Coca_Cola Posted May 1, 2021 Posted May 1, 2021 (edited) Yajeez_Kashim One day there lived a child named Yajeez Kashim who was the son of Abdul Kashim, his father and his mother named Charlotte Attella. Yajeez Kashim was born in the town of Los Santos at his home on the 415th street of San Pedro. Yajeez Kashim is usually called by his friends Jayzee. Jayzee was born into a family that arguably found it difficult to educate her children and could be very wealthy. So Jayzee is very disciplined with all the rules. But things got different when her birth mother died and her father remarried. Jayzee becomes a bad boy every place because of her father's unfavorable behavior for him. When Jayzee not happy with his father's behavior, he likes playing games, he meet a friend on game, he like to play together until midnight, then her stepmother likes to get angry and beat Jayzee. One day while Jayzee was at school, there was a gang of students who could be thugs challenging Jayzee. Not knowing why, they just go to Jayzee and nudge him until Jayzee falls. Jayzee's anger increases, they have a chance to complain with the thug. Jayzee clenched his fist and hit the thugs who grabbed him. The fight between the thug and Jayzee lasted long enough, and eventually the teachers came to separate them. Jayzee and the thug were taken to the teacher's room for interrogation. After they had finished the interrogation, they were expelled from the school for creating a riot in the school environment, Jayzee was very upset and very sad, he planned to fight again with the thug outside of school, but when he was about to fight again at Jayzee's gate and the thug was in the security guard's room. After Jayzee was expelled from school, she went straight home on foot because no vehicle would take her to her home. Upon Jayzee's arrival at home, Jayzee is immediately scolded by her father and stepmother. Jayzee was very upset, and Jayzee decided to run away from home at 12 pm. Jayzee collected the clothes she was about to bring, then she ran away from home at 12pm so that no one would know. From there Jayzee lived on the streets and became a bad person and became a bum. Jayzee doesn't have a job or money to buy everyday food. He only steals at mini markets or in restaurants for his life, then Jayzee saw that there was a motorbike that was still running and there were no people. Jayzee immediately got on the motorbike and immediately took the motorbike away. Jayzee immediately sold the motorbike and finally Jayzee had a little money to rent a rundown apartment there at a cheap price. Questions Tujuan membuat character story: Ingin mengakses fitur lebih JGRP Account UCP yang saya miliki: roy_wiliam Account Forum yang saya miliki:wiliamroy Berapa lama saya sudah main di JGRP: 6 bulan - 1 tahun Saya biasa main JGRP di: Hanya di rumah Saya wiliamroy selaku pemilik account UCP roy_wiliam bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Yajeez_Kashim) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain. Edited May 1, 2021 by wiliamroy
BADRI Posted May 1, 2021 Posted May 1, 2021 Halo brader.. @wiliamroy Saya mengecek Character Stories kamu, Silahkan jawab pertanyaan dibawah. 1. Sebutkan berapa UCP yang kamu miliki. 2. Character yang kamu mainkan ini level berapa ? 3. Apakah CS yang kamu buat sudah 300 kata ? 4. Apakah CS yang kamu ini hasil dari kamu sendiri atau meng-Copy CS milik orang lain? 5. Apakah nama Character kamu dan nama UCP kamu sudah benar? (biasanya, kalo salah di antara kedua tersebut, pas di masukin CS nya ke UCP itu suka ga bisa, jadi tolong pastikan kembali Nama Character dan nama UCP nya benar.) 6. Kamu main dimana? Rumah apa main di Warnet? Note: Selagi dalam pemeriksaan, cobalah kamu periksa kembali Character Story kamu, siapa tahu saja ada kesalahan disana, jika ada kesalahan maka perbaikilah dan kalo belum di respon CS nya, mohon bersabar ya kakak, pasti di respon kok.
Coca_Cola Posted May 1, 2021 Author Posted May 1, 2021 13 minutes ago, mariorianto28 said: Halo brader.. @wiliamroy Saya mengecek Character Stories kamu, Silahkan jawab pertanyaan dibawah. 1. Sebutkan berapa UCP yang kamu miliki. 2. Character yang kamu mainkan ini level berapa ? 3. Apakah CS yang kamu buat sudah 300 kata ? 4. Apakah CS yang kamu ini hasil dari kamu sendiri atau meng-Copy CS milik orang lain? 5. Apakah nama Character kamu dan nama UCP kamu sudah benar? (biasanya, kalo salah di antara kedua tersebut, pas di masukin CS nya ke UCP itu suka ga bisa, jadi tolong pastikan kembali Nama Character dan nama UCP nya benar.) 6. Kamu main dimana? Rumah apa main di Warnet? Note: Selagi dalam pemeriksaan, cobalah kamu periksa kembali Character Story kamu, siapa tahu saja ada kesalahan disana, jika ada kesalahan maka perbaikilah dan kalo belum di respon CS nya, mohon bersabar ya kakak, pasti di respon kok. 1. 1, hanya roy_wiliam 2. 15 3. Sudah 4. Hasil buatan saya sendiri 5. Sudah 6. Rumah @mariorianto28
BADRI Posted May 1, 2021 Posted May 1, 2021 @wiliamroy Perbaiki kembali: Semua paragraf di tambahkan lagi ceritanya, hingga setiap paragraf nya ada lebih dari 5 baris kalimat.
BADRI Posted May 2, 2021 Posted May 2, 2021 To @wiliamroyI am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to APPROVE your request. Please read the following guide to activate your link your store to your In-Game account: Sincerely,@mariorianto28JG:RP Staff Team.
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