$Satesateusus$ Posted April 13, 2021 Posted April 13, 2021 Jordan Faders Jordan Imannuel Faders Born in Chicago Ilinois America Jordan is the son of Trevor Faders and Jackie Faders Jordan was born in the gangster area of Chicago he grew up under the gangster Folk Nation because his father was a member of the gang. Jordan is often trained in fighting by his father because his father wants Jordan to be a tough child, his father works as a truck driver while his mother is a teacher at a school in Chicago. Jordan has a very good athletic side but he is not very smart he is greedy and jealous. One day his mother evicted Jordan from the house because he was sick of seeing him, at that time his father was working at his workplace, Jordan immediately argued with his mother he did not accept that he was kicked out of the house, finally, Jordan left without bringing anything and went to his friend's house to stay. there. His father who was looking for Jordan finally found Jordan while staying at his friend's house. His father apologized for his mother's mistake but Jordan refused to move and wanted not to want to live with his mother. It has been 6 years since he fought with his mother and he has worked and graduated from school. Jordan became a famous American football player in the minor leagues in America. He became MVP season after season. He is very grateful to his friends and his father who has always supported him. One day his father was killed in a gunshot by a gangster, he felt very sad and stopped playing American football and tried what his father wanted to do, namely make a gang. Jordan finally went to Los Santos and tried to work there while trying to join the gangs there Questions Tujuan membuat character story: Untuk Memenuhi Syarat Character roleplay Account UCP yang saya miliki: NOPSNAKKRESEK Account Forum yang saya miliki:$hilariusgilar$ Berapa lama saya sudah main di JGRP: 3 - 6 bulan Saya biasa main JGRP di: Hanya di rumah Saya hilariusgilar selaku pemilik account UCP nopsnakkresek bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Jordan Faders) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.
$deananugerah$ Posted April 13, 2021 Posted April 13, 2021 Saya deananugerah yang akan mengoreksi thread Character Stories anda, selagi saya mengoreksi Character Story anda akan ada beberapa hal yang akan saya tanyakan kepada anda. Silahkan dijawab beberapa pertanyaan dibawah ini: Berapa UCP yang anda miliki? Apakah anda memiliki UCP yang lain? Level berapa karakter anda saat ini? Apakah Character Stories yang anda buat sudah 300 kata? Anda biasa bermain dimana, di rumah atau di warnet? Harap perhatikan petunjuk dibawah ini! Gunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Calibri, atau Tahoma),Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri. Berikan sekitar 5 sampai 10 spasi pada setiap awal paragraf. Pastikan anda sudah menggunakan formulir untuk character stories. Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standard bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme (silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: http://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ )
$Satesateusus$ Posted April 13, 2021 Author Posted April 13, 2021 1. Satu 2.Tidak 3. Level 6 4. Saya sudha check dengan Word Counter 300kata 5. Sekarang Di rumah karena pandemi biasanya kalo tidak ada pandemi di warnet
$deananugerah$ Posted April 13, 2021 Posted April 13, 2021 To @hilariusgilar I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to PENDING your request. Reasoning for said denial is listed below: Tambahkan foto karakter dengan formag centre atau rata tengah di atas paragraf pertama. Gunakan format justify atau rata kiri-kanan pada paragraf ketiga, lihat contohnya pada paragraf pertama dan kedua. I wish you the best of luck in the future. Sincerely,@deananugerah JG:RP Staff Team
$Satesateusus$ Posted April 13, 2021 Author Posted April 13, 2021 @deananugerah Sip Sudah Min Mohon di Cek
$deananugerah$ Posted April 13, 2021 Posted April 13, 2021 Coba teliti sebelum memposting "sudah diedit" silahkan perbaiki lagi format paragraf Justify atau rata kiri-kanan pada paragraf kedua.
$Satesateusus$ Posted April 13, 2021 Author Posted April 13, 2021 24 minutes ago, deananugerah said: Coba teliti sebelum memposting "sudah diedit" silahkan perbaiki lagi format paragraf Justify atau rata kiri-kanan pada paragraf kedua. Saya sudah block semuanya dan di justify abang
$deananugerah$ Posted April 13, 2021 Posted April 13, 2021 1 minute ago, hilariusgilar said: Saya sudah block semuanya dan di justify abang Good, your character story is approved.
$deananugerah$ Posted April 13, 2021 Posted April 13, 2021 To @hilariusgilarI am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to APPROVE your request. Please read the following guide to activate your link your store to your In-Game account: Sincerely,@deananugerahJG:RP Staff Team.
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