Dimas5 Posted February 25, 2021 Posted February 25, 2021 (edited) Nikolai_Kalashnikov On august 18, 1999 a child named Nikolai Kalashnikov was born, but his mother died when he birth and he had to be raised by his father in the city of Petergof, Russia. When Nikolai was 9 years old his father went home after he work and he found a burglary at an empty house and he try to fought the thief but the thief run away and the police came at that time and they found Nikolai's father and he was arrested by the police because they thought he was the thief because there was no security camera installed and he was imprisoned for 20 years, since then Nikolai really hates police. 6 years after his father was being imprisoned the economy in the City is very bad and then when he was 22 years old he still did not hear the news about his father and Nikolai decided to leave the city by a cargo ships in his area and looking for a better place for him to survive, he started his journey and he fell asleep on the ship and when he woke up he saw a city that was quite busy his ship is docked on Ocean docks and decided to stay on there because he wanted to try if the place was better than his hometown. He also tried to work as a street sweeper and driving a bus even though he was not having a driving license, after collecting the money he worked as a taxi driver and after he worked for a long time he had an accident near the Los Santos bank he was hit by a car so that his car overturned and he was hospitalized but he did not desperate and keep trying to work. After Nikolai out of hospital and he is recovered Nikolai switched jobs because his taxi was destroyed and he applied for a job as a truck driver and he also bought a flatbed truck from the rest of his savings for him to work and he began to work actively as a truck driver and was able to buy a Road train and work as a hauler, but his dream did not end here because he wanted to be a criminal in the city because he hated the police since his father was jailed as an innocent. Questions Tujuan membuat character story: Mengembangkan RP karakter saya Account UCP yang saya miliki: Dimasseto Account Forum yang saya miliki:Dimas5 Berapa lama saya sudah main di JGRP: 3 - 6 bulan Saya biasa main JGRP di: Hanya di rumah Saya Dimas5 selaku pemilik account UCP Dimasseto bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Nikolai_Kalashnikov) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain. Edited February 26, 2021 by Dimas5 perbaiki tanda baca 1
Jeypamungkas12 Posted February 25, 2021 Posted February 25, 2021 Selamat malam, saya disini akan mengoreksi hasil Character Stories kamu, untuk itu bisa tolong jawab pertanyaan dibawah ini terlebih dahulu: Sudah level berapa Character kamu? Sebutkan semua UCP yang kamu punya. Apakah kamu sudah yakin telah mencapai 300 kata?
Dimas5 Posted February 25, 2021 Author Posted February 25, 2021 (edited) 1. Level 5 2. Hanya punya satu UCP : Dimasseto 3. Yakin sudah sampai 300 kata Edited February 25, 2021 by Dimas5
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Jeypamungkas12 Posted February 26, 2021 Posted February 26, 2021 To @Dimas5I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to APPROVE your request. Please read the following guide to activate your link your store to your In-Game account: Sincerely,@Jeypamungkas12JG:RP Staff Team.
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