

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          One sunny day, precisely in the morning, someone named Keshaun Lowell went to sleep, he was 20 years old at that time the clock was at "07.30" an alarm sounded. Keshaun woke up from his sleep and walked towards the kitchen he washed his face. he was hungry, when he finished washing his face he walked to the bathroom after showering he also put on clothes, when all activities at home were finished Keshaun walked towards the exit to buy food at a nearby restaurant using his Merit car.

          That time when Keshaun started his car engine he was shocked after seeing black smoke coming out of his hood, Keshaun decided to take his car to Mechanic City when he arrived he called an old friend who works as a mechanic to come to MC because with the intention to Cheap repair price from his friend, while waiting for his friend to arrive, Keshaun's big enemy came to kill him, Keshaun very quickly got on the damaged car to be used to run when he thought he had lost visuals from his enemy he walked to the nearest restaurant when until the restaurant Keshaun walked inside and ordered food, when Keshaun had ordered food Keshaun heard the sound of a perennial car in front of the door of the restaurant Keshaun was hiding in the restaurant when the criminals had entered Keshaun tricked them by placing a very large stuffed toy in front of the door very well the plan worked da n Keshaun escaped by running away by running.

          When he felt the situation was safe, Keshaun walked to his house to calm down when he tried to walk down the small alleys he was surprised to see the lights of the enemy's car that belonged to Keshaun at that time he immediately ran as fast as possible to the nearest police station because it was considered day Unfortunately for Keshaun, he was stumbled by a large rock which broke his right leg. He was also walking slowly as fast as seconds. The criminal had arrived behind Keshaun. He immediately fell down to ask the perpetrator to let him go but the perpetrator did not have a conscience. He shot Keshaun very hard. blindly with that shot through Keshaun's body which was hit by 2 .99 bullets and Keshaun was taken with them in a car and they took Keshaun to the furthest sea in the city and threw Keshaun into the ocean and unfortunately Keshaun died very sadly.

 

CK Screenshots:

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Posted
  • Harap melampirkan bukti screenshot '/mp' dengan layar penuh tanpa dipotong, serta terdapat tanggal dan waktu yang dapat kamu akses dari '/hudmode'.
  • Gunakan format paragraf Justify atau rata kiri-kanan pada cerita CK.
  • Berikan 10 spasi pada setiap awal paragraf.
  • Perbaiki lagi kesalahan pada penggunaan huruf kapital, awal kalimat terlebih awal paragraf itu gunakan huruf kapital terus juga 'Unfortunately' itu tidak perlu pakai huruf kapital. 
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22 minutes ago, deananugerah said:
  • Harap melampirkan bukti screenshot '/mp' dengan layar penuh tanpa dipotong, serta terdapat tanggal dan waktu yang dapat kamu akses dari '/hudmode'.
  • Gunakan format paragraf Justify atau rata kiri-kanan pada cerita CK.
  • Berikan 10 spasi pada setiap awal paragraf.
  • Perbaiki lagi kesalahan pada penggunaan huruf kapital, awal kalimat terlebih awal paragraf itu gunakan huruf kapital terus juga 'Unfortunately' itu tidak perlu pakai huruf kapital. 

1. itu  yang mp saya kira harus kosong min makanya saya pake yang lama ini yang baru saya ambil min, ga sempet jual karena di ckin paksa

2. done.

3. done jga min.

3. itu sudah min.

Posted

Nggak bisa, '/mp' harus dalam kondisi kosong. Silahkan jual dahulu dan pastikan bukti screenshot '/mp' kamu dalam keadaan kosong. Itu sudah menjadi regulasi dalam changename request. 

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