Wahendra_Valintino Posted November 13, 2020 Posted November 13, 2020 (edited) Kimberly_Fonollosa Kimberly Fonollosa was born on United States in the first of April 1999. She has a brother, his name is Pedro. Kimberly lives a happy childhood with a lots of money. She has a bit difference with her brother. She’s arrogant. Kimberly only friends with rich kid on her school, but as she grows older, she realized what friendship means. She decided to be kind to others by giving away her unused school equipments to her friends on High School. She got a lot of friend by then. Just like his brother, Kimberly is also beautiful. Every boys in her school want and dream to date her, but she always refuses everyone because she doesn’t want to ruin her friendship in High School. Her teacher and parents was so proud, she always make a great score on her works and exams. She graduated High School at 18 then continued to takes Economic Degrees on Chicago University because she wants to help her brother to continue their parents business. She also got interested in cars on College. Even though she’s rich, she take a part-time job on weekends at a premium bar near her Flat. Kimberly has done here College and got a major in Economic. She moved to San Andreas with her brother, Pedro. They run their parents business branch on Los Santos. She work hard to keep her promises to her parents that she will keep her eye on her brother and their business. Kimberly start to runs her hobby as a car enthusiast in Los Santos, especially JDM cars. She was seen to be speeding with her Skyline R32 on Las Venturas Highway. Her face shows that she’s happy.Their parents was very happy and proud to her. Her experience since she was a kid makes her a success. Her life was happier as the days goes. Questions Tujuan membuat character story: Ingin Mengunakan Fitur fitur yang lebih Account UCP yang saya miliki: Wahendra_Valintino Account Forum yang saya miliki:Wahendra_Valintino Berapa lama saya sudah main di JGRP: 3 - 6 bulan Saya biasa main JGRP di: Hanya di rumah Saya Wahendra_Valintino selaku pemilik account UCP Wahendra_Valintino bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Kimberly_Fonollosa) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain. Edited November 14, 2020 by Wahendra_Valintino
tuapu Posted November 13, 2020 Posted November 13, 2020 To @Wahendra_Valintino I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to PENDING your request. Reasoning for said denial is listed below: Delete the double written name right above the picture, Resize the picture into smaller, Justify the paragraphs. How many UCP accounts do you have? Mention it! I wish you the best of luck in the future. Sincerely,@tuapu JG:RP Staff Team
Wahendra_Valintino Posted November 13, 2020 Author Posted November 13, 2020 (edited) 22 minutes ago, tuapu said: To @Wahendra_Valintino I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to PENDING your request. Reasoning for said denial is listed below: Delete the double written name right above the picture, Resize the picture into smaller, Justify the paragraphs. How many UCP accounts do you have? Mention it! I wish you the best of luck in the future. Sincerely,@tuapu JG:RP Staff Team Edited, Akun UCP saya hanya satu yaitu Wahendra_Valintino Edited November 13, 2020 by Wahendra_Valintino
tuapu Posted November 13, 2020 Posted November 13, 2020 You haven't edited the paragraphs to justify. Justify icon is on the menu bar symbolized by 4 horizontal lines down. And also why did you delete the inward-space in the first sentence of every paragraph, please make inward-space just like before. Please recheck before sent edited message so I can do your request faster.
Wahendra_Valintino Posted November 13, 2020 Author Posted November 13, 2020 Edited, Silahkan di priksa kembali
tuapu Posted November 13, 2020 Posted November 13, 2020 5 minutes ago, Wahendra_Valintino said: Edited, Silahkan di priksa kembali Still, you added the inward-space in every paragraph but you deleted the justify effect, duh. The only thing you have to do is to block all the paragraphs and click justify icon. That's all. Thank you.
Wahendra_Valintino Posted November 13, 2020 Author Posted November 13, 2020 14 minutes ago, tuapu said: Still, you added the inward-space in every paragraph but you deleted the justify effect, duh. The only thing you have to do is to block all the paragraphs and click justify icon. That's all. Thank you. Editeddd
tuapu Posted November 13, 2020 Posted November 13, 2020 Wait wait, dalam grammarnya masih ada yang kebalik-balik seperti: He yang seharusnya she, His yang seharusnya her, atau His yang seharusnya hers. Yuk semangat, dikit lagi itu.
Wahendra_Valintino Posted November 14, 2020 Author Posted November 14, 2020 16 jam yang lalu, tuapu said: Wait wait, dalam grammarnya masih ada yang kebalik-balik seperti: He yang seharusnya she, His yang seharusnya her, atau His yang seharusnya hers. Yuk semangat, dikit lagi itu. edited.
tuapu Posted November 14, 2020 Posted November 14, 2020 1 hour ago, Wahendra_Valintino said: edited. OMG Finally! Good job, Wahendra! Accepted, happy roleplaying as a beautiful gurll!
tuapu Posted November 14, 2020 Posted November 14, 2020 To @Wahendra_ValintinoI am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to APPROVE your request. Please read the following guide to activate your link your store to your In-Game account: Sincerely,@tuapuJG:RP Staff Team.
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