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Maldonado_Castillo


 

 

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          Maldonado Castillo is a boy commonly called Nunez. He was born into a family that is arguably capable. So Nunez was schooled in a nice and famous place, which is his homeland, San Miguel de Allende. Nunez is well known in his school for his intelligence in engineering and other motor-related matters. Nunez also worked as a mechanic in the motoring world at a motorcycle repair shop in his hometown for 2 years. Nunez was obsessed with the world of motorcycles because he used to be invited by his father to walk around on his father's motorcycle, the Harley Davidson Electra Glide motorcycle that his father bought when his father was young, and when his father liked riding. And now that his father has entered old age, his bike was given to Nunez as a deposition from his father for Nunez's future.

 

          Time passed so fast, Nunez was 20 years old. He traveled to the city of Acapulco to continue his education for the sake of his good future. After a few hours of travel, he arrived in the town of Acapulco. He immediately looked for boarding houses for him to rest all day, and while looking for a list of freshman openings on campus in the city of Acapulco, Mexico. After waiting long enough, Nunez finally got a campus that was opening new student enrollment. Nunez soon enrolled on campus and hoped that he would be accepted. Eventually, as a result of the designation, Nunez was accepted as a freshman on the campus.

 

          After years of continuing his education, Nunez finally graduated from college and he decided to continue his hobby as a biker. He also tried to travel again to the Spanish city of Los Santos. Nunez immediately prepared his belongings, and began his journey from the city of Acapulco to the city of Los Santos on a plane he bought a few days ago before his departure. Nunez made that trip alone. Arriving in the city of Los Santos, he decided to take a walk while looking for work around the city, while enjoying a new atmosphere in the city. Suddenly he saw a motorcycle club similar to his motorcycle, they talked about the motorcycle world and Nunez had asked about the job openings around there, and the bikers had a barbershop that was understaffed. Nunez immediately tried to apply there and Nunez was accepted to work. While Nunez worked as a barber, Nunez also began hanging out with them.

 

 


 

Questions

Tujuan membuat character story:
Untuk memenuhi persyaratan yang diharuskan agar bisa mengakses fitur yang tersedia

 

Account UCP yang saya miliki:
heat

 

Account Forum yang saya miliki:
heatt

 

Berapa lama saya sudah main di JGRP:
6 bulan - 1 tahun

 

Saya biasa main JGRP di:
Hanya di rumah

 


 

Saya heatt selaku pemilik account UCP heat bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Maldonado_Castillo) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

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Halo brader.. @heatt

Saya mengecek Character Stories kamu, Silahkan jawab pertanyaan dibawah.

 

1. Sebutkan berapa UCP yang kamu miliki.

2. Character yang kamu mainkan ini level berapa ?

3. Apakah CS yang kamu buat sudah 300 kata ?

4. Apakah CS yang kamu ini hasil dari kamu sendiri atau meng-Copy CS milik orang lain?

5. Apakah nama Character kamu dan nama UCP kamu sudah benar? (biasanya, kalo salah di antara kedua tersebut, pas di masukin CS nya ke UCP itu suka ga bisa, jadi tolong pastikan kembali Nama Character dan nama UCP nya benar.)

6. Kamu main dimana? Rumah apa main di Warnet?

 

Note:
Selagi dalam pemeriksaan, cobalah kamu periksa kembali Character Story kamu, siapa tahu saja ada kesalahan disana, jika ada kesalahan maka perbaikilah dan kalo belum di respon CS nya, mohon bersabar ya kakak, pasti di respon kok.

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@heatt

Perbaiki kembali:

  1. Paragraf pertama, kedua, ketiga di tambahkan sedikit lagi ceritanya hingga lebih dari 5 baris kalimat.
  2. Gunakan rata kanan kiri, bukan rata tengah ataupun bukan rata kiri. (Tidak tau rata kanan kiri? Lihat CS orang lain sebagai contoh nya.)
  3. Berikan 5 atau 10 SPACE di setiap awal paragraph nya, lalu sesuaikan dengan paragraph lain nya.
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