Farrel_Putra Posted May 17, 2021 Posted May 17, 2021 Lamonte_Mashawn Lamonte Mashawn was born on August 28, 2001, in the Washington District of Columbia, he was born in a wealthy and very affluent family, Lamonte has a younger brother named Alexander Mashawn. He and his sister are not like the usual brother-sister relationship, Lamonte and Alexander hate each other because Lamonte's mother gives more his affection for Alexander, while Lamonte's father gave more affection to him because of that they fought each other since childhood. One day Lamonte was called by his father to go to the city of Los Santos to start a new life in Los Santos because his father wanted Lamonte to live independently, then Lamonte agreed to his father's request to go to the city of Los Santos. Before leaving, Lamonte's father gave Lamonte some money for living expenses in Los Santos and plane tickets, Lamonte went to Los Santos. After arriving in Los Santos, Lamonte booked a hotel for him to stay temporarily after booking a hotel for him to stay. Now he wants to take a walk in the city of Los Santos, when he was walking suddenly someone nudged him and his cellphone fell and that person took his cellphone. Lamonte then gave it back to Lava and apologized to him. Lamonte only nodded and then asked who the name of the person who nudged him ?, the person answered his name was Lavaughn Boujettif because Lamonte was confused about his very difficult name. Lavaughn gave the nickname "Lava" to make it easier to call his name, Lava asked Lamonte whose name was ?, Lamonte answered that his name was Lamonte Mashawn and was often called "Monte" then Lava asked if he had been in Los Santos for a long time. Lamonte replied that he had just moved to Los Santos, Lava was surprised then gave his phone number to Lamonte then told him that he had to leave because of a sudden business. After that Lamonte went back to his hotel to sleep because he was already feeling very tired, before going to bed Lamonte forgot to save the Lava number after saving the Lava number, he went straight to sleep. Questions Tujuan membuat character story: Untuk membuka fitur-fitur di JGRP yang belum bisa dibuka. Account UCP yang saya miliki: Hanya ZlionCrush Account Forum yang saya miliki:Farrel_Putra Berapa lama saya sudah main di JGRP: 6 bulan - 1 tahun Saya biasa main JGRP di: Hanya di rumah Saya Farrel_Putra selaku pemilik account UCP ZlionCrush bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Lamonte_Mashawn) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.
FTWheels Posted May 17, 2021 Posted May 17, 2021 Hallo, sebelum saya review lebih lanjut perihal character story anda, mohon jawab beberapa pertanyaan dibawah ini secara jujur:1. Sebutkan level karakter anda saat ini?2. Adakah UCP lain yang kamu miliki? 3. Apakah Character Story kamu sudah melebihi dari 300 kata?4. Apakah CS yang kamu ini hasil dari kamu sendiri atau meng-Copy CS milik orang lain?5. Apakah nama Character kamu dan nama UCP kamu sudah benar? (biasanya, kalo salah di antara kedua tersebut, pas di masukin CS nya ke UCP itu suka ga bisa, jadi tolong pastikan kembali Nama Character dan nama UCP nya benar.)
Farrel_Putra Posted May 17, 2021 Author Posted May 17, 2021 2 minutes ago, rafiaziizi said: Hallo, sebelum saya review lebih lanjut perihal character story anda, mohon jawab beberapa pertanyaan dibawah ini secara jujur:1. Sebutkan level karakter anda saat ini?2. Adakah UCP lain yang kamu miliki? 3. Apakah Character Story kamu sudah melebihi dari 300 kata?4. Apakah CS yang kamu ini hasil dari kamu sendiri atau meng-Copy CS milik orang lain?5. Apakah nama Character kamu dan nama UCP kamu sudah benar? (biasanya, kalo salah di antara kedua tersebut, pas di masukin CS nya ke UCP itu suka ga bisa, jadi tolong pastikan kembali Nama Character dan nama UCP nya benar.) Level 19 Tidak Ya Saya bikinnya sendiri Sudah
FTWheels Posted May 17, 2021 Posted May 17, 2021 Beberapa list yang perlu diperbaiki dalam Character Story kamu :- Foto diperkecil. - "Alexander Mashawn he and" ( berikan titik setelah "Mashawn" ) - "relationship Lamonte" ( Berikan koma setelah "relationship" ) - "Lamonte's father gave Lamonte a little money" ( Rubah menjadi "Lamonte's father gave him some money" ) - "After arriving in Los Santos Lamonte" ( Berikan koma setelah "Los Santos" ) - "stay now he wants" ( Berikan titik setelah kata "stay" dan berikan huruf kapital pada kata "now" apabila menggunakan titik. ) - " Los Santos when he" ( Berikan koma setelah kata "Los Santos" ) - "called "Monte then" ( Kutipnya kurang satu setelah "Monte" ) - "sudden business after" ( Berikan titik setelah "Business" dan berikan huruf kapital pada kata "after" )
Farrel_Putra Posted May 17, 2021 Author Posted May 17, 2021 10 minutes ago, rafiaziizi said: Beberapa list yang perlu diperbaiki dalam Character Story kamu :- Foto diperkecil. - "Alexander Mashawn he and" ( berikan titik setelah "Mashawn" ) - "relationship Lamonte" ( Berikan koma setelah "relationship" ) - "Lamonte's father gave Lamonte a little money" ( Rubah menjadi "Lamonte's father gave him some money" ) - "After arriving in Los Santos Lamonte" ( Berikan koma setelah "Los Santos" ) - "stay now he wants" ( Berikan titik setelah kata "stay" dan berikan huruf kapital pada kata "now" apabila menggunakan titik. ) - " Los Santos when he" ( Berikan koma setelah kata "Los Santos" ) - "called "Monte then" ( Kutipnya kurang satu setelah "Monte" ) - "sudden business after" ( Berikan titik setelah "Business" dan berikan huruf kapital pada kata "after" ) Sudah saya edit min, silahkan di check.
FTWheels Posted May 17, 2021 Posted May 17, 2021 To @Farrel_PutraI am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to APPROVE your request. Please read the following guide to activate your link your store to your In-Game account: Sincerely,@rafiaziiziJG:RP Staff Team.
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