iClarity Posted October 30, 2020 Posted October 30, 2020 (edited) Max Mraz Max is half Japanese and half English and a high school student from Tokyo, Japan. He lives his days as a typical high school kid that loved cars, girls, and anime. Except during nighttime, he always went out and participated in an illegal street race. He was an excellent street racer, and he loved his ZR-350 as his car to race with. One day he saw a girl that also attended in the car meet. She’s a bit midget but has a silky hair with beautiful brown eyes and a big pair of tities and also owned a banshee as her ride. He wanted to approach her and get to know her, but he wasn’t sure that if she’s easy to approach. So, he scraps the idea and head on preparing for his touge race in Mount Haruna. As the car lined up for the race, he took a quick look in the opponent’s car to see who he verses with. Turns out it was the girl that he fancied earlier in the car meet. With excitement and nervous feeling that max had, he then rolled down his car window and yelled: “DO YOU WANT TO GO OUT WITH ME IF I WIN THIS RACE?!”. He then shuts his mouth with his hands and then slowly rolled his car window up as he felt embarrassed to blurred that out of the blue. Then she also rolled down her car window and said “yeah sure! That’s if you win tho” with her eyes winked towards Max. That made max feels relieved and he’s eager to win the race. And so, they raced. As they raced, Max saw someone from a distance ran away from the road with some sort of container in the person hand. Moments later, as Max went passed the road that he saw someone was turned out that, that person spilt oils on the road. Luckily Max managed to get a hold of his car but sadly the girl that he was facing didn’t and crashed her car. Max then rushed back towards the accident spot and quickly get the girl out of her car. Luckily, she is fine and both talks over a lot of things and then started dating. Few months before graduating her parents finds out that she participated in an illegal street race and starts dating someone from the illegal street race community. Her parents became furious and scheduled her to move to the United States before she graduates. She didn’t get to say goodbye to Max in person, but she did tell him over the phone that she won’t be able to see her anymore and that she’s moving to the United States. This made Max furious, and then he told himself “I gotta go to the United States to get her back to me” and so, max worked hard to save up all of his money so that he can move to the US to meet her again. A few years later, Max finally moved to Los Santos in the hopes of meeting his high school lover again. With only a few hundred bucks in his pocket, he contacted his online friend named Clayton Randolph to help him settle in Los Santos. With the help from his friend, Max finally begins to look for clues of his high school lover whereabouts. He also starts working part-time to buy a race car, so that he will be able to participate in the illegal street race in Los Santos. Questions Tujuan membuat character story: Bisa mengikuti Auction, memiliki rumah dan bisnis Account UCP yang saya miliki: iremedy Account Forum yang saya miliki:iClarity Berapa lama saya sudah main di JGRP: 1 - 2 tahun Saya biasa main JGRP di: Hanya di rumah Saya iClarity selaku pemilik account UCP iremedy bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Max Mraz) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain. Edited October 30, 2020 by iClarity menyesuaikan dengan rekomendasi dari forum
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