DragonEggs Posted March 22, 2021 Posted March 22, 2021 Marcuis Hemsworth Marcuis Hemsworth is a child who was born in America in 1997 he is often called Marcus, Marcuis's father named Marcus Hemsworth and his mother Hangallina Worthilin, Marcuis was born in a bad family, which Marcus knows is only a very cruel past in a Gangster in the area in America . At the age of 5 years Marcus's family changed greatly, being living in prison for 5 years, Marcus and his mother decided to stay away from the house prison and he planned to move to the Wilow area. At the age of 10, Marcus had moved to Wilow to be precise in the East. For several months Marcus lived in Wilow, his mother Marcus got the news that his father had been released from prison and wanted to join his family to live in Wilow, Marcus was happy to hear that, his father arrived in Wilow but unfortunately his father was killed by the Wilow Gang Marcus was furious to hear this and wanted to do counterattack on the Gang unfortunately Marcus has no relatives or friends in Wilow. 2 years after the death of his father Marcus began to understand the environment in Wilow, he also planned to look for an alley in the Wilow area to be precise in East Beach. At the age of 18, Marcus had found an alley in the Wilow area called Hispanic 17st. Several months he had a bad time in the Gang to be an experiment on whether he was worthy of being a member in a Gang, Marcus remembers this is what his father did when he was in America. 3 years have passed, now Marcus has turned 21. He already has rights in the Gang. He plans to avenge his father's death, which has been made by the Wilow Mafia, his relatives also want to help Marcus because the Wilow Mafia is also an enemy of the Hispanic Gang. Questions Tujuan membuat character story: Ingin memegang senjata Account UCP yang saya miliki: adadeh1 Account Forum yang saya miliki: DragonEggs Berapa lama saya sudah main di JGRP: 1 - 3 bulan Saya biasa main JGRP di: Hanya di warnet Saya DragonEggs selaku pemilik account UCP adadeh1 bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Marcuis Hemsworth) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.
$deananugerah$ Posted March 22, 2021 Posted March 22, 2021 Saya deananugerah yang akan mengoreksi thread Character Stories anda, selagi saya mengoreksi Character Story anda akan ada beberapa hal yang akan saya tanyakan kepada anda. Silahkan dijawab beberapa pertanyaan dibawah ini: Berapa UCP yang anda miliki? Apakah anda memiliki UCP yang lain? Level berapa karakter anda saat ini? Apakah Character Stories yang anda buat sudah 300 kata? Anda biasa bermain dimana, di rumah atau di warnet? Harap perhatikan petunjuk dibawah ini! Gunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Calibri, atau Tahoma),Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri. Berikan sekitar 5 sampai 10 spasi pada setiap awal paragraf. Pastikan anda sudah menggunakan formulir untuk character stories. Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standard bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme (silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: http://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ )
DragonEggs Posted March 22, 2021 Author Posted March 22, 2021 46 minutes ago, deananugerah said: Saya deananugerah yang akan mengoreksi thread Character Stories anda, selagi saya mengoreksi Character Story anda akan ada beberapa hal yang akan saya tanyakan kepada anda. Silahkan dijawab beberapa pertanyaan dibawah ini: Berapa UCP yang anda miliki? Apakah anda memiliki UCP yang lain? Level berapa karakter anda saat ini? Apakah Character Stories yang anda buat sudah 300 kata? Anda biasa bermain dimana, di rumah atau di warnet? Harap perhatikan petunjuk dibawah ini! Gunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Calibri, atau Tahoma),Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri. Berikan sekitar 5 sampai 10 spasi pada setiap awal paragraf. Pastikan anda sudah menggunakan formulir untuk character stories. Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standard bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme (silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: http://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) 1. Hanya satu yaitu adadeh1 2. Tidak. 3. 3. 4. Sudah. 5. Warnet. Edited all check again my post!
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