pending Aditya Purnomo [Adityaeka]

[Aditya187]

Aditya Purnomo

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           Aditya Purnomo who is familiarly called Aditya, he was born in Los Santos on August 1 1999. She was the first child of her father and mother  her father who was a truck driver and her mother as a housewife and farmer. When he came home from school Aditya often helped his mother under the care of her. One day his father crashed and cost a lot of money his mother was confused to find extra money while their money was suitable for daily needs. Then Aditya did not stay silent he worked in place of his father as a truck driver, he initially doubted because he had an accident while riding the truck but he tried to make a determination to work to pay for his father's treatment.

          On the first day of work he was a bit hesitant but after being convinced by his mother he started to get excited again, when going to work he was told by his father to be careful because many begal in the street. Because Aditya had already made a determination he still worked then he remembered that he had a friend named John Michael who owned a gun shop and Aditya called John. And he told him that he needed a gun as a good friend and John gave aditya a gun. After getting aditya's weapon immediately started working as a trucker when he arrived in the middle of the road teryata true there begal then Aditya took the weapon that was in love with the John earlier, and Aditya managed to kill all the begal that was there shortly afterwards there was a sound of police sirens and arrested Aditya police thought Adityalah who committed the murder and Aditya was taken to the police station.

          Arriving at the police station Aditya was asked for information and Aditya replied that he was beheaded, the police did not believe then the police put Aditya in a temporary holding cell until it was proven that Aditya was innocent. After a few months Aditya was released from prison and allowed to go home. When he saw the luxury house that was thought to be his house that had been sold by Aditya's parents, Aditya asked about the existence of his parents and then the owner of the house did not know what then Aditya left the house. Then Aditya wanted to move to the city to find a job and Aditya saw there was a job vacancy as a truck driver. Then Aditya accepted a job there and after a few months of work there Aditya was able to buy a house, a car, and whatever Aditya wanted and Aditya was a successful person in the city.

 

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Questions

Tujuan membuat character story:
want to buy a house and so on

 

Account UCP yang saya miliki:
Adityaeka

 

Account Forum yang saya miliki:
Aditya187

 

Berapa lama saya sudah main di JGRP:
Kurang dari 1 bulan

 

Saya biasa main JGRP di:
Hanya di rumah

 

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Saya Aditya187 selaku pemilik account UCP Adityaeka bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Aditya Purnomo) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

[BADRI]

Halo brader.. @Aditya187

Saya mengecek Character Stories kamu, Silahkan jawab pertanyaan dibawah.

 

1. Sebutkan berapa UCP yang kamu miliki.

2. Character yang kamu mainkan ini level berapa ?

3. Apakah CS yang kamu buat sudah 300 kata ?

4. Apakah CS yang kamu ini hasil dari kamu sendiri atau meng-Copy CS milik orang lain?

5. Apakah nama Character kamu dan nama UCP kamu sudah benar? (biasanya, kalo salah di antara kedua tersebut, pas di masukin CS nya ke UCP itu suka ga bisa, jadi tolong pastikan kembali Nama Character dan nama UCP nya benar.)

6. Kamu main dimana? Rumah apa main di Warnet?

 

Note:
Selagi dalam pemeriksaan, cobalah kamu periksa kembali Character Story kamu, siapa tahu saja ada kesalahan disana, jika ada kesalahan maka perbaikilah dan kalo belum di respon CS nya, mohon bersabar ya kakak, pasti di respon kok.

[Aditya187]

40 minutes ago, mariorianto28 said:

Halo brader.. @Aditya187

Saya mengecek Character Stories kamu, Silahkan jawab pertanyaan dibawah.

 

1. Sebutkan berapa UCP yang kamu miliki.

2. Character yang kamu mainkan ini level berapa ?

3. Apakah CS yang kamu buat sudah 300 kata ?

4. Apakah CS yang kamu ini hasil dari kamu sendiri atau meng-Copy CS milik orang lain?

5. Apakah nama Character kamu dan nama UCP kamu sudah benar? (biasanya, kalo salah di antara kedua tersebut, pas di masukin CS nya ke UCP itu suka ga bisa, jadi tolong pastikan kembali Nama Character dan nama UCP nya benar.)

6. Kamu main dimana? Rumah apa main di Warnet?

 

Note:
Selagi dalam pemeriksaan, cobalah kamu periksa kembali Character Story kamu, siapa tahu saja ada kesalahan disana, jika ada kesalahan maka perbaikilah dan kalo belum di respon CS nya, mohon bersabar ya kakak, pasti di respon kok.

1. satu 

2. 4 mau ke level 5

3.sudah

4. hasil saya sendiri

5.benar nama ucp:Adityaeka nama karakter:Aditya Purnomo

6. main di rumah

[BADRI]

@Aditya187

Perbaiki kembali:

1. Photo nya di kecilkan lagi, jangan terlalu besar.
2. Gunakan rata kanan kiri, bukan rata tengah ataupun bukan rata kiri. (Tidak tau rata kanan kiri? Lihat CS orang lain sebagai contoh nya.)
3. Berikan 5 atau 10 SPACE di setiap awal paragraph nya, lalu sesuaikan dengan paragraph lain nya.
4. Tepatkanlah KOMA dimana semestinya di tepatkan, jika kalimat tersebut masih bisa digunakan KOMA, makan gunakan lah KOMA, jika kalimat tersebut harus di beri TITIK, maka gunakan lah TITIK. jangan terlalu banyak KOMA maupun TITIK dalam Cerita Character Story kamu.

[Aditya187]

2 hours ago, mariorianto28 said:

@Aditya187

Perbaiki kembali:

1. Photo nya di kecilkan lagi, jangan terlalu besar.
2. Gunakan rata kanan kiri, bukan rata tengah ataupun bukan rata kiri. (Tidak tau rata kanan kiri? Lihat CS orang lain sebagai contoh nya.)
3. Berikan 5 atau 10 SPACE di setiap awal paragraph nya, lalu sesuaikan dengan paragraph lain nya.
4. Tepatkanlah KOMA dimana semestinya di tepatkan, jika kalimat tersebut masih bisa digunakan KOMA, makan gunakan lah KOMA, jika kalimat tersebut harus di beri TITIK, maka gunakan lah TITIK. jangan terlalu banyak KOMA maupun TITIK dalam Cerita Character Story kamu.

1. sudah

2. sudah

3. sudah

4. bisa dicek  lagi

[BADRI]

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To @Aditya187

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to APPROVE your request. Please read the following guide to activate your link your store to your In-Game account:

 

Sincerely,

@mariorianto28
JG:RP Staff Team.