pending Rahmat_Adibra [Rahmatadibra]

[rahmat_adibra]

Rahmat_Adibra

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         Rahmat Adibra was born at Indonesia 20 April 1991 born with poor family does not made him lost hope to get better life he already known how to sell something since he was a kid, he knows how to negotiate with others because his parents was a merchant and he learn how to convince customers that he have quality products to be sold he always help his parent because they economy issue and he have to fix it to get better life.

 

 

          When turned 14 years old Rahmat already mastered technique in marketing, he became expert in negotiating and always givin profit for his ownself from the goods that he sold he knows how to convince people who asking about his stuff ended by giving him big profit but without any help of his parent he can not became expert in marketing but sadly his parent already passed because of sickness that they suffer 1 year ago and now he work hard to pay the money that he loaned from bank to pay the hospital.

 

 

          The loan the debted to Rahmat is not paid yet although he already spent 2 years working as bus driver because the payment from buss job not much at all enough to make rahmat life day to day but he will not lost hope and he tried his luck becaming robber he joined robbery gang at Las Venturas which is a casino town, and he starts his carrer as robber there for the first try he feel nervous and afraid of the people that became his target usually robbery gang in Las Venturas targeting truck drivers but with luck is not in his side he got killed by truck he tried to stop the bus by jumped to the trailer but sadly he sliped and fell to the down of truck and got hit by wheels, with no one else to mourn him he died alone without any friend, and without happiness in his life.

 

 

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Questions

Tujuan membuat character story:
agar bisa membeli flat

 

Account UCP yang saya miliki:
1

 

Account Forum yang saya miliki:
rahmat_adibra

 

Berapa lama saya sudah main di JGRP:
Kurang dari 1 bulan

 

Saya biasa main JGRP di:
Hanya di rumah

 

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Saya rahmat_adibra selaku pemilik account UCP Rahmatadibra bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Rahmat_Adibra) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

Edited April 27, 2021 by rahmat_adibra

[$deananugerah$]

Saya deananugerah yang akan mengoreksi thread Character Stories anda, selagi saya mengoreksi Character Story anda akan ada beberapa hal yang akan saya tanyakan kepada anda. Silahkan dijawab beberapa pertanyaan dibawah ini:

1. Berapa UCP yang anda miliki?
2. Apakah anda memiliki UCP yang lain?
3. Level berapa karakter anda saat ini?
4. Apakah Character Stories yang anda buat sudah 300 kata?
5. Anda biasa bermain dimana, di rumah atau di warnet?

Harap perhatikan petunjuk dibawah ini!

1. Gunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Calibri, atau Tahoma),Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline)
2. Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri.
3. Berikan sekitar 5 sampai 10 spasi pada setiap awal paragraf. 
4. Pastikan anda sudah menggunakan formulir untuk character stories.
5. Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph.
6. Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standard bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English).
7. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme (silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: http://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ )

[rahmat_adibra]

1. hanya satu 

2. tidak ada

3. level 4

4. sudah 300 kata

5. hanya dirumah

[$deananugerah$]



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To @rahmat_adibra

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to PENDING your request.

Reasoning for said denial is listed below:

1. Gunakan format penulisan/paragraf Justify atau rata kiri-kanan, kamu bisa lihat contoh dari CS orang lai yang sudah aktif atau bisa lihat di google seperti apa format justify itu. 
2. Berikan sekitar 10 spasi pada paragraf pertama, samakan seperti paragraf kedua dan ketigz tersebut yang mana sudah benar.
3.  Gunakan tanda baca seperti titik pada setiap kalimat, dalam cerita mu bahkan hanya ada satu titik pada satu paragraf, perbaiki lagi, lihat bagaimana penggunaan serta penempatan tanda baca yang baik dan benar.
4. Perbaiki lagi penggunaan huruf kapital pada penulisan yang masih salah. 

 

I wish you the best of luck in the future.

Sincerely,

@deananugerah
JG:RP Staff Team

[rahmat_adibra]

Sudah min, sorry saya double post.

[$deananugerah$]

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To @rahmat_adibra

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to APPROVE your request. Please read the following guide to activate your link your store to your In-Game account:

 

Sincerely,

@deananugerah
JG:RP Staff Team.