Devi afriyanto Posted September 28, 2020 Posted September 28, 2020 Lilo_Adonis Lilo ''Lil A'' Adonis Tijuana,Mexico Lilo Adonis is a boy born December 5 1990 from the city of Mexico, Lilo is the adopted son of a well of a farmer who tries his luck in America with his friend Deja Alejandro Lilo's little friend who is very close like his own brother, at the age of 10, Lilo for the first time seeing the violence that led to death. Lilo saw Deja who was having a transaction with a foreign man wearing a black coat and hat, Deja was seen panicking in front of Lilo, Deja also told him about what happened at that time, and Lilo was interested in what Deja was talking about at that time, he tried to dare to negotiate with the mafia, and selling illegal goods such as cocaine which was obtained from a mafia cartel when they first met. January 6 2020. Since Lilo Adonis' adoptive parents died, he returned to his old environment and tried his ambition to become a mafia boss with his friend Deja Alejandro, he sold various illegal goods to street children to increase the sales of cocaine sent from the mafia cartel that was already close to Lilo like his own family. To beat newcomers and rivals in his neighborhood he tries to pay gangsters to monopolize the business. Lilo was successful with his strategy and knocked him down one by one by monopolizing him. 10 years, after bringing down his rival, Lilo Adonis married a girl named Paulette Samatha who was a childhood friend and had a child named Milano Sandonis. Lilo was not enough with what he had and tried again for a long time to monopolize the business in the neighborhood where he lived. He also left his wife and child with a professional guard. Lilo Adonis and the Organization left Mexico and headed for the city of Los Santos, where Deja Alejandro is in the city and starting a mission to sell illegal goods to the biggest business in the city. For the first time a major war began, and Lilo and his organization became a famous fugitive in the Los Santos SAPD police as a drug kingpin. Questions Tujuan membuat character story: Memperluas karakterlistics dan berRoleplay Account UCP yang saya miliki: wassupnigga Account Forum yang saya miliki:Devi afriyanto Berapa lama saya sudah main di JGRP: 2 tahun lebih Saya biasa main JGRP di: Rumah dan warnet, tapi kebanyakan di rumah Saya Devi afriyanto selaku pemilik account UCP wassupnigga bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Lilo_Adonis) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.
Devi afriyanto Posted September 29, 2020 Author Posted September 29, 2020 Tolong dicek/balas kalo ada yang salah
Aheng Posted October 8, 2020 Posted October 8, 2020 Spam membuat threadmu sulit dicek oleh Staff. Ada akun UCP lain?
Devi afriyanto Posted October 8, 2020 Author Posted October 8, 2020 1 hour ago, NFSS said: Spam membuat threadmu sulit dicek oleh Staff. Ada akun UCP lain? Ada min, didelete aja. Maaf sebelumnya kebanyakan ucp gegara main dulu banyak teman mabar, tapi sekarang udh pensi semua. DevianL deleted
Aheng Posted October 8, 2020 Posted October 8, 2020 Revisinya adalah gunakan indent pada setiap awalan paragraf/bisa gunakan lima kali spasi.
Devi afriyanto Posted October 8, 2020 Author Posted October 8, 2020 43 minutes ago, NFSS said: Revisinya adalah gunakan indent pada setiap awalan paragraf/bisa gunakan lima kali spasi. Maksudnya pas paragraf pertama pake spasi 5kali? Edited done.
Aheng Posted October 8, 2020 Posted October 8, 2020 To @Devi afriyantoI am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to APPROVE your request. Please read the following guide to activate your link your store to your In-Game account: Sincerely,@NFSSJG:RP Staff Team.
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