pending Luther Compton [Rivaldy]

[Rivaldy]

Luther Compton

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   Luther 'Bryde' Compton was born on June 21, 2001 he was born to a woman named Natalie or Luther's mother. Luther or as Bryde knew him was a naughty and lazy boy. At the age of 4 years Luther's father divorced Luther's mother, Mrs. Luther worked hard to support Luther, Mrs. Luther worked in a restaurant in the city of Cape Town Africa even though the salary was not so much but Mrs. Luther continued to work to support Luther.

 

   At the age of 10, a white man named Joshua married Luther's mother, Luther was very happy, with Joshua, Luther's mother didn't have to work anymore, Joshua's arrival to Luther's life made Luther feel comfortable, luxurious, Luther used to just walk to school now he he took him to school by car by his father, Luther's friends were jealous of him, during break time Luther's friend Jeremiah beat Luther, Luther was annoyed and he asked why you beat me Jeremiah answered you were too arrogant I don't like it, without talking much Luther immediately beat Jeremiah, Luther and Jeremiah were punished by their teacher.

 

  At 18 years of age. One night Luther was watching TV and he was shocked after hearing the sound breaking he was looking for the origin of the sound, it turned out that someone had thrown a glass at Luther's house with a stone, Luther was very upset he went out of the house and tried to find the person who threw his house, unexpectedly, a man armed was holding Luther from behind. Luther's father or Joshua, who knows that Luther is in danger, rushes to get his weapon and looks for Luther, in the middle of Joshua's trip on the phone by his partner, it turns out that his partner is holding Luther, Joshua immediately rushes there, when he gets there, a shootout occurs between Joshua and his partner, Joshua's partner. was shot in the chest and couldn't be saved. The next morning Luther and his parents rushed to the airport because the three of them wanted to go to Los Santos to start a new life there.

 

Questions

Tujuan membuat character story:
Biar bisa memegang weapon / tag create / dan lain lainnya

 

Account UCP yang saya miliki:
Rivaldy

 

Account Forum yang saya miliki:
Rivaldy

 

Berapa lama saya sudah main di JGRP:
6 bulan - 1 tahun

 

Saya biasa main JGRP di:
Hanya di rumah

 

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Saya Rivaldy selaku pemilik account UCP Rivaldy bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Luther Compton) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

[$Cherry$]

Halo, saya dengan Helper Cherry yang akan memeriksa Character Story kamu kali ini.

 

Mohon jawab pertanyaan ini dengan seksama, jujur dan benar. Jika kamu mencoba untuk berbohong atau menutupi sesuatu, akan ditindak sesuai dengan pasal.

 

1. Berapa lama kamu main JGRP dengan karakter ini?
2. Level berapa karakter kamu ini?
3. Ada berapa UCP yang kamu miliki?
4. Ada berapa karakter yang kamu miliki selain yang ini? (sebutkan semuanya disini beserta level-levelnya)
5. Apa cerita kamu sudah 300 kata?

[Rivaldy]

1.  Baru 5 hari minn

2. Level 4

3. Hanya satu minn yang ini

4. Sumiyoshi Fukui level 10 - Christ Snuckle level 8 - Alice Ainsley level 7 - Alexander Starks level 1

5. Sudah min

 

 

[$Cherry$]

Selagi saya memeriksa Story kamu, alangkah baiknya kamu sembari mengisi ini sampai selesai dan benar ya.

 

Mohon jawab pertanyaan dibawah dengan jawaban kamu sendiri dan contoh dari kamu sendiri, jangan copas dari RULES!

 

1. Apa itu Metagaming?
2. Apa itu Mixing?
3. Apa itu Powergaming?
4. Apa itu CJ?
5. Apa itu NJ?

[Rivaldy]

1. Metagaming adalah menggunakan informasi yang didapat dari OOC untuk keperluan IC 

2. Mixing adalah menggabungkan pesan IC dan OOC

3. Powergaming adalah melakukan hal yang mustahil di lakukan di dunia nyata

4. CJ adalah mengambil mobil orang dengan kekerasan tanpa adanya Rp yang jelas

5. NJ adalah merampas mobil orang tanpa sepengetahuan pemilik mobil tersebut

[$Cherry$]

Setelah saya evaluasi Character Story milik kamu, berikut adalah poin yang WAJIB kamu perbaiki;

 

1. Pada paragraf ke-3, ada ( , ) dan ( . ) yang tidak beraturan, rapikan.
2. Ceritakan sikap dan latar belakang luther. Jangan hanya cerita hidupnya.

[Rivaldy]

2 jam yang lalu, Gunnleif_Silverlance said:

Setelah saya evaluasi Character Story milik kamu, berikut adalah poin yang WAJIB kamu perbaiki;

 

1. Pada paragraf ke-3, ada ( , ) dan ( . ) yang tidak beraturan, rapikan.
2. Ceritakan sikap dan latar belakang luther. Jangan hanya cerita hidupnya.

1. Sudah saya edit minn

2. Sudah saya tambahkan di paragraf ke-1

 

[$Cherry$]

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To @Rivaldy

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to APPROVE your request. Please read the following guide to activate your link your store to your In-Game account:

 

Sincerely,

@Gunnleif_Silverlance
JG:RP Staff Team.