pending Delfina Bernardina [kiko07]

[Ripong]

Delfina Bernardina

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     On January 17 1998 in Argentina, a child named Delfina Bernardina was born, this name was given by Fina's father, namely Buccener Occoner, his mother died giving birth to Fina at that time was only 1 day old. One day Fina was 18 years old, she planned to work as a mechanic at Ocean Doks, even though the small salary that was important could make her save so she could continue studying at that time according to the demand of the car, as a result of being hit by the car the obedience leg had to be amputated, there was a serious wound. And Delfina has gained a lot of experience and a lot of money to find money for the wedding day when Delfina will be happy with a guy from Ireland. For Delfina, an Irish guy is like a normal guy, kind and sincere and have as much money and experience as Delfina.

 

     Then Fina was fired from the mechanic at Ocean docks because she made a big mistake which resulted in a considerable loss at the Ocean docks workshop. Then someone approached Fina and offered to enter the Workshop and she was given a job as a Manager at the Workshop. Manager's efforts were not in vain because they benefited a lot of money. One day, Fina wanted to visit many customers. Suddenly someone knocked on Fina's door. Fina also saw in the window that there was a group of people wearing security clothes at the same time Fina took the car keys and left the house through the back door. After escaping from Fina's pursuit, she went to the city of Las Vanturas to escape and stay at her uncle's house named Romeo Dicaprio, Fina stayed at her uncle's house for about 1 year, while staying at her uncle's house, Fina worked in her uncle's workshop for 1 year. One year passed. Fina returned to the city of Los Santos and returned to see the condition of her house

     Mess due to the search by the Los Santos Police. Fina also tidied up her messy house and she found a paper, then Fina saw that someone named Xan Khalifa wrote. Xan Khalifa sent a letter that said he needed help from the Grove Street alley, The letter was sent 2 Weeks ago. Fina went to Xan Khalifa's house to find out what happened suddenly a man named Brendan Terrence came, there Fina fell in love with Brendan. happy with Brendan and family in Delfina and Brendan. The place for storing belongings and places in places such as family and family. But they are always rushing to work hard for their families.

 

 

 

 

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Questions

Tujuan membuat character story:
Ingin memegang senjata.

 

Account UCP yang saya miliki:
kiko07

 

Account Forum yang saya miliki:
Ripong

 

Berapa lama saya sudah main di JGRP:
Kurang dari 1 bulan

 

Saya biasa main JGRP di:
Hanya di warnet

 

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Saya Ripong selaku pemilik account UCP kiko07 bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Delfina Bernardina) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

Edited April 19, 2021 by Ripong

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Halo brader.. @Ripong

Saya mengecek Character Stories kamu, Silahkan jawab pertanyaan dibawah.

 

1. Sebutkan berapa UCP yang kamu miliki.

2. Character yang kamu mainkan ini level berapa ?

3. Apakah CS yang kamu buat sudah 300 kata ?

4. Apakah CS yang kamu ini hasil dari kamu sendiri atau meng-Copy CS milik orang lain?

5. Apakah nama Character kamu dan nama UCP kamu sudah benar? (biasanya, kalo salah di antara kedua tersebut, pas di masukin CS nya ke UCP itu suka ga bisa, jadi tolong pastikan kembali Nama Character dan nama UCP nya benar.)

6. Kamu main dimana? Rumah apa main di Warnet?

 

Note:
Selagi dalam pemeriksaan, cobalah kamu periksa kembali Character Story kamu, siapa tahu saja ada kesalahan disana, jika ada kesalahan maka perbaikilah dan kalo belum di respon CS nya, mohon bersabar ya kakak, pasti di respon kok.

[Ripong]

4 hours ago, mariorianto28 said:

Halo brader.. @Ripong

Saya mengecek Character Stories kamu, Silahkan jawab pertanyaan dibawah.

 

1. Sebutkan berapa UCP yang kamu miliki.

2. Character yang kamu mainkan ini level berapa ?

3. Apakah CS yang kamu buat sudah 300 kata ?

4. Apakah CS yang kamu ini hasil dari kamu sendiri atau meng-Copy CS milik orang lain?

5. Apakah nama Character kamu dan nama UCP kamu sudah benar? (biasanya, kalo salah di antara kedua tersebut, pas di masukin CS nya ke UCP itu suka ga bisa, jadi tolong pastikan kembali Nama Character dan nama UCP nya benar.)

6. Kamu main dimana? Rumah apa main di Warnet?

 

Note:
Selagi dalam pemeriksaan, cobalah kamu periksa kembali Character Story kamu, siapa tahu saja ada kesalahan disana, jika ada kesalahan maka perbaikilah dan kalo belum di respon CS nya, mohon bersabar ya kakak, pasti di respon kok.

1. 1
2. level 3
3. dah
4. Sendiri
5. Sudah benar.
6. Warnet.

[BADRI]

@Ripong

Tolong jelaskan dengan jujur, di bawah ini UCP punya siapa?

1. akilaz
2. burung123

[Ripong]

29 minutes ago, mariorianto28 said:

@Ripong

Tolong jelaskan dengan jujur, di bawah ini UCP punya siapa?

1. akilaz
2. burung123

Saya tidak mempunyai UCP selain ini bang, Terimakasih.

[BADRI]

@Ripong

Perbaiki kembali:

1. Photo nya terlalu besar gambar nya, silahkan di kecilkan lagi.
2. Paragraf pertama dan ke tiga di tambahkan lagi ceritanya hingga lebih dari 5 baris kalimat.
3. Perhatikan kembali penggunaan kata kata nya, titik koma nya, huruf besar kecil nya, dan gunakan bahasa yang BAKU.
4. Gunakan rata kanan kiri, bukan rata tengah ataupun bukan rata kiri. (Tidak tau rata kanan kiri? Lihat CS orang lain sebagai contoh nya.)
5. Berikan 5 atau 10 SPACE di setiap awal paragraph nya, lalu sesuaikan dengan paragraph lain nya.
6. Tepatkanlah KOMA dimana semestinya di tepatkan, jika kalimat tersebut masih bisa digunakan KOMA, makan gunakan lah KOMA, jika kalimat tersebut harus di beri TITIK, maka gunakan lah TITIK. jangan terlalu banyak KOMA maupun TITIK dalam Cerita Character Story kamu.

[BADRI]

@Ripong

[Ripong]

On 4/16/2021 at 6:48 PM, mariorianto28 said:

@Ripong

Perbaiki kembali:

1. Photo nya terlalu besar gambar nya, silahkan di kecilkan lagi.
2. Paragraf pertama dan ke tiga di tambahkan lagi ceritanya hingga lebih dari 5 baris kalimat.
3. Perhatikan kembali penggunaan kata kata nya, titik koma nya, huruf besar kecil nya, dan gunakan bahasa yang BAKU.
4. Gunakan rata kanan kiri, bukan rata tengah ataupun bukan rata kiri. (Tidak tau rata kanan kiri? Lihat CS orang lain sebagai contoh nya.)
5. Berikan 5 atau 10 SPACE di setiap awal paragraph nya, lalu sesuaikan dengan paragraph lain nya.
6. Tepatkanlah KOMA dimana semestinya di tepatkan, jika kalimat tersebut masih bisa digunakan KOMA, makan gunakan lah KOMA, jika kalimat tersebut harus di beri TITIK, maka gunakan lah TITIK. jangan terlalu banyak KOMA maupun TITIK dalam Cerita Character Story kamu.

Edited check again my post

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To @Ripong

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to APPROVE your request. Please read the following guide to activate your link your store to your In-Game account:

 

Sincerely,

@mariorianto28
JG:RP Staff Team.