LilCatastrophe21 Posted June 10, 2021 Posted June 10, 2021 (edited) Andrea_Deandre In a new days dawn and it's the 21th of July, 1999, in the cold winter nights, in a special hospital in the middle of New York City. There was a new child had opened his both eyes into the world, his father who was from a family from one of the richest in his town, the family that has an endless tree, named on the town itself. Raymond DeAndre decided to call his new baby, Andrea, Andrea DeAndre. Here, the story begins. Nothing much to say about the childhood period of the little Andrea, the real life starts on teenager that what Andrea has always believed of and as dreamed, he had ambitions to fly away from his town, he hated being in that lifestyle, he'd loved to suffer in his life, earn what he really deserves. He even had no pictures as a child, and that made him happy til now, where he doesn't remember those times. His lifestyle was nothing but just a little boy who goes to school, does his homework, learning music, playing football at his town club. Nothing more, and nothing less. Here where we proceed to the next stage, the teenager stage. Andrea was a teenager who had brilliant skills in a lot of matters, during high school time, he learned some mechanical skills, and he kept going on music, where he decided he'd be a perfect rockstar, along with his most favorite bands, like Nirvana, as Kurt Cobain was his idol. Andrea decided to drift wide with education, and not to put only one target, since he was a boy with the ability to multi-task, he could study mechanism, music and commerce, only with background information until he entered the college. Andrea was also obsessed with cars, so he aimed his future to have his dreaming car, a Nissan GT. While raising up during his teen ages. His dad died and the DeAndre's family became kinda dirty and got rid of him and his mother. Since his older brother was already away, making his career in Germany, there was no choice for Andrea but to carry up his mother. So he decided to leave the education right after High School, and that was in 2017, Andrea was 17 years old that time. Andrea that time started working as a Helper Chef in some low class restaurants, where he had no full time job. Besides that, he started taking courses in multiple fields, which were Mechanism, Commerce and decided to continue self teaching in the Music field. Until the teenager stage ended in his life, and at the end of his 18th year, his brother came back with a good wealth to carry up his mother, and helped Andrea to move up to a new place to try living on his own, so he went to Brazil. Right after moving to Brazil, Andrea started hooking up his learnt skills to earn some cash so he can start developing his life. Since he was already making a good fitness body in New York, when he moved to Brazil, he never stopped it. During the year he lived in Brazil, he knew most of drugs, and its pure materials. He had enough information about weapons, and he kept searching to develop his mind, and know how to interact with people there in that community. Just in one year, he learnt all his skills practical, he knew how to use most kinds of weapons, and how to be the perfect "Car rider" to achieve his ambitions that lasted for years. All his skills were useful for him to have a fair life in the Brazil. During his time there, he started his first relationship. He had a beautiful girl in his life, where he managed to protect her, and make her one of the happiest humans on the planet, since he earned enough money to go for this responsibility, and due to his perfect mind and his lots of interactions with all kinds of people, he knew how to get a blackmarket weapon to protect himself and his girl. His life in Brazil was beautiful, but nothing lasts forever. As usual, a day where they were both returning from a week-end night, driving home in his ride, they had intercepted an accident which had results full of pain. The accident caused the death of his girl, and since the accident was caused by someones' else fault, Andrea felt the most failure and pain in his life due to the feeling of not being able to help and save his girlfriend. Fortunately, Andrea could survive the accident with no serious injuries since the hit came into the passenger seat, but his serious injuries were in his head, where his mind didn't stop thinking of his love, and his heart was all damaged due to this. As Andrea's character is kinda strong, he managed to not stop training to keep his body fit, at least he didn't feel to get another loss. The relationship lasted for 10 months, but for him, it felt like 10 years, a day in his relationship is equal to a year in the normal relationships, it was a special case, a special one for him. One day, Andrea decided that he should focus on his life, and he thought of moving to another place where he can make a new start. He realized that it was a fact, not just an idea. So he decided to move to a place where he literally know no one there. The city of freedom, Los Santos. Now, Andrea can really have a new start, in the lasts of his 21st year, he lives in Los Santos. But with what version of Andrea? The fake one that he shows to the people, as usual? Or the real version of Andrea. Andrea will never show his real version, until the whole country knows, that Andrea has appeared on its lands. Since he knows his worth very well, a guy with professional skills in multiple fields, and still a low aged guy, he knows how to choose wisely how to live, and with who. Dear people, welcome to the world of Andrea DeAndre. After 1 year of moving to his new home, Los Santos, Andrea had a rough beginning, where he felt like that he's in a place outside the whole world. He started up his career as a trucker until he finishes his courses in Pilot Engineering. During those days he started to get familiar with a crew where he started to hit the streets roughly, in a dirty path. Then he managed to keep up his career and started making money, buying a car which he always dreamed of, the Nissan GT. Months went normally, until a sudden day came to Andrea where he figured out that he was just helping his crew to take down some targets, he was just helping some murderers. Andrea had no choice but to keep it up as a secret, and he was awarded for that as well. Those were times where happy wasn't happy at all, since he didn't feel satisfied for being at that side. Then, he decided to drift wide and shift up his career, where he decided to apply for the PD, at least to make a new clean career. That's what he calls "The shift up" where he felt satisfied at that position. Questions Tujuan membuat character story: Agar dapat menjalankan roleplay dengan character development yang kuat dan baik. Account UCP yang saya miliki: LilCatastrophe21 Account Forum yang saya miliki:LilCatastrophe21 Berapa lama saya sudah main di JGRP: Kurang dari 1 bulan Saya biasa main JGRP di: Hanya di rumah Saya LilCatastrophe21 selaku pemilik account UCP LilCatastrophe21 bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Andrea_Deandre) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain. Edited June 13, 2021 by LilCatastrophe21
BADRI Posted June 10, 2021 Posted June 10, 2021 Halo brader.. @LilCatastrophe21 Saya mengecek Character Stories kamu, Silahkan jawab pertanyaan dibawah. 1. Sebutkan berapa UCP yang kamu miliki. 2. Character yang kamu mainkan ini level berapa ? 3. Apakah CS yang kamu buat sudah 300 kata ? 4. Apakah CS yang kamu ini hasil dari kamu sendiri atau meng-Copy CS milik orang lain? 5. Apakah nama Character kamu dan nama UCP kamu sudah benar? (biasanya, kalo salah di antara kedua tersebut, pas di masukin CS nya ke UCP itu suka ga bisa, jadi tolong pastikan kembali Nama Character dan nama UCP nya benar.) 6. Kamu main dimana? Rumah apa main di Warnet? Note: Selagi dalam pemeriksaan, cobalah kamu periksa kembali Character Story kamu, siapa tahu saja ada kesalahan disana, jika ada kesalahan maka perbaikilah dan kalo belum di respon CS nya, mohon bersabar ya kakak, pasti di respon kok.
LilCatastrophe21 Posted June 10, 2021 Author Posted June 10, 2021 44 minutes ago, mariorianto28 said: Halo brader.. @LilCatastrophe21 Saya mengecek Character Stories kamu, Silahkan jawab pertanyaan dibawah. 1. Sebutkan berapa UCP yang kamu miliki. 2. Character yang kamu mainkan ini level berapa ? 3. Apakah CS yang kamu buat sudah 300 kata ? 4. Apakah CS yang kamu ini hasil dari kamu sendiri atau meng-Copy CS milik orang lain? 5. Apakah nama Character kamu dan nama UCP kamu sudah benar? (biasanya, kalo salah di antara kedua tersebut, pas di masukin CS nya ke UCP itu suka ga bisa, jadi tolong pastikan kembali Nama Character dan nama UCP nya benar.) 6. Kamu main dimana? Rumah apa main di Warnet? Note: Selagi dalam pemeriksaan, cobalah kamu periksa kembali Character Story kamu, siapa tahu saja ada kesalahan disana, jika ada kesalahan maka perbaikilah dan kalo belum di respon CS nya, mohon bersabar ya kakak, pasti di respon kok. Hallo min! izin menjawab: 1. satu, hanya LilCatastrophe21 2. Level 3 3. Sudah 4. Hasil karya sendiri 5. Sudah benar, LilCatastrophe21 dengan Nickname Andrea_Deandre 6. Rumah
BADRI Posted June 11, 2021 Posted June 11, 2021 @LilCatastrophe21 Perbaiki kembali: Gunakan rata kanan kiri, bukan rata tengah ataupun bukan rata kiri. (Rata Kanan Kiri: ) Berikan 5 atau 10 SPACE di setiap awal paragraph nya, lalu sesuaikan dengan paragraph lain nya. Tepatkanlah KOMA atau TITIK dimana semestinya di tepatkan, jika kalimat tersebut masih bisa digunakan KOMA, makan gunakan lah KOMA, jika kalimat tersebut harus di beri TITIK, maka gunakan lah TITIK. jangan terlalu banyak KOMA maupun TITIK dalam Cerita Character Story kamu.
LilCatastrophe21 Posted June 12, 2021 Author Posted June 12, 2021 17 hours ago, mariorianto28 said: @LilCatastrophe21 Perbaiki kembali: Gunakan rata kanan kiri, bukan rata tengah ataupun bukan rata kiri. (Rata Kanan Kiri: ) Berikan 5 atau 10 SPACE di setiap awal paragraph nya, lalu sesuaikan dengan paragraph lain nya. Tepatkanlah KOMA atau TITIK dimana semestinya di tepatkan, jika kalimat tersebut masih bisa digunakan KOMA, makan gunakan lah KOMA, jika kalimat tersebut harus di beri TITIK, maka gunakan lah TITIK. jangan terlalu banyak KOMA maupun TITIK dalam Cerita Character Story kamu. Edited, terimakasih telah mengoreksi min!
BADRI Posted June 13, 2021 Posted June 13, 2021 @LilCatastrophe21 Perbaiki kembali: Untuk kata kata berikut ini di hapus atau On 6/10/2021 at 2:44 AM, LilCatastrophe21 said: A Teenager On 6/10/2021 at 2:44 AM, LilCatastrophe21 said: An Adult On 6/10/2021 at 2:44 AM, LilCatastrophe21 said: A New Start. di satukan saja kedalam paragraf nya: On 6/10/2021 at 2:44 AM, LilCatastrophe21 said: The Birth On 6/10/2021 at 2:44 AM, LilCatastrophe21 said: Childhood
LilCatastrophe21 Posted June 13, 2021 Author Posted June 13, 2021 42 minutes ago, mariorianto28 said: @LilCatastrophe21 Perbaiki kembali: Untuk kata kata berikut ini di hapus atau di satukan saja kedalam paragraf nya: Okee sudah yaa min
BADRI Posted June 14, 2021 Posted June 14, 2021 To @LilCatastrophe21I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to APPROVE your request. Please read the following guide to activate your link your store to your In-Game account: Sincerely,@mariorianto28JG:RP Staff Team.
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