$daveyrzn$ Posted January 5, 2021 Posted January 5, 2021 Drake Logan New York is a big city. Too big for Drake, a troubled-kid who was born in Brooklyn. Born from a rich family, Drake wanted nothing to do with his father's legacy. His father was a local mafia in Hell's Kitchen, Manhattan. He goes by the name "El Rey" or The King, even after his retirement years ago. Well, his real name is not to be publicly announced because of what he's done many years back. So, let's continue with Drake's story. El Rey - his father - is a mexican, a Chicano. His mother is an American Native descendant, a Cherokee. That's why his skin color is (considered to be) dark skin. His skin color is also the reason he was able to get along easily with the locals when he was a boy. Drake Logan (art by daveyrzn) Born in Brooklyn, he spent a lot of time in Bronx. It's just a short drive to the North. Bronx was his "playground" and is his hometown. He used to come and go from the OCFS (Office of Children and Family Services) for "Juvenile Thefts and Burglaries". However, The King always came to the rescue. By the time he turned 17, he decided to finish his school. The funny thing was he never did care about those things. School, education, or that sort of things. Well, this time, he did. It was because of his brother, Treshawn. He is 7 years apart from Drake, left NYC when he was 18. This one time, Treshawn came back for his brother. He brought big news about his marriage with a woman named Patricia Logan, a painter from Los Angeles, California. Treshawn also wanted nothing to do with his father. In doing so, he took Patricia's name. So, there goes his name became Treshawn Logan. As a brother, he told Drake to live his life to the fullest. "New York is a big city, but the world is bigger and waiting for you, Brother," Treshawn said. The conversation went on. Treshawn forced his little brother to leave Bronx and Manhattan for good. "This place, it's His (El Rey's). Those buddies hanging with you. Because you're the legacy of The Mighty King. For once, Drake-y boy. Bad things will happen to you if you stay. I said that because I know so," he added. Treshawn was an officer in Los Santos Police Department (LSPD) back then. Those things Treshawn said, they got Drake to think. At last, he left NYC for good and took Patricia's name deliberately without her knowing it. He came back once or twice a year to see his mother. Leaving NYC when he was 17, Drake finished his school a year later in Garden District, New Orleans, by the state of Louisiana. After that, Drake decided to work as a bartender in The French Quarter, in the heart of New Orleans. It turned out that the bar owner is his brother's friend. It was a guy named Klaus. He owns a bar called Saint James Infirmary - later called as St. James. A couple months after Drake joined as a bartender in St. James, Klaus got himself into some sort of trouble. This isn't important to Drake's story, so let's just skip it. In the end, St. James was unoccupied and later on got confiscated by the local police for a couple years. Leaving its workers - including Drake - at that time, unemployed. Hearing the things happened to Klaus and his bar, Treshawn got in touch with Drake. He offered Drake a job as a civilian consultant for the LSPD. This is the moment when Drake decided to go to Los Santos, San Andreas. After a month working as a civilian consultant, the LSPD was announced to be merged with SASD (San Andreas Sheriff Department), creating a new department called San Andreas Police Department (SAPD). Drake wanted to be something more than a consultant. Without hesitation, he applied for the police recruitment. It was the first recruitment of SAPD. Drake's story in the SAPD is actually a bit interesting, but it's been too long for a short story. To make it simple, Drake joined SAPD when his brother was a Sergeant II. For 2 years, Drake rose through the ranks and became a Lieutenant. At the same time, also a Detective III from the Office of Criminal Intelligence. By the time he was about to be promoted as a Captain, Drake decided to resign. The reason was because he got a problem with the bureaucracy of the high commands. Sadly, the promotion was declined and Drake was dishonorably discharged. There will be time to tell more about Drake's story while he was in the SAPD. At last, Drake left SAPD. This time, he didn't just leave SAPD. He left San Andreas. He left it for Beacon Hills, a small town by the county of Beacon, California. Why? Well, he needed a break. Being a police is a big thing. May also be a little bit traumatic. After 6 months living in Beacon Hills, Drake was reached out by Patricia, Treshawn's wife. She needed Drake to be back in San Andreas. This time, Drake couldn't say no. "Treshawn is missing, Drake. It's been 2 weeks. I'm pregnant," Patricia said. Questions Tujuan membuat character story: Belum ada Character Story-nya setelah CN beberapa tahun lalu. Account UCP yang saya miliki: daveyrzn Account Forum yang saya miliki:$daveyrzn$ Berapa lama saya sudah main di JGRP: 1 - 2 tahun Saya biasa main JGRP di: Hanya di rumah Saya daveyrzn selaku pemilik account UCP daveyrzn bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Drake Logan) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.
Scumbag Posted January 5, 2021 Posted January 5, 2021 To @daveyrzn I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to PENDING your request. Reasoning for said denial is listed below: Satu sebutkan UCP yang kamu miliki saat ini Dua masih ada beberapa EYD yang salah, tolong di perbaiki Tiga karakter mu level berapa? Empat perkecil ukuran foto pada character story mu atau ubah foto dari karakter story mu. I wish you the best of luck in the future. Sincerely,@Scumbag JG:RP Staff Team
$daveyrzn$ Posted January 6, 2021 Author Posted January 6, 2021 5 hours ago, Scumbag said: To @daveyrzn I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to PENDING your request. Reasoning for said denial is listed below: Satu sebutkan UCP yang kamu miliki saat ini Dua masih ada beberapa EYD yang salah, tolong di perbaiki Tiga karakter mu level berapa? Empat perkecil ukuran foto pada character story mu atau ubah foto dari karakter story mu. I wish you the best of luck in the future. Sincerely,@Scumbag JG:RP Staff Team To @Scumbag; in order to fulfill the listed-reasonings/requirements, here are the replies: 1. UCP. Account yang saat ini dimiliki sudah diisi pada form Character Story dan dapat dilihat di atas, yaitu daveyrzn. 2. EYD merupakan singkatan dari Ejaan Yang Disempurnakan. EYD berlaku sampai dengan tahun 2015, kemudian digantikan dengan EBI (Ejaan Bahasa Indonesia). Mulai tahun 2015 sampai dengan sekarang (2021), ejaan resmi/formal yang digunakan mengacu pada Pedoman Umum Ejaan Bahasa Indonesia (PUEBI). Character Story di atas menggunakan Bahasa Inggris. Apabila ada penulisan grammar atau vocabulary yang salah boleh diinformasikan. 3. Character Drake Logan memiliki level 13 (tiga belas). 4. Ukuran foto (yang sebelumnya) sudah diperbarui menjadi lebih kecil (510 x 460 px). Saya masih belum paham relevansi-nya, tetapi diharapkan sudah memenuhi. I sincerely hope that the actions taken are able to fulfill the mentioned-requirements. At last, thank you for your time. Rgds, daveyrzn
Scumbag Posted January 6, 2021 Posted January 6, 2021 To @NamaForumI am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to APPROVE your request. Please read the following guide to activate your link your store to your In-Game account: Sincerely,@NamaStaffJG:RP Staff Team.
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