gael_15111 Posted June 2, 2021 Posted June 2, 2021 Davion_Love Davion "Davy" Love was born on November 15, 2003, in Downtown, Los Santos, San Andreas. He was raised by his parents in a house in the Midtown area. His father is a paramedic in Saint General Hospital and his mother is a fast food restaurant employee. When Davion was 5 years old, he and his father started learning skateboarding at a skatepark next to the County General Hospital. During one year of learning to skateboarding, Davion began to show his abilities, he began to play in the skatepark without supervision from his father again. Davion spent all his playing time skateboarding until when he was 13, his father died of a heart attack. This was the worst moment for Davion, he decided to stop skateboarding since his father's death. Time passed, Davion's economic life began to decline because his mothers income was not enough to pay monthly bills and others. Her mother decided to sell her house and move into a housing project in the Midtown area. Moving to a housing project changed Davion's life, when he was 14 years old, he began to become an independent and hardworking person, he worked in a grocery store. Life in a housing project made him affiliated with a local street gang and got a new family. Davion began to be initiated into street gang activities such as street fights, drug trafficking, and drug abuse. Davion has a habit of consuming purple drank. Davion gets a lucrative profit from selling Sativa and so on. Davion is power-oriented and likes to fight for fame. Davion goes about his daily life with friends in his housing project who are also members of the local gang. Turning 17, Davion bought a second-hand Toyota Camry using the dirty money he had accumulated since the age of 14. Once a week, he fights one on one with local youths which is held regularly at crips hood, this activity is called Thunderdomes. Questions Tujuan membuat character story: Character development. Account UCP yang saya miliki: Gael_1511 Account Forum yang saya miliki:gael_15111 Berapa lama saya sudah main di JGRP: 6 bulan - 1 tahun Saya biasa main JGRP di: Hanya di rumah Saya gael_15111 selaku pemilik account UCP Gael_1511 bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Davion_Love) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.
BADRI Posted June 2, 2021 Posted June 2, 2021 Halo brader.. @gael_15111 Saya mengecek Character Stories kamu, Silahkan jawab pertanyaan dibawah. 1. Sebutkan berapa UCP yang kamu miliki. 2. Character yang kamu mainkan ini level berapa ? 3. Apakah CS yang kamu buat sudah 300 kata ? 4. Apakah CS yang kamu ini hasil dari kamu sendiri atau meng-Copy CS milik orang lain? 5. Apakah nama Character kamu dan nama UCP kamu sudah benar? (biasanya, kalo salah di antara kedua tersebut, pas di masukin CS nya ke UCP itu suka ga bisa, jadi tolong pastikan kembali Nama Character dan nama UCP nya benar.) 6. Kamu main dimana? Rumah apa main di Warnet? Note: Selagi dalam pemeriksaan, cobalah kamu periksa kembali Character Story kamu, siapa tahu saja ada kesalahan disana, jika ada kesalahan maka perbaikilah dan kalo belum di respon CS nya, mohon bersabar ya kakak, pasti di respon kok.
gael_15111 Posted June 2, 2021 Author Posted June 2, 2021 1. Hanya satu UCP. 2. Level 3. 3. Ya sudah 300 kata. 4. Hasil dari pemikiran sendiri. 5. Davion_Love, UCP : Gael_1511 6. Di rumah.
BADRI Posted June 3, 2021 Posted June 3, 2021 @gael_15111 Fix again: The third paragraph is added with the same number of stories as the previous paragraph. In the first paragraph there are still words that are wrong. One of which is: skate park > skatepark Put a comma in the following sentence: when he was 14 years old he began to become > when he was 14 years old, he began to become
gael_15111 Posted June 3, 2021 Author Posted June 3, 2021 @mariorianto28 Done, please check it again.
BADRI Posted June 4, 2021 Posted June 4, 2021 To @gael_15111I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to APPROVE your request. Please read the following guide to activate your link your store to your In-Game account: Sincerely,@mariorianto28JG:RP Staff Team.
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