scantarbian Posted August 1, 2020 Posted August 1, 2020 (edited) Alfred Dawis Alfred Dawis was born amidst the windy plains of the Midwestern United States. To be precise, in the state of Iowa, on August 10th, 1995. He was born to a caring and kind family who is also one of the largest landowners in the country. His family owns a farming company that manages acres of open agricultural lands consisting of corn, oat, and any other food crops. As a result, his family sits proudly among Iowa’s top 50 most prosperous families. His family’s wealth enables him to get a better education than the average citizen. This is because his family can afford to enroll him in expensive private schools. These private schools provide him with the highest quality of education possible in his home state. As a result of his education, Alfred achieved far above average SAT score. Not soon after, invitations from Ivy League universities poured into Alfred’s doorstep; each of them wants him to get his bachelor’s degree there. But despite all of the offers coming from every corner of America, he already has one in mind. His childhood dream, Massachusetts Institute of Technology, shortened as MIT. He enrolled himself in, taking a major in the field of Electrical Engineering. His enrollment also means that he has to leave the plains of Iowa, which has been caring for him and his family from day zero and move to the state of Massachusetts in the North-eastern United States. After finishing his studies, Alfred returned to his family in Iowa. However, this doesn’t last long due to his overwhelming desire to go out, explore the world, and make a living for himself. He doesn’t want to depend on his parents for his living hood, unlike what had happened throughout his childhood. Alfred then bids farewell to his family and boards an Amtrak train to Los Santos to make a fortune for himself. Questions Tujuan membuat character story: Membuka fitur-fitur yang hanya dapat diakses apabila memiliki character story Account UCP yang saya miliki: scantarbian Account Forum yang saya miliki:scantarbian Berapa lama saya sudah main di JGRP: Kurang dari 1 bulan Saya biasa main JGRP di: Hanya di rumah Saya scantarbian selaku pemilik account UCP scantarbian bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Alfred Dawis) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain. Edited August 4, 2020 by scantarbian
$Sophrosyne$ Posted August 1, 2020 Posted August 1, 2020 Sebutkan semua UCP kamu, dengan jujur. Beberapa grammar masih ada yang salah mohon di perbaiki.
scantarbian Posted August 1, 2020 Author Posted August 1, 2020 (edited) 58 minutes ago, alvarohartono said: Sebutkan semua UCP kamu, dengan jujur. Beberapa grammar masih ada yang salah mohon di perbaiki. 1.) Hanya ini saja. 2.) Waduh, Grammarly premium sudah tidak ada warning merah lagi e, tapi sdh tak edit sedikit kok, mohon panduannya. Edited August 1, 2020 by scantarbian
$Sophrosyne$ Posted August 2, 2020 Posted August 2, 2020 15 hours ago, scantarbian said: 1.) Hanya ini saja. 2.) Waduh, Grammarly premium sudah tidak ada warning merah lagi e, tapi sdh tak edit sedikit kok, mohon panduannya. Paragraf pertamanya madih ada yang salah kata katanya.
scantarbian Posted August 4, 2020 Author Posted August 4, 2020 On 8/2/2020 at 11:41 AM, alvarohartono said: Paragraf pertamanya madih ada yang salah kata katanya. Sudah tak coba rombak, mohon diperiksa kembali
scantarbian Posted August 4, 2020 Author Posted August 4, 2020 5 minutes ago, alvarohartono said: Level berapa character kamu ? level 4
$Sophrosyne$ Posted August 4, 2020 Posted August 4, 2020 To @NamaForumI am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to APPROVE your request. Please read the following guide to activate your link your store to your In-Game account: Sincerely,@NamaStaffJG:RP Staff Team.
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