pabloalex Posted March 26, 2021 Posted March 26, 2021 (edited) Albert_Alvaro Character : Albert_Alvaro Story : Albert Alvaro is a twin child from a simple family, Albert has a good personality, and tends to stay quiet at home. When Albert was at school he was often bullied, and was ridiculed until Albert decided to stay in class, And not fight, No one wanted to be friends with him. And after graduating from school, Albert wanted to leave his village, Palamino, to the city of Los Santos. On March 18-2015, and Albert Alvaro officially graduated from school. On Monday, 21st, Albert Alvaro departed from his hometown of Palamino to the City in Los Santos. Departed by subway to the City of Los Santos Albert for the first time he left and left his parents in the village. At that time Albert Alvaro arrived in the city of Los Santos, Albert Alvaro started life in the city of Los Santos alone and had no friends. Albert Alvaro is confused where to go first, finally there is a kind person who wants to help to give a ride to a place called a school driver to make a motorbike license. Albert Alvaro finally passed the exam to make sims, and Albert Alvaro got a simulation motorbike. The next day Albert Alvaro started his first job as a road cleaner, City bus, and miner. Albert was very happy to receive his first salary, and Albert Alvaro plans to buy a motorbike for him to work. Albert is even more active working so that he can make his parents in the village happy. Albert has a desire to be a taxi driver so he can live in the city, and now has a friend named Matthew Davis they also become friends who help each other at work. Albert was finally able to buy a taxi, Albert immediately applied for a taxi company in the city of Los Santos. Finally, the one who had been waiting for him came, Albert was accepted as a taxi driver at the taxi company. And a few days later Albert's stage was getting bigger so that Albert could buy a house for his parents in the village, now Albert can stay to buy an apartment for him. Finally, Albert's dream came true after 5 years of hard work, now I can see his parents and younger siblings are happy. It has been a long time waiting for Albert to have a vehicle for him to work. Questions Tujuan membuat character story: supaya dapat membuka fitur fitur server Account UCP yang saya miliki: pabloalex Account Forum yang saya miliki:pabloalex Berapa lama saya sudah main di JGRP: 3 - 6 bulan Saya biasa main JGRP di: Hanya di rumah Saya pabloalex selaku pemilik account UCP pabloalex bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Albert_Alvaro) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain. Edited March 28, 2021 by pabloalex
Lucifero Posted March 26, 2021 Posted March 26, 2021 Silahkan jawab beberapa pertanyaaan berikut dengan jujur: Apa tujuan dari pembuatan CS ini? Sebutkan seluruh UCP yang kamu miliki. Sebutkan semua ID forum yang kamu miliki. Apa roleplay yang akan kamu lakukan ketika CS kamu sudah diterima? Level berapa karakter kamu saat ini?
pabloalex Posted March 27, 2021 Author Posted March 27, 2021 1. Supaya dapat membuka fitur server 2. Hanya 1 pabloalex 3. - (tidak tahu id forum tuh yang mana) 4. Roleplay Kriminal Mybe, dll 5. Sembilan (9)
Lucifero Posted March 27, 2021 Posted March 27, 2021 Revisi: Gunakan rata kiri-kanan (justify) Hapus catatan tersebut. Ubah seluruh grammar menjadi past tense karena disitu masih ada yang menggunakan present tense. Paragraf ke-empat gunakan sudut pandang orang ketiga, disitu masih ada kata "I". Cantumkan link CS kamu yang lama ketika melakukan reply.
Lucifero Posted March 27, 2021 Posted March 27, 2021 Revisi: Silahkan mengikuti format terbaru. Cantumkan link format yang lama pada reply bukan first post. Ubah fotonya menjadi foto orang asli bukan karakter dari GTA.
Lucifero Posted March 28, 2021 Posted March 28, 2021 Tidak menggunakan format character dan story pada cerita kamj tersebut, dapat dilihat pada awal kalimat. Linknya jangan dicantumin disitu, tapi direply.
Lucifero Posted March 28, 2021 Posted March 28, 2021 To @pabloalexI am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to APPROVE your request. Please read the following guide to activate your link your store to your In-Game account: Sincerely,@ProKiller_JG:RP Staff Team.
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