bastra Posted May 18, 2021 Posted May 18, 2021 Marlo_Cruz Marlo Cruz is a nineteen years old teenager, he is a local in Eastside Los Santos. Marlo has a Mexican blood in his self, his father is an imigrant from Tapachula and his mother is the one who live in East Side of Losantos during her lifetime, altough he is a local in ELS, his nationality is still a Mexican. In his family, Marlo is a second kids, he had a older brother, and one younger sister. His older brother is down for the local gang in Eastside of Los Santos, but he didn't want to Marlo take the same way as him, he always told Marlo to go to college and live normally. The younger sister is still in high school, she is take her study at Pasadena High School, which is she is a minority on there, most of the Pasadena Highschool's student is a black people, that is what made Marlo and his brother always look after his sister. Marlo's life is normal enough, just like the most of a teenager that taking college, the different is, while his college friend is already seperate from their parents, Marlo is still live at his parents house. this is not without the reason, this is because his parents don't want to Marlo got affected by his neighbourhood, just like his brother did. Marlo's life is smooth untill one thing happened, Marlo's beloved brother got arrested by the police while he is selling a drugs on the street. His brother got asentence to two years and transferred him to the San Andreas Correctional Facility (SACF) prison. After his brother got arrested, Marlo got little sad about what happened, that is make his study got a little messy too, because what's happened is affected to Marlo mentallity. Marlo's college life is start messed up, he didn't attend to the class that he in, he also didn't do the work from his lecturer, and many bad things happened to him. From that thing, Marlo thinking about had a free time, which mean he is the one who settle his own life, and he is the one who's responsible too. After talking to his parents, Marlo decided to leave his house and move to La Blue Garden in Eastern Los Santos. one and another reason that he moved to there's because of in La Blue Garden there's whole lotta immigrant from Mexico whose moving to that place, and mostly kids who hanging on Blue Garden is a teenager and as college student from San Pedro University. Questions Tujuan membuat character story: Dapat melakukan RP sesuai Character Story Account UCP yang saya miliki: bastra Account Forum yang saya miliki:bastra Berapa lama saya sudah main di JGRP: 3 - 6 bulan Saya biasa main JGRP di: Hanya di rumah Saya bastra selaku pemilik account UCP bastra bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Marlo_Cruz) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.
$deananugerah$ Posted May 18, 2021 Posted May 18, 2021 Saya deananugerah yang akan mengoreksi thread Character Stories anda, selagi saya mengoreksi Character Story anda akan ada beberapa hal yang akan saya tanyakan kepada anda. Silahkan dijawab beberapa pertanyaan dibawah ini: Berapa UCP yang anda miliki? Apakah anda memiliki UCP yang lain? Level berapa karakter anda saat ini? Apakah Character Stories yang anda buat sudah 300 kata? Anda biasa bermain dimana, di rumah atau di warnet? Harap perhatikan petunjuk dibawah ini! Gunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Calibri, atau Tahoma),Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri. Berikan sekitar 5 sampai 10 spasi pada setiap awal paragraf. Pastikan anda sudah menggunakan formulir untuk character stories. Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standard bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme (silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: http://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ )
bastra Posted May 18, 2021 Author Posted May 18, 2021 Just now, deananugerah said: Berapa UCP yang anda miliki? Apakah anda memiliki UCP yang lain? Level berapa karakter anda saat ini? Apakah Character Stories yang anda buat sudah 300 kata? Anda biasa bermain dimana, di rumah atau di warnet? -satu -tidak -10 -sudah lebdih dari 300 kata - di rumah
$deananugerah$ Posted May 18, 2021 Posted May 18, 2021 To @bastraI am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to APPROVE your request. Please read the following guide to activate your link your store to your In-Game account: Sincerely,@deananugerahJG:RP Staff Team.
Recommended Posts