$PatriotJokoDeathmatch$ Posted March 28, 2021 Posted March 28, 2021 Kaydron Bradshawn Kaydron Bradshawn was a kid born on the 2nd of February 2002 in Jefferson Los Santos, San Andreas. Both of his parents doesn't afford a home in Jefferson so they lived on the streets. His dad's name was Kenny Bradshawn and his mom's name is Rachelle Bradshawn. His dad's job was as a lumberjack in a nearby village in Blueberry and his mom doesn't have a job and just cares for Kaydron. Ever since he was a child, Kaydron didn't went to school so that he doesn't have any knowledge of education in his brain. His father usually takes Kaydron to a nearby park in Glen Park and they usually sniffs some crack together then goes back home high on crack, his mother tried to stop his dad to take Kaydron and sniffs the crack together but his dad is violent and always had his hands on Rachelle. Kaydron continues to live on the streets eventually when he was 15 years old, he got caught by the police for being high on public. His live eventually went down hill from there. Both of his parents died due to a drive by shooting from the crips gang against the bloods gang in the area, his parents both got caught on the shot fired. After he knew about the news that both of his parents had passed away, he went loose and buys guns from the streets and starts to rob people on little villages such as on Blueberry, Montgomery, Dillimore, etc. Just as he thought that he got away from robbing people, a detective went up to him and tazes him and Kaydron finally got caught after 6 months of roaming around the city. Kaydron served a 2 year sentence for his actions. After he got released from jail, he once again starts to work in a restaurant and cleans the restaurant up every day. He earns some money after that, then he got hooked up on drugs once again, and every day he goes to the same park where his dad used to took him to and sniffs the drugs there. Kaydron remembers that that was the place where his dad usually took him to, he starts to cry there and he thought of how to avenge both of his parents. He starts to sell drugs on the streets and earns a couple of bucks then he also starts to sell guns to other gangters so that he could earn more money and saves the money to buy the most deadly weapon to avenge both of his parents. At 17 Years old, Kaydron once again got caught by police for selling straps to a detective. He got a one-year jail sentence. Eventually he got out of jail and starts to roam the streets once again and still tries to make more money to buy the weapon he wants to buy. Questions Tujuan membuat character story: supaya saya dapat melakukan aktifitas ilegal Account UCP yang saya miliki: Jasson43 Account Forum yang saya miliki:$jassonhans$ Berapa lama saya sudah main di JGRP: 6 bulan - 1 tahun Saya biasa main JGRP di: Hanya di rumah Saya jassonhans selaku pemilik account UCP Jasson43 bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Kaydron Bradshawn) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.
$SilumanUlar$ Posted March 28, 2021 Posted March 28, 2021 Halo, Sebelum saya respon Character Story kamu, dimohon untuk jawab pertanyaan dibawah ini dengan jujur: Berapa level karakter kamu saat ini? Apakah UCP kamu sudah sinkron/sesuai ? agar proses Character Story bisa berjalan lancar Apakah kamu mempunyai UCP lebih dari satu? Dipastikan kamu memahami peraturan sebelum membuat Character Story, Apakah sudah membacanya? Bersediakah kamu di banned account permanent jika kamu ketahuan Copy-Paste Character Story?
$PatriotJokoDeathmatch$ Posted March 28, 2021 Author Posted March 28, 2021 20 minutes ago, GulaGula said: Halo, Sebelum saya respon Character Story kamu, dimohon untuk jawab pertanyaan dibawah ini dengan jujur: Berapa level karakter kamu saat ini? Apakah UCP kamu sudah sinkron/sesuai ? agar proses Character Story bisa berjalan lancar Apakah kamu mempunyai UCP lebih dari satu? Dipastikan kamu memahami peraturan sebelum membuat Character Story, Apakah sudah membacanya? Bersediakah kamu di banned account permanent jika kamu ketahuan Copy-Paste Character Story? 1. Level 3 Min. 2. Sudah min. 3. Tidak min, hanya Jasson43 4. Sudah min. 5. Saya bersedia min. 1
$SilumanUlar$ Posted March 29, 2021 Posted March 29, 2021 To @jassonhans I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to PENDING your request. Reasoning for said denial is listed below: Andreas. both of If this is a new sentence, it should start with a capital letter. Kaydron.Ever There should be a space at the beginning of the sentence or after a punctuation mark. Fix your punctuation and capital letters. Use the format available in this thread. Use a font that is easy to read (Arial,Calibri or Tahoma), Font size : 14 and don't give excessive attributes. I wish you the best of luck in the future. Sincerely,@GulaGula JG:RP Staff Team
$PatriotJokoDeathmatch$ Posted March 29, 2021 Author Posted March 29, 2021 11 minutes ago, GulaGula said: To @jassonhans I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to PENDING your request. Reasoning for said denial is listed below: Andreas. both of If this is a new sentence, it should start with a capital letter. Kaydron.Ever There should be a space at the beginning of the sentence or after a punctuation mark. Fix your punctuation and capital letters. Use the format available in this thread. Use a font that is easy to read (Arial,Calibri or Tahoma), Font size : 14 and don't give excessive attributes. I wish you the best of luck in the future. Sincerely,@GulaGula JG:RP Staff Team edited min
$SilumanUlar$ Posted March 29, 2021 Posted March 29, 2021 Fix: everyday. If you mean "each day", then write every day (in two words). It is possible to write everyday as one word if you mean "ordinary". a one year jail. Use a hyphen when the "number + year" combination precedes a noun, e.g.: A two-year agreement. Use the format available in this thread. Use a font that is easy to read (Arial,Calibri or Tahoma), Font size : 14. he got hooked up on drugs once again and everyday he goes to the same park where his dad used to took him to and sniffs the drugs there. Focus on your word, don't forget to add comma.
$PatriotJokoDeathmatch$ Posted March 29, 2021 Author Posted March 29, 2021 14 minutes ago, GulaGula said: Fix: everyday. If you mean "each day", then write every day (in two words). It is possible to write everyday as one word if you mean "ordinary". a one year jail. Use a hyphen when the "number + year" combination precedes a noun, e.g.: A two-year agreement. Use the format available in this thread. Use a font that is easy to read (Arial,Calibri or Tahoma), Font size : 14. he got hooked up on drugs once again and everyday he goes to the same park where his dad used to took him to and sniffs the drugs there. Focus on your word, don't forget to add comma. Edited min.
$SilumanUlar$ Posted March 30, 2021 Posted March 30, 2021 Fix: Change everyday to every day. Use the format available in this thread. Use a font that is easy to read (Arial,Calibri or Tahoma), Font size : 14.
$PatriotJokoDeathmatch$ Posted March 30, 2021 Author Posted March 30, 2021 3 jam yang lalu, GulaGula said: Fix: Change everyday to every day. Use the format available in this thread. Use a font that is easy to read (Arial,Calibri or Tahoma), Font size : 14. Edited Mint.
$SilumanUlar$ Posted March 30, 2021 Posted March 30, 2021 To @jassonhansI am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to APPROVE your request. Please read the following guide to activate your link your store to your In-Game account: Sincerely,@GulaGulaJG:RP Staff Team.
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