pending Darren morris [Mpeysubejo]

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                 Darren morris

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     Darren morris born on 1 January 1991 at United Kingdom born as noble family did not made Darren arrogant he is friendly and kind man being born in noble family Darren must learn every aspect of life such as manner ,how to whink , self defense , and other kind of knowledge that he need for his life Darren fluently talk 4 languages at his young age at that time he just became 12 years old he really kind and friendly with sweet smile on his face which made everyone happy being around him as his colleague.

 

      When turned 15 Darren already became prince which will became next generation king in his country everyone loves him and there also someone have bad interest on him to take over his wealth and planning to make kudeta in his country and kill Prince Darren which will be the next king, after 1 year passed and the kudeta happened in his kingdom and chaotic happen everywhere many of his soldier fallen and war agains is own people Prince Darren which known as friendly and kind were changed became merciless and kill his own people with his own hand.

 

     After long war agains his own people Prince Darren finally won the kudeta and the kudeta stoped in his country and Prince Darren which known as the next king now began to re-establish his kingdom again after chaotic happened and there he found that kindness and friendly can not help his kingdom from falling now he became merciless king and tyranny until 3 years later his tyranny was ended and his kingdom lose against corruption of his kingdom staff and turned to really poor kingdom and Darren choose to kill himself in his room by drinking poison because frustrated and his kingdom fell and being ruled by other country

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Questions

Tujuan membuat character story:
continue and clarify the storyline of a Darren Morris and qualify for roleplay

 

Account UCP yang saya miliki:
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Berapa lama saya sudah main di JGRP:
Kurang dari 1 bulan

 

Saya biasa main JGRP di:
Hanya di rumah

 

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Saya Mpeysubejo selaku pemilik account UCP Mpeysubejo bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Darren morris) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

Edited April 30, 2021 by Mpeysubejo

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Halo @Mpeysubejo,

sebelum saya lanjutkan tinjauan terhadap character story yang kamu buat, tolong jawab pertanyaan berikut dengan sejujur-jujurnya. Level berapa character ini? Apakah hanya ini UCP yang kamu miliki? Apakah sudah di pastikan isi dari character story adalah 300 kata yang di pecah menjadi 3 paragraf?

 

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5 jam yang lalu, muhdathallahafif said:

Halo @Mpeysubejo,

sebelum saya lanjutkan tinjauan terhadap character story yang kamu buat, tolong jawab pertanyaan berikut dengan sejujur-jujurnya. Level berapa character ini? Apakah hanya ini UCP yang kamu miliki? Apakah sudah di pastikan isi dari character story adalah 300 kata yang di pecah menjadi 3 paragraf?

 

Saya level 5,saya hanya memiliki 1 ucp,maaf min kurang sekitar 52 kata tapi ada 3 paragraf

Edited April 27, 2021 by Mpeysubejo

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Tambah lagi kata-katanya sejumlah yang sudah di tentukan, baca lagi ketentuannya.

[Mpeysubejo]

Min sudah di perbaiki 

[Mpeysubejo]

6 jam yang lalu, muhdathallahafif said:

Tambah lagi kata-katanya sejumlah yang sudah di tentukan, baca lagi ketentuannya.

Sudah min sudah di perbaiki kekurangan nya 

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3 hours ago, Mpeysubejo said:

Sudah min sudah di perbaiki kekurangan nya 

Masih kurang itu, baca lagi ketentuannya minimal 300 kata, kalo kamu bingung gimana cara ngitung jumlah katanya, bisa cari di google 'word counter'. Lalu, untuk paragrafnya di justify dan di tiap awal paragraf diberikan 5 spasi.

[Mpeysubejo]

18 jam yang lalu, muhdathallahafif said:

Masih kurang itu, baca lagi ketentuannya minimal 300 kata, kalo kamu bingung gimana cara ngitung jumlah katanya, bisa cari di google 'word counter'. Lalu, untuk paragrafnya di justify dan di tiap awal paragraf diberikan 5 spasi.

Sudah semua min sudah ada 302 kata

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Tinggal justify paragraf (rata kanan-kiri) dan berikan 5 spasi di tiap awal-awal paragraf.

[Mpeysubejo]

16 jam yang lalu, muhdathallahafif said:

Tinggal justify paragraf (rata kanan-kiri) dan berikan 5 spasi di tiap awal-awal paragraf.

Udah min spasi 5 kali setiap paragraf

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1 hour ago, Mpeysubejo said:

Udah min spasi 5 kali setiap paragraf

Iya, paragrafnya juga di justify (rata kanan-kiri).

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4 jam yang lalu, muhdathallahafif said:

6 jam yang lalu, Mpeysubejo said:

Udah min spasi 5 kali setiap paragraf

Iya, paragrafnya juga di justify (rata kanan-kiri)

Min udah semua sekarang

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On 4/27/2021 at 5:34 AM, Mpeysubejo said:

Darren morris born on 1 January 1991 at United Kingdom born as noble family did not made Darren arrogant he is friendly and kind man being born in noble family Darren must learn every aspect of life such as manner ,how to whink , self defense , and other kind of knowledge that he need for his life Darren fluently talk 4 languages at his young age at that time he just became 12 years old he really kind and friendly with sweet smile on his face which made everyone happy being around him as his colleague.

Tinggal ini nih, kasih spasi 5 kali di awal paragraf nya.

On 4/27/2021 at 5:34 AM, Mpeysubejo said:

Darren morris

Sama judulnya ini di tengah aja.

Coba lebih teliti lagi ya sebelum kamu reply dan quote saya.

[Mpeysubejo]

9 jam yang lalu, muhdathallahafif said:

Sama judulnya ini di tengah aja.

Coba lebih teliti lagi ya sebelum kamu reply dan quote saya

Sudah semua sekarang min