MrBolot Posted July 21, 2020 Posted July 21, 2020 (edited) Gilbert_Zenobia Gilbert Zenobia Bell is a part time health center receptionist born in Mexico, April 23,1995 who is now 25 years old whose life is dominated by the completion of the killing of his half-brother, Jason Bell. Jason sank in 2016 when he was 21 years old and the killer was never tried. He felt that his life had been devastated by the loss of his stepbrother because he had no family left and he was very angry that his killer had never been tried and since then he decided to go to Lost Santos America so he could live happily there and be able to finance his daily life. He is a Spanyol Christian. He started studying medicine at college but never finished the course. Physically, Gilbert is in pretty good shape. He is tall with walnut skin, brown hair and black eyes. He grew up in a middle class environment. Because he never really knew his parents, he grew up in a series of foster homes. He is currently single. His most recent romance was with a gym assistant called Julie Cassie Knowles, who was the same age as him. They broke up because Julie couldn't deal with Gilbert's obsession with Jason's death. He is currently single. His latest romance is with a gym assistant named Julie Cassie Knowles, who is the same age as him. They break up because Julie can't handle Gilbert's obsession with Jason's death. Julie Cassie Knowles could only pray that the death of Jason's stepbrother, who until now had not been handled by the local Police. Gilbert then departs for Los Santos, with not too many preparations. When he arrived in Los Santos he did not have anyone to help him find work on the outskirts of Los Santos. He began looking for work, Whatever he did as long as he made money for him everyday, in his first months he had gotten a job as a street Sweeper and he still continued to fight so that he can cover up his sadness and believe that his desire for success will be achieved, until then his dream is to become a rich man in Los Santos and become a Lost Santos police officer because he wants to prove that the work of a Policeman must be like him. He now works as a Mechanic. Questions Tujuan membuat character story: ingin mempunyai rumah dan senjata Account UCP yang saya miliki: Impunity Account Forum yang saya miliki:MrBolot Berapa lama saya sudah main di JGRP: Kurang dari 1 bulan Saya biasa main JGRP di: Hanya di rumah Saya MrBolot selaku pemilik account UCP Impunity bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Gilbert_Zenobia) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain. Edited July 22, 2020 by MrBolot pengunaan setelah koma,titik dan huruf kapital
$Jimuna$ Posted July 21, 2020 Posted July 21, 2020 Hallo, ada beberapa revisi yang harus kamu lakukan: Setelah penggunaan tanda baca koma (,), tambahkan spasi. Setelah penggunaan tanda baca titik (.), tambahkan spasi dan gunakan huruf kapital untuk kata setelah titik. Hilangkan spoiler dibagian foto. 16 minutes ago, MrBolot said: and he was still continue Bagian ini, ganti dengan "he still continued".
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