dooblybooby2470 Posted April 15, 2021 Posted April 15, 2021 (edited) David McLovin David McLovin Rivera is a 22-year-old trainee tradesperson who enjoys social media, badminton, watching television, also watching television with his buddy named Patrick Bob Star and usually they liked to prank and annoy their neighbor Mr. Ward by calling him Mr.Squid because of his long nose, they also like making a loud sound to make Mr.Ward can't sleep by that time. David is hilarious and kind, but can also be very impatient and a bit easily get angry. He is from San Andreas who defines himself as straight. He finished school. Physically, David is in pretty good shape. He is average-height with bronze skin because he is half white and half black with ginger hair and black eyes. He has a birthmark on his shoulder. He grew up in a working class neighbourhood. After his mother died when he was young, so he was raised by his father Wick McLovin from that time, and he also an alcohol addict. He is currently single. His most recent romance was with a cleaner called Aliya Sabrina Watson, who was 1 year older than him unfortunately they broke up because Aliya felt smothered. David's best friend is a trainee tradesperson called Boris Wu they are inseparable also David likes to hangs around with Natasha Chen, Alannah Coleman and last but not least a health centre receptionist called Justin Young. David and his friends likes to spend most of they time by photography together, up cycling together and tells a joking but Boris Wu hated when David tell a joke. One day when David and his pal Boris went to David home in Jefferson to do a sleepover a gangster robbed David truck and also took Boris wallet which inside that wallet exist a Boris family picture. A few weeks after in troubling visit from the hypocritical Boris Wu where David planned something good and yet bad, David leaves his house and sets out in search of gangster headquarter maps because one of the gangster took David truck key car. A quest undertaken in the company full of People, Bully and cold Gangster. In the search for the hypocritical-guarded maps, David McLovin surprises even himself with his driving and skill as a Trucker when he escaped from enemy headquarter during his escape, David rescued a truck and a family picture belonging to Boris, but when Boris refuses to try telling Joke, their friendship is over. However, Boris is wounded in the chest at the chase when he drove his Toyota Supra and that time when David engages but can't resist in some serious joke he can't resist to tell Boris and that joke what make Boris died that time but David don't felt guilty because his friendship with Boris has ended anyway, David then accepts the truck key and returns home to his apartemen then from that time David decided want to join the Police to fight criminals and bring back justice to Los Santos. Questions Tujuan membuat character story: Register LSPD Account UCP yang saya miliki: dooblybooby2471 Account Forum yang saya miliki:dooblybooby2470 Berapa lama saya sudah main di JGRP: 1 - 3 bulan Saya biasa main JGRP di: Hanya di rumah Saya dooblybooby2470 selaku pemilik account UCP dooblybooby2471 bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (David McLovin) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain. Edited April 16, 2021 by dooblybooby2470 perbaikan grammar, punctuation, dan tambahan dikit
Jeypamungkas12 Posted April 15, 2021 Posted April 15, 2021 Selamat siang, sebelum ke tahap selanjutnya saya ingin bertanya dan tolong di jawab dengan sejujur jujurnya. Level berapa akun ini? Berapa UCP yang kamu miliki? Apakah kamu sudah yakin sudah 300 kata?
dooblybooby2470 Posted April 15, 2021 Author Posted April 15, 2021 Tadi level 5 Tidak Dual akun karakternya pun cuma 1 kalau terbukti ganti ganti akun banned aja saya 476 words 2,971 characters GO BASICOPTIONS
Jeypamungkas12 Posted April 15, 2021 Posted April 15, 2021 Please fix it. Attach a photo in the character story, Correct punctuation in 2nd paragraf.
dooblybooby2470 Posted April 15, 2021 Author Posted April 15, 2021 Quote Please fix it. Attach a photo in the character story, Correct punctuation in 2nd paragraf. udah gan tapi maaf saya bingung cara kecilin fotonya terus jika masih ada kesalahan tolong kasih tau yang bagian mananya karena saya kurang fokus benerinnya soalnya sebentar lagi mau ada ujian di kampus saya
dooblybooby2470 Posted April 16, 2021 Author Posted April 16, 2021 udh, ternyata cara kecilin cuman double klik fotonya semoga gak ada lagi yang harus ditambah/diperbaiki
Jeypamungkas12 Posted April 16, 2021 Posted April 16, 2021 To @dooblybooby2470I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to APPROVE your request. Please read the following guide to activate your link your store to your In-Game account: Sincerely,@Jeypamungkas12JG:RP Staff Team.
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