pending Pirapat_Ruangwiwat [Artemiy_D_Artyom]

[Mahogany]

Pirapat_Ruangwiwat

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          Pirapat Ruangwiwat a man who was born in Bangkok, 14 February 1995. He is a child of parents named Anchali and Sarah. They both are known as normal people that wanted to survive in the harsh world in Bangkok, they never thought that they will have a kid Pirapat was a mistake. In his childhood, Pirapat was forced to be a beggar near the sidewalk because his parents couldn't afford to buy food for the three of them. Well, the Young Pirapat didn't know that this is wrong and he did his "job" willingly and sincerely. Pirapat was forced to be a beggar for almost ten years, from his age was five to his fifteenth birthday. On his fifteenth birthday Pirapat was welcomed with a view where his mother get arrested in front of him by a police officer. His mother was suspected to be an illegal immigrant from Europe. Pirapat's father raged, he used Pirapat as a hostage to protect him from the officers. Anchali successfully fled from their house to somewhere unknown in Thailand. The Teenage Pirapat then gets brought by families from his mother's side to Europe so he could live like a teenager should live.

 

       Everyone was surprised when they know that Pirapat has a high IQ-level. They never thought that a boy who lived in poverty will be smart like him. His aunt Rose, let him study at the University of London. Pirapat succeeds to finish his study with a satisfying grade. Pirapat is now ready to face the world provided for him, he accepted his grade card from the University. And when he arrived at Rose's house, he saw her being arrested by the police because she has committed tax fraud. The sky felt crushed, and fell onto Pirapat's body, he never thought that everything could become this worse for him. He doesn't know what to do or what to reach, he just wanted to live a happy life like every kid live. But that hope will not come in a short period, he had to fight to be able to reach his goal which is becoming a good person.

 

       Pirapat tried to find some job that will help him financially, but every time he proposes his resume the Company will decline him because of his family background, "No, Sir Pirapat Ruangwiwat. We checked on your family's background and we found several cases that will make our decision change, we believe you are really smart but this is not its. Unfortunately we will decline you." Again, Pirapat's heart was filled with a never ending storm that constantly crush him heavily. He experienced this tragedy for years, he finally able to get a proper job when he reached the age of 24, which is 2019. In 2020, Pirapat who is happily enjoy his job got a call from Thailand, the call is from his father who was finally get arrested after the police successfuly identified his location. Pirapat sighed, he was happy because his father finally get arrested. He lived his life, and then moved to the US to live a calm life in the 2021.

 

       

 

 

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Questions

Tujuan membuat character story:
Saya ingin orang-orang lebih mengenali bagaimana karakter saya hidup dan agar supaya saya dapat meroleplaykan karaker saya dengan lebih baik lagi.

 

Account UCP yang saya miliki:
Artemiy_D_Artyom

 

Account Forum yang saya miliki:
Mahogany

 

Berapa lama saya sudah main di JGRP:
1 - 3 bulan

 

Saya biasa main JGRP di:
Hanya di rumah

 

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Saya Mahogany selaku pemilik account UCP Artemiy_D_Artyom bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Pirapat_Ruangwiwat) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

[BADRI]

Halo brader.. @Mahogany

Saya mengecek Character Stories kamu, Silahkan jawab pertanyaan dibawah.

 

1. Sebutkan berapa UCP yang kamu miliki.

2. Character yang kamu mainkan ini level berapa ?

3. Apakah CS yang kamu buat sudah 300 kata ?

4. Apakah CS yang kamu ini hasil dari kamu sendiri atau meng-Copy CS milik orang lain?

5. Apakah nama Character kamu dan nama UCP kamu sudah benar? (biasanya, kalo salah di antara kedua tersebut, pas di masukin CS nya ke UCP itu suka ga bisa, jadi tolong pastikan kembali Nama Character dan nama UCP nya benar.)

6. Kamu main dimana? Rumah apa main di Warnet?

 

Note:
Selagi dalam pemeriksaan, cobalah kamu periksa kembali Character Story kamu, siapa tahu saja ada kesalahan disana, jika ada kesalahan maka perbaikilah dan kalo belum di respon CS nya, mohon bersabar ya kakak, pasti di respon kok.

[Mahogany]

20 minutes ago, mariorianto28 said:

Halo brader.. @Mahogany

Saya mengecek Character Stories kamu, Silahkan jawab pertanyaan dibawah.

 

1. Sebutkan berapa UCP yang kamu miliki.

2. Character yang kamu mainkan ini level berapa ?

3. Apakah CS yang kamu buat sudah 300 kata ?

4. Apakah CS yang kamu ini hasil dari kamu sendiri atau meng-Copy CS milik orang lain?

5. Apakah nama Character kamu dan nama UCP kamu sudah benar? (biasanya, kalo salah di antara kedua tersebut, pas di masukin CS nya ke UCP itu suka ga bisa, jadi tolong pastikan kembali Nama Character dan nama UCP nya benar.)

6. Kamu main dimana? Rumah apa main di Warnet?

 

Note:
Selagi dalam pemeriksaan, cobalah kamu periksa kembali Character Story kamu, siapa tahu saja ada kesalahan disana, jika ada kesalahan maka perbaikilah dan kalo belum di respon CS nya, mohon bersabar ya kakak, pasti di respon kok.

 

1. Akun UCP yang saya miliki adalah 1.

2. Level karakter saya adalah level 2 (kalau memang tidak bisa, apakah aplikasi ini dijadikan sebagai pending?)

3. Sudah.

4. Orisinil dari pemikiran saya sendiri.

5. Benar.

6. Di rumah.

[BADRI]

@Mahogany

Perbaiki kembali:

1. Paragraph pertama, kedua, ke tiga, semua cerita di tambahkan lagi, per paragraph minimal lebih dari 5 baris kalimat.
2. Gunakan rata kanan kiri, bukan rata tengah ataupun bukan rata kiri. (Tidak tau rata kanan kiri? Lihat CS orang lain sebagai contoh nya.)
3. Berikan 5 atau 10 SPACE di setiap awal paragraph nya, lalu sesuaikan dengan paragraph lain nya.
4. Tepatkanlah KOMA dimana semestinya di tepatkan, jika kalimat tersebut masih bisa digunakan KOMA, makan gunakan lah KOMA, jika kalimat tersebut harus di beri TITIK, maka gunakan lah TITIK. jangan terlalu banyak KOMA maupun TITIK dalam Cerita Character Story kamu.

[Mahogany]

On 2/18/2021 at 2:55 PM, mariorianto28 said:

@Mahogany

Perbaiki kembali:

1. Paragraph pertama, kedua, ke tiga, semua cerita di tambahkan lagi, per paragraph minimal lebih dari 5 baris kalimat.
2. Gunakan rata kanan kiri, bukan rata tengah ataupun bukan rata kiri. (Tidak tau rata kanan kiri? Lihat CS orang lain sebagai contoh nya.)
3. Berikan 5 atau 10 SPACE di setiap awal paragraph nya, lalu sesuaikan dengan paragraph lain nya.
4. Tepatkanlah KOMA dimana semestinya di tepatkan, jika kalimat tersebut masih bisa digunakan KOMA, makan gunakan lah KOMA, jika kalimat tersebut harus di beri TITIK, maka gunakan lah TITIK. jangan terlalu banyak KOMA maupun TITIK dalam Cerita Character Story kamu.

 

The story has been revised, sorry for the delay. My character (Pirapat_Ruangwiwat) level is now already level 3.

[BADRI]

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To @Mahogany

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to APPROVE your request. Please read the following guide to activate your link your store to your In-Game account:

 

Sincerely,

@mariorianto28
JG:RP Staff Team.