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Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan:

Sudah saya revisi min @ZulRizki

Employee Name: Jeevaa Pritchard Activity Description: merapihkan bangku. Screenshot

Employee Name: Jeevaa Pritchard Activity Description: merapihkan bangku. Screenshot

Employee Name: Jeevaa Pritchard Activity Description: merapihkan bangku. Screenshot

1. TIdak Pure buatan sendiri 2. Tidak, hanya Zihanarv

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Naik dikit mas

Di /mp yang kamu lampirkan masih ada keanggotaan sebagai pekerja di bisnis, silahkan keluar dari Bisnis tersebut dalam waktu secepatnya sebelum saya denied. Pastikan juga character kamu sudah dalam posisi jail kembali ketika sudah keluar dari Bisnis tersebut. Kalau sudah silahkan update ss /mp dan screenshoot OOC Jail nya di form.

Deruka Kurogane Deruka Kurogane was born in Japan on May 8th, 1999, in a simple family known by the surname Gane. From a young age, he was raised with strong values of discipline, hard work, and responsibility. His parents always taught him that success does not come overnight, but through consistent effort. Deruka grew up with his younger sister, Chiya Shirogane, with whom he shared a very close relationship. As an older brother, Deruka always tried to be a good example and protect Chiya in all situations. After completing his education, he worked in several small companies in Japan. Although his jobs were enough to meet daily needs, he felt that the opportunities for growth were very limited. He started looking for chances outside of Japan and often heard stories about Los Santos, a city filled with various job opportunities for those brave enough to start from scratch. With limited savings and the support of his family, Deruka decided to leave Japan in pursuit of a better life.When he arrived in Los Santos, reality did not match his expectations. While the city offered many opportunities, it also had intense competition. Without family or close friends, Deruka had to learn to adapt to a new environment, different culture, and a much faster pace of life compared to his hometown. To survive, he took on various jobs that could provide income, such as delivering goods, driving, helping small local businesses, and working as a freelancer in different fields. From each job, Deruka learned that building a good reputation is far more important than seeking immediate profits. He began to be known as someone who was disciplined, punctual, and trustworthy. His good relations with many people gradually opened the door for him to get to know the business world, services, and various investment opportunities growing in Los Santos. Although he experienced several failures and lost some chances due to lack of experience, Deruka chose to see each mistake as a lesson for continued growth. To him, every relationship built with honesty was far more valuable than instant gains. After a few years of living in Los Santos, Deruka’s life started improving. He managed to have a simple place to stay and more stable financial conditions than when he first arrived. The experiences he gained made him a more mature decision-maker and more cautious in choosing his social environment. Nevertheless, Deruka still held tightly to the principles taught by his family to work honestly and maintain a good reputation. In his spare time, he regularly contacted Chiya Shirogane, who remained in Japan. Chiya often talked about her desire to follow in her older brother’s footsteps and start a new life in Los Santos. Hearing this, Deruka did not immediately invite his sister to come over. He wanted to make sure that when Chiya arrived, he would have a stable life to guide and protect her from the harshness of city life. From that moment, Deruka had a new goal: to keep expanding his network, developing his career, and building a better future so that one day he could welcome Chiya in Los Santos. For him, going abroad was not just about making a living, but proving that hard work, honesty, and patience can change someone’s life. With this determination, Deruka Kurogane continued to move forward, gradually building his name while waiting for the day when he and his sister could start a new chapter of their lives together in the city of Los Santos. Questions Character Story Pertama: No Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 6 bulan - 1 tahun URL Namechange: https://jogjagamers.org/topic/384345-cn-deruka-zoldyck-to-deruka-kurogane-deruka12/#comment-3913702 Account UCP yang saya miliki: Tidak ada Account Forum yang saya miliki: Saya Zoynd14 selaku pemilik account UCP Deruka12 bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Deruka Kurogane) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

Boleh boleh saja di pake, senyaman mas nya aja

Niceee. Ijin comot

Jawab pertanyaan ini: 1. Apakah kamu menggunakan AI dalam pembuatan CS ini? 2. Apakah ada UCP selain Zihanarv ? Jawaban jujur sangat saya hargai, dan menentukan arah diterima atau tidaknya CS ini.

Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? Tidak Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? 3 tahun lebih Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? Buat baru Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? Tidak Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? Tidak Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? Di rumah

Bisa mas dari pihak Kepolisian seperti itu ketika ada laporan atau pun terjadi kesalahan di sana. Namun pihak polisi tidak mungkin asal grebek dia punya peraturan tersendiri dan itu sangat jarang sekali rp seperti itu

Bisa yok better dari yang lain

1. sudah 2. sudah 3. sudah 4. salah tembak 5. sudah

Gunakan bahasa indonesia yang baik dan benar.

Ditunggu saja mas sambil di tag admin yang bersangkutan, nanti bisa ku bantu bilang ke admin Zull

Mantap. Sangat usefull. Jadi ga pusing lagi kalo crash

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Employee Name: Svyatoslav Stepanovich Activity Description: Pumping up a flat patriot tire Screenshot: