pabloalexx Posted October 8, 2020 Posted October 8, 2020 (edited) Albert_Alvaro Character : Albert Alvaro Story : Albert Alvaro is a twin child from a simple family, Albert has a good personality, and tends to stay quiet at home. When Albert was at school he was often bullied, and was ridiculed until Albert decided to stay in class, And not fight, No one wanted to be friends with him. And after graduating from school, Albert wanted to leave his village, Palamino, to the city of Los Santos. On March 18-2015, and Albert Alvaro officially graduated from school. On Monday, 21st, Albert Alvaro departed from his hometown of Palamino to the City in Los Santos. Departed by subway to the City of Los Santos Albert for the first time he left and left his parents in the village. At that time Albert Alvaro arrived in the city of Los Santos, Albert Alvaro started life in the city of Los Santos alone and had no friends. Albert Alvaro is confused where to go first, finally there is a kind person who wants to help to give a ride to a place called a school driver to make a motorbike license. Albert Alvaro finally passed the exam to make sims, and Albert Alvaro got a simulation motorbike. The next day Albert Alvaro started his first job as a road cleaner, City bus, and miner. Albert was very happy to receive his first salary, and Albert Alvaro plans to buy a motorbike for him to work. Albert is even more active working so that he can make his parents in the village happy. Albert has a desire to be a taxi driver so he can live in the city, and now has a friend named Matthew Davis they also become friends who help each other at work. Albert was finally able to buy a taxi, Albert immediately applied for a taxi company in the city of Los Santos. Finally, the one who had been waiting for him came, Albert was accepted as a taxi driver at the taxi company. And a few days later Albert's stage was getting bigger so that Albert could buy a house for his parents in the village, now Albert can stay to buy an apartment for him. Finally, Albert's dream came true after 5 years of hard work, now I can see his parents and younger siblings are happy. It has been a long time waiting for Albert to have a vehicle for him to work. Questions Tujuan membuat character story: supaya dapat membuka fitur fitur server Account UCP yang saya miliki: pabloalex Account Forum yang saya miliki:pabloalexx Berapa lama saya sudah main di JGRP: 1 - 3 bulan Saya biasa main JGRP di: Hanya di rumah Saya pabloalexx selaku pemilik account UCP pabloalex bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Albert_Alvaro) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain. Edited October 8, 2020 by pabloalexx
Hommey Posted October 8, 2020 Posted October 8, 2020 To @pabloalexx I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to PENDING your request. Reasoning for said denial is listed below: Allign paragraf must be creates more line spacing Ambiguous if its intended meaning is in some way unclear, please re-make it You should always use a capital letter in the following situations, ex : City, Named, etc. I wish you the best of luck in the future. Sincerely, @Hommey JG:RP Staff Team Note : Add or reply if you have more UCP or character.
Hommey Posted October 8, 2020 Posted October 8, 2020 25 minutes ago, Hommey said: Reasoning for said denial is listed below: Allign paragraf must be creates more line spacing Ambiguous if its intended meaning is in some way unclear, please re-make it You should always use a capital letter in the following situations, ex : City, Named, etc
pabloalexx Posted October 8, 2020 Author Posted October 8, 2020 16 minutes ago, Hommey said: UDAH MIN SEPERTI ITU?
Hommey Posted October 8, 2020 Posted October 8, 2020 3 minutes ago, pabloalexx said: UDAH MIN SEPERTI ITU? Kamu buat story pakai inggris, terus di reply untuk di remake, tapi gangerti, gimana coba 47 minutes ago, Hommey said: You should always use a capital letter in the following situations, ex : City, Named, etc. Yang point ini, masih salah
pabloalexx Posted October 8, 2020 Author Posted October 8, 2020 17 minutes ago, Hommey said: Kamu buat story pakai inggris, terus di reply untuk di remake, tapi gangerti, gimana coba Yang point ini, masih salah udah min.
Hommey Posted October 8, 2020 Posted October 8, 2020 To @pabloalexxI am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to APPROVE your request. Please read the following guide to activate your link your store to your In-Game account: Sincerely,@HommeyJG:RP Staff Team.
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