pending Melvin_Lucky [sayak12]

[sayak12]

Melvin_Lucky

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Melvin Lucky is a man who excels at his school and he also excels in futsal and other competitions. Melvin is a smart and good boy, Melvin really likes sports lessons at his school because when he was little Melvin often played football with his friends and from elementary school he already had an award trophy from his school. Melvin also joins other sports such as basketball and others Melvin is very good at basketball. His school is very broad, making Melvin very active in his studies as well as his large school Melvin also likes his school which is clean and cool, Melvin never skips in any activities until until he was in high school he also took up the sport which certainly made him happy and excited.

 

After graduating from high school Melvin also studied at one of the top universities in America, he majored in sports, Melvin was also very happy with his studies and not long after that Melvin graduated and arrived at his graduation event Melvin was happy and asked his mother to come to him. After graduation and Melvin got a visit to go and teach sports abroad, to go abroad that requires physical strength and strength and Melvin, because he wants to go abroad, dares him to go and ask permission from his parents after Melvin asked permission from parents and Melvin's parents also allowed him to go abroad.

 

When Melvin went to the airport and he contacted a friend, not long after that Melvin went and talked to his father and mother to say goodbye to go to the airport, arriving at the airport he chose the American flight route to Los Santos then after arriving at the American airport he continued taking the train The fire headed to the station when he arrived in Los Santos. Melvin was picked up by his teacher and Melvin was given facilities in the form of an apartment that he could occupy for that place. So Melvin also looks for friends as sports to introduce and play, therefore Melvin can live in Los Santos while working he also finds out other scientific information about sports and Melvin is happy to live in the City of Los Santos and Melvin gets a partner and begins to live happily and raised himself in the City of Los Santos.

 

 

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Questions

Tujuan membuat character story:
Untuk menceritakan kisah seorang pria yang bernama Melvin Lucky.

 

Account UCP yang saya miliki:
sayak12

 

Account Forum yang saya miliki:
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Berapa lama saya sudah main di JGRP:
6 bulan - 1 tahun

 

Saya biasa main JGRP di:
Hanya di warnet

 

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Saya sayak12 selaku pemilik account UCP sayak12 bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Melvin_Lucky) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

Edited November 29, 2020 by sayak12

[Matchalattee]

Selamat sore @sayak12

Selagi saya crosscheck character story kamu, saya ingin tanya beberapa pertanyaan.

 

1. Sebutkan secara jujur semua UCP apa saja yang anda mainkan!
2. Level berapakah kerakter yang anda mainkan sekarang dalam semua UCP?

[sayak12]

1 hour ago, Ganteng01 said:

Selamat sore @sayak12

Selagi saya crosscheck character story kamu, saya ingin tanya beberapa pertanyaan.

 

1. Sebutkan secara jujur semua UCP apa saja yang anda mainkan!
2. Level berapakah kerakter yang anda mainkan sekarang dalam semua UCP?

1. Hanya sayak12 dan 2 akun.

2. Level 5.

[Matchalattee]

1 hour ago, sayak12 said:

1. Hanya sayak12 dan 2 akun.

2. Level 5.

"arriving at the airport he chose the American flight route to Los Santos then after arriving at the American airport he continued taking the train The fire headed to the station"

 

Yang saya bold tolong diperbaiki, itu gak perlu pakai kapital.

 

"Melvin was picked up by his teacher and Melvin was given facilities in the form of an apartment that he could occupy for that place. And Melvin also looks for friends as sports to introduce and play"

 

Setelah tanda baca titik, tidak boleh menggunakan kata konjungsi seperti "dan" tolong diubah.

 

[sayak12]

5 minutes ago, Ganteng01 said:

"arriving at the airport he chose the American flight route to Los Santos then after arriving at the American airport he continued taking the train The fire headed to the station"

 

Yang saya bold tolong diperbaiki, itu gak perlu pakai kapital.

 

"Melvin was picked up by his teacher and Melvin was given facilities in the form of an apartment that he could occupy for that place. And Melvin also looks for friends as sports to introduce and play"

 

Setelah tanda baca titik, tidak boleh menggunakan kata konjungsi seperti "dan" tolong diubah.

 

Jadi place. and?

[Matchalattee]

19 minutes ago, sayak12 said:

Jadi place. and?

nope, gak boleh gunakan "and" silahkan cari kata lain.

[sayak12]

3 minutes ago, Ganteng01 said:

nope, gak boleh gunakan "and" silahkan cari kata lain.

Tapi place. titiknya gak boleh diubah juga kan? Cuman kata-katanya aja yang kita ubah?

[Matchalattee]

Just now, sayak12 said:

Tapi place. titiknya gak boleh diubah juga kan? Cuman kata-katanya aja yang kita ubah?

gk perlu, saya minta kata "and" doang diubah.

[sayak12]

Just now, Ganteng01 said:

gk perlu, saya minta kata "and" doang diubah.

Done.

[Matchalattee]

Kerja bagus, pertahankan dan kembangkan EYD kamu.

[Matchalattee]

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