$Edwin_Gunawan$ Posted March 12, 2021 Posted March 12, 2021 Jose_Arellano Jose Arellano was born in Roma, Italy. His parents has a debt with Italian Mafia, they can't pay it so they sell everything to pay their debt to the mafia. Jose has his own hobby, and it was automotive, he love to watch a race on the road and has a big dream to join it one day. Unfortunately, his economic condition can't do anything to make his dream come true. Day after day Jose live in a bad situation until one day his family lose everything and need to move back to another country to start a new life. Jose Family move to Columbia to met their closest family their have, Fabron Family. Jose start a new live in Columbia, he often go with his cousin Leeroy Fabron because they have the same hobby. But same with Jose, Leeroy also can't effort to buy any bike, until one day Jose and Leeroy move to Los Santos to change their live. They join a mechanic job in Los Santos but the money is to hard to get as a new mechanic in Los Santos. Jose decided to find an easy way and rob someone. Unfortunately, he got a wrong person. The victim that he rob, he has a weapon so Jose got a shoot on his head. Lucky for Jose, he still survive, but there is an anger grow inside his ego. Jose quit a job as a mechanic and start learning as a arms dealer. Day after day, Jose become an expert to create some weapons. He met again with Leeroy and talk about their situation in Los Santos. They want to make a change and try to create a grup of people who love automotive too and support each other in anyway. Jose lead start to met other people, they join and will support him to make his dream come true, do what Jose love and got respect from everyone. Questions Tujuan membuat character story: To get a better roleplay experience and also to explain my character detail story Account UCP yang saya miliki: Edwin_Gunawan Account Forum yang saya miliki:$Edwin_Gunawan$ Berapa lama saya sudah main di JGRP: 2 tahun lebih Saya biasa main JGRP di: Hanya di rumah Saya Edwin_Gunawan selaku pemilik account UCP Edwin_Gunawan bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Jose_Arellano) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.
$deananugerah$ Posted March 12, 2021 Posted March 12, 2021 Saya @deananugerah akan merespond thread Character Stories anda, selagi saya mengoreksi Character Story anda akan ada beberapa hal yang akan saya tanyakan kepada anda. Silahkan dijawab beberapa pertanyaan dibawah ini: Berapa UCP yang anda miliki? Apakah anda memiliki UCP yang lain? Level berapa karakter anda saat ini? Apakah Character Stories yang anda buat sudah 300 kata? Anda biasa bermain dimana, di rumah atau di warnet? Harap perhatikan petunjuk dibawah ini! Gunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Calibri, atau Tahoma),Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri. Berikan sekitar 5 sampai 10 spasi pada setiap awal paragraf. Pastikan anda sudah menggunakan formulir untuk character stories. Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standard bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme (silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: http://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ )
$Edwin_Gunawan$ Posted March 12, 2021 Author Posted March 12, 2021 1. Hanya Edwin_Gunawan sejak 2012 2. Tidak 3. Level 6 4. Sudah, boleh di check langsung 5. Hanya di rumah saja
$deananugerah$ Posted March 12, 2021 Posted March 12, 2021 To @Edwin_Gunawan I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to PENDING your request. Reasoning for said denial is listed below: Tambahkan foto untuk cerita karakter anda. I wish you the best of luck in the future. Sincerely,@deananugerah JG:RP Staff Team
$Edwin_Gunawan$ Posted March 12, 2021 Author Posted March 12, 2021 Okay, I already add a picture on it.
$deananugerah$ Posted March 12, 2021 Posted March 12, 2021 Take a look at the revisions below: Place the photo of your character above the first paragraph while reducing the size of the photo.
$Edwin_Gunawan$ Posted March 12, 2021 Author Posted March 12, 2021 Thank you for your respond, I already edit it.
$deananugerah$ Posted March 13, 2021 Posted March 13, 2021 To @NamaForumI am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to APPROVE your request. Please read the following guide to activate your link your store to your In-Game account: Sincerely,@NamaStaffJG:RP Staff Team.
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