$D4RKN3SS$ Posted March 29, 2021 Posted March 29, 2021 Ethan Valle Ethan Valle, a child born in San Diego, United States with a very simple life without a mother, Ethan Valle started life in America with his father without a mother. Ethan Valle lived in San Diego very well with his uncle and father, when Ethan was 5 years old, he became the most spoiled child of his parents because his only child was without siblings and did not have a mother, he was spoiled by his uncle and father at that time, after Ethan's sixth birthday, he celebrated very happily without a mother, when he slowly blew out the candle he thought of his mother when he was 4 years old. Ethan is saddened by the absence of his beloved parents on his money day. When Ethan Valle was 15 years old he started a job there alone when he was 15 years old as a timber farmer, he worked happily with these uncle in public fields, Ethan was happy to work until he forgot his father who was sick at home, when Ethan Valle worked as a farmer in a public farm, Ethan also remembers something about his father who was sick at home. Ethan Valle after remembering this, he immediately went to his father's house to take care of his father at home without his uncle's knowledge. Ethan Valle takes a care of his father for recover from a fever, when Ethan's uncle came home from his uncle's field and notices Ethan who was taking care of his sick father, Ethan also changed his face so that he was ashamed that he would not work all day because he took care of his father. When Ethan's uncle was angry because of that, Ethan's father fell when Ethan was fighting with his uncle, as a result Ethan's father died due to the shock of a family fight. Ethan also cried because of the death of his parents when he was young. Ethan thought of moving to Los Santos to find a comfortable job for him, Ethan cried because he had to leave his uncle and the city of San Diego, Ethan was sad for an hour then thought unanimously about it, Ethan prepared a suitcase to go to the airport because he wanted to move to the city of Los Santos. Ethan calls a taxi with goods ready for him to fly to Los Santos. Ethan takes a taxi and then waves his right hand to his uncle who lives alone in San Diego, Ethan takes a photo of his parents and is sad because he lost his parents when he was young. Ethan also flew plane and then arrived at Los Santos. Ethan immediately looked for a rental house so he could live to work there. Questions Tujuan membuat character story: - beroleplay lebih jauh Account UCP yang saya miliki: Cluckin, Akmalakmal (udah diblok) Account Forum yang saya miliki:Lucas_Mcgremory Berapa lama saya sudah main di JGRP: 6 bulan - 1 tahun Saya biasa main JGRP di: Hanya di rumah Saya Lucas_Mcgremory selaku pemilik account UCP Cluckin bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Ethan Valle) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.
$SilumanUlar$ Posted March 29, 2021 Posted March 29, 2021 Halo, Sebelum saya respon Character Story kamu, dimohon untuk jawab pertanyaan dibawah ini dengan jujur: Berapa level karakter kamu saat ini? Apakah UCP kamu sudah sinkron/sesuai ? agar proses Character Story bisa berjalan lancar Apakah kamu mempunyai UCP lebih dari satu? Dipastikan kamu memahami peraturan sebelum membuat Character Story, Apakah sudah membacanya? Bersediakah kamu di banned account permanent jika kamu ketahuan Copy-Paste Character Story?
$D4RKN3SS$ Posted March 29, 2021 Author Posted March 29, 2021 1 minute ago, GulaGula said: Halo, Sebelum saya respon Character Story kamu, dimohon untuk jawab pertanyaan dibawah ini dengan jujur: Berapa level karakter kamu saat ini? Apakah UCP kamu sudah sinkron/sesuai ? agar proses Character Story bisa berjalan lancar Apakah kamu mempunyai UCP lebih dari satu? Dipastikan kamu memahami peraturan sebelum membuat Character Story, Apakah sudah membacanya? Bersediakah kamu di banned account permanent jika kamu ketahuan Copy-Paste Character Story? 1. 16. 2. Sudah. 3. Hanya 1. 4. Sudah. 5. Mengoke
$SilumanUlar$ Posted March 29, 2021 Posted March 29, 2021 To @Lucas_Mcgremory I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to PENDING your request. Reasoning for said denial is listed below: Fix America word. You should probably write the United States (the word "America" refers to North, Central and South America). there alone If you mean they are, then write they're, e.g.: I know that they're happy (if you are indicating possession, write their; the form there is acceptable when referring to a location or situation). Fix your grammar and punctuation on your Character Story I wish you the best of luck in the future. Sincerely,@GulaGula JG:RP Staff Team
$SilumanUlar$ Posted March 30, 2021 Posted March 30, 2021 Fix: If you already used United States, remove "American" words. Fix your punctuation on your Character Story
$D4RKN3SS$ Posted March 30, 2021 Author Posted March 30, 2021 2 jam yang lalu, GulaGula said: Fix: If you already used United States, remove "American" words. Fix your punctuation on your Character Story dah
$SilumanUlar$ Posted March 30, 2021 Posted March 30, 2021 To @Lucas_McgremoryI am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to APPROVE your request. Please read the following guide to activate your link your store to your In-Game account: Sincerely,@GulaGulaJG:RP Staff Team.
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