pending Jason_Amosa [me008]

[me008]

Jason_Amosa

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             This is Jason Amosa. Born and raised in Hawaii in 28^th of July, 1985 from the love of his parents, Chris Amosa and Mary Momasi. He loves to surf and dance as a young kid, his father teaches a lot of skills to Jason because he is a smart kid. He can easily learn a new skill and young Jason spent most of his childhood accompanied by his father. Besides hunting a fish, Jason learnt some traditional Hawaiian martial arts also from his father, Kapu Kuialua. Jason uses this technique when hunting down some wild animals in the jungle and protecting the family when there is some riots. Because, people from his village often fights for getting fish allocation.

 

            One day, Jason's father went missing when he was hunting the fish alone. Jason decides to travel the ocean looking for his father. At first, his mother forbid Jason to look after his father because she doesn't want to lose another family. But Jason won't listen his mother's words and start his journey to find his father.

 

            But the plan didn't work out as it should, there is a big storm and Jason couldn't handle it. His raft was drowned. He tried to safe himself but the storm was too big that the ocean waves sweep him to Santa Maria Beach. After he gains his consciousness, he looked around and realizing that maybe he could find his father there, in the city of Los Santos with all of his learned skill. He used all of his ability to survive in the city of Los Santos, living the city life which is not familliar to Jason's previous life back in the Hawaii. Because of his quick learning ability, he could keep up the pace with the people of Los Santos, gathering piece by piece information of his Father whereabouts.

 

 

 

 

 

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Questions

Tujuan membuat character story:
Memperjelas status Jason_Amosa dan menjalankan RP

 

Account UCP yang saya miliki:
me008

 

Account Forum yang saya miliki:
me008

 

Berapa lama saya sudah main di JGRP:
Kurang dari 1 bulan

 

Saya biasa main JGRP di:
Hanya di rumah

 

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Saya me008 selaku pemilik account UCP me008 bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Jason_Amosa) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

Edited May 19, 2021 by me008

[$SilumanUlar$]

Halo, Sebelum saya respon Character Story kamu, dimohon untuk jawab pertanyaan dibawah ini dengan jujur:

1. Berapa level karakter kamu saat ini?
2. Apakah UCP kamu sudah sinkron/sesuai ? agar proses Character Story bisa berjalan lancar
3. Apakah kamu mempunyai UCP lebih dari satu?
4. Dipastikan kamu memahami peraturan sebelum membuat Character Story, Apakah sudah membacanya?
5. Bersediakah kamu di banned account permanent jika kamu ketahuan Copy-Paste Character Story?

[me008]

7 minutes ago, GulaGula said:

Halo, Sebelum saya respon Character Story kamu, dimohon untuk jawab pertanyaan dibawah ini dengan jujur:

1. Berapa level karakter kamu saat ini?
2. Apakah UCP kamu sudah sinkron/sesuai ? agar proses Character Story bisa berjalan lancar
3. Apakah kamu mempunyai UCP lebih dari satu?
4. Dipastikan kamu memahami peraturan sebelum membuat Character Story, Apakah sudah membacanya?
5. Bersediakah kamu di banned account permanent jika kamu ketahuan Copy-Paste Character Story?

1. Level 3.

2. Sudah.

3. Tidak.

4. Sudah.

5. Bersedia.

Edited May 17, 2021 by me008

[$SilumanUlar$]

Jelaskan secara jujur UCP milik siapa yang ada ada bawah ini:

1. kvjul
2. fraternityy

[me008]

55 minutes ago, GulaGula said:

Jelaskan secara jujur UCP milik siapa yang ada ada bawah ini:

1. kvjul
2. fraternityy

Kedua ucp tersebut sudah tidak terpakai, tolong didelete saja. Terima kasih

[$SilumanUlar$]



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To @me008

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to PENDING your request.

Reasoning for said denial is listed below:

1. Photo size too big. Reduce it with normal size.
2. he gain. The verb should probably end in "-s", e.g.: she works here, he does more than his share. Another possibility would be to use a past form, e.g.: She wrote me a letter.
3. alot Write a lot, e.g.: There were a lot of people at the party.
4. handle it, his raft was drowned. This appears to be a comma splice. I suggest you replace the comma with a period and start a new sentence.

 

I wish you the best of luck in the future.

Sincerely,

@GulaGula
JG:RP Staff Team

[me008]

1 hour ago, GulaGula said:



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To @me008

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to PENDING your request.

Reasoning for said denial is listed below:

1. Photo size too big. Reduce it with normal size.
2. he gain. The verb should probably end in "-s", e.g.: she works here, he does more than his share. Another possibility would be to use a past form, e.g.: She wrote me a letter.
3. alot Write a lot, e.g.: There were a lot of people at the party.
4. handle it, his raft was drowned. This appears to be a comma splice. I suggest you replace the comma with a period and start a new sentence.

 

I wish you the best of luck in the future.

Sincerely,

@GulaGula
JG:RP Staff Team

Done. Please check it again. Thanks

[$SilumanUlar$]

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To @me008

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to APPROVE your request. Please read the following guide to activate your link your store to your In-Game account:

 

Sincerely,

@GulaGula
JG:RP Staff Team.