$yourmood$ Posted December 28, 2020 Posted December 28, 2020 (edited) Bismanetti_Cordoba Bismanetti Cordoba is an only child from two parents named, his father is Cordoba Debranca and his mother is named Chestavu Kira. Bismanetti was born in Rome, Italy on November 20, 1998. Bismanetti was born with a very good economy because his father Bismanetti was a director of coal mines in the city. At the age of 5, Bismanetti was very spoiled by his parents by being given very excessive facilities or could be said to be sufficient. Bismanetti has a birth defect in his leg, one of his legs only has 4 toes. Bismanetti had a very big ambition when he was 10 years old which was when he just entered elementary school in the city. When he was in elementary school he always won first place due to his hard work in studying day and night, Bismanetti's parents appreciated Bismanetti's business in his school. By the time he was in the first rank, Bismanetti was given what could be considered a very lucky facility for his age. After he moved to Junior High School, Bismanetti became interested in one of the women in his class, named Elllysa Ambrosio. Since then Bismanetti's achievement in learning has decreased as a result of his goals being divided into two between choosing women or achievement. At the time of graduation Bismanetti began to forget about Ellysa because of his enormous obligations to his family and achievements. Bismanetti managed to get very satisfying grades and again Bismanetti's parents were very proud of their son. After that he chose the favorite school he wanted. Bismanetti is very proud of his very satisfying achievement. After he graduated from Middle School, he also wanted to try something new, namely studying abroad. Bismanetti also told his parents that he wanted to study abroad, without thinking that his parents agreed with Bismanetti's words. Bismanetti chose a university located in Los Santos, America. After starting to study in a country, Bismanetti began to dare to find new friends to add insight and knowledge. Questions Tujuan membuat character story: Mau membuka fitur yang berada di dalam server Account UCP yang saya miliki: yourmood Account Forum yang saya miliki:yourmood Berapa lama saya sudah main di JGRP: 3 - 6 bulan Saya biasa main JGRP di: Hanya di rumah Saya yourmood selaku pemilik account UCP yourmood bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Bismanetti_Cordoba) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain. Edited January 1, 2021 by yourmood 1
ajengalifa Posted December 29, 2020 Posted December 29, 2020 Hai! Sebelum saya APPROVE Character Story dari kamu akan ada beberapa hal yang harus diperbaiki, antara lain: Tolong ratakan penulisannya. (Justify) Beri spasi antar paragraf satu dengan yang lainnya. Mungkin kata 'the Bismanetti people began to dare to find new friends to add insight and knowledge.' harus diperbaiki karena grammar tidak nyambung. Tolong diperbaiki dahulu yaa, terimakasih.
$yourmood$ Posted December 29, 2020 Author Posted December 29, 2020 9 hours ago, ajengalifa said: Hai! Sebelum saya APPROVE Character Story dari kamu akan ada beberapa hal yang harus diperbaiki, antara lain: Tolong ratakan penulisannya. (Justify) Beri spasi antar paragraf satu dengan yang lainnya. Mungkin kata 'the Bismanetti people began to dare to find new friends to add insight and knowledge.' harus diperbaiki karena grammar tidak nyambung. Tolong diperbaiki dahulu yaa, terimakasih. Sudah saya benarkan.
ajengalifa Posted December 30, 2020 Posted December 30, 2020 Kamu belum mengedit dari poin-poin yang saya sebutkan sebelumnya, tolong diedit dulu yaa.
$yourmood$ Posted December 31, 2020 Author Posted December 31, 2020 On 12/30/2020 at 11:18 AM, ajengalifa said: Kamu belum mengedit dari poin-poin yang saya sebutkan sebelumnya, tolong diedit dulu yaa. Sudah saya benarkan..
ajengalifa Posted January 1, 2021 Posted January 1, 2021 Paragraf 3 belum rata kanan-kirinya bang, tolong diedit lagi yaa.
$yourmood$ Posted January 1, 2021 Author Posted January 1, 2021 2 hours ago, ajengalifa said: Paragraf 3 belum rata kanan-kirinya bang, tolong diedit lagi yaa. Oke mba, sudah.
ajengalifa Posted January 3, 2021 Posted January 3, 2021 Okay last, jawab pertanyaan dibawah ini sejujur-jujurnya: Sudah level berapakah char ini? Apakah ada UCP selain yourmood?
$yourmood$ Posted January 4, 2021 Author Posted January 4, 2021 11 hours ago, ajengalifa said: Okay last, jawab pertanyaan dibawah ini sejujur-jujurnya: Sudah level berapakah char ini? Apakah ada UCP selain yourmood? -Char level 3 -Tidak ada
$yourmood$ Posted January 4, 2021 Author Posted January 4, 2021 3 hours ago, ajengalifa said: JonySuprapto ini UCP siapa? Punya kaka saya, itupun katanya sudah tidak dimainkan lagi
$yourmood$ Posted January 5, 2021 Author Posted January 5, 2021 12 hours ago, ajengalifa said: AgusWinanto dan BismaRB punya siapa bang? sama punya dia juga, + juga sudah tidak dimainkan.
ajengalifa Posted January 12, 2021 Posted January 12, 2021 Apakah kamu setuju jika UCP tersebut di block?
$yourmood$ Posted January 12, 2021 Author Posted January 12, 2021 4 hours ago, ajengalifa said: Apakah kamu setuju jika UCP tersebut di block? Setuju, karena sudah tidak dimainkan.
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