pending Rudolf_Wyman [ManXy]

[ManXy]

Rudolf_Wyman

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The rain was coming down hard the night Rudolf Wyman was born, June 25th, 2005, the kind that makes car tires hiss on Los Santos streets. His mom, Alina, worked the overnight shift at a diner off Route 68, scraping grease off griddles until her hands cracked. Soon enough, his dad, Hector, did auto body work when he wasn't drinking. There was never enough money, but Rudolf learned early to keep his head down, to watch the numbers in the ledger his mom kept by the phone. His little sister Mary got all the big emotions in that house, crying loud over skinned knees while Rudolf just nodded and took out the trash without being asked. He was eight when he started making lists in a black notebook, writing down every car that passed their apartment window. It all came apart when Hector threw a wrench through the living room window one Tuesday in November.

 

The glass shattered right over Rudolf's usual spot on the couch, pages of his notebook fluttering to the floor. "This family's a goddamn graveyard," Hector slurred before walking out for good. Alina didn't cry, just swept up the glass while Mary wailed. Rudolf picked up his notebook, smoothed the crumpled page where he'd been tracking gas prices. That night, lying awake at 3 AM, he decided two things: he'd never drink, and he'd own a decent sedan before he turned 20. Not that saying it out loud would've changed anything. The next three years were quiet in all the wrong ways.

 

Alina worked double shifts, Mary started sneaking out with boys from school, and Rudolf took weekend jobs detailing cars for old man Ruiz down at the auto yard. He met Lina there, a mechanic's daughter who laughed at his terrible coffee but taught him how to change brake pads. When his notebook filled up, she gave him a new one with "shut up and write" stamped on the cover. He failed his driver's test twice before passing, hands sweating on the wheel both times. The day after graduation, Ruiz offered him full-time work, but standing in that grease-stained bay. Not that it mattered much. Rudolf realized he didn't want to spend his life waiting for other people's cars to break down.

 

Now at 21, rudy wakes at 5:15 every morning without an alarm. He pours yesterday's reheated coffee into a thermos and walks three blocks to the bus stop where Mrs. Khatri always saves him a seat. The depot knows him as the quiet one who fixes spreadsheets no one else can figure out, the guy who still carries that black notebook everywhere. Some nights he drives Lina's old Corolla to the overlook near Vinewood; engine idling while he stares at city lights.. That's when the doubt creeps in, when he hears Hector's voice asking what kind of man wastes his life pushing papers. But then his phone buzzes, mari needing bail money again, alina asking if he's eaten, and he writes the amounts in his book like always.

 

The notebook's almost full again. There's an application folded between pages 43 and 44, one for mechanic school up north, but every time he pulls it out something stops him. Maybe it's the way Lina rolls her eyes when he mentions leaving. Or how Alina's hands shake counting tip money at the diner these days. By then, or maybe it's simpler than that: Los Santos doesn't let go easy. Some nights he catches himself staring at that wrench mark still etched into the living room wall, wondering if running toward something is just another way of running away.

 

 

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Questions

Character Story Pertama: Ya

Durasi bermain di JG:RP: Kurang dari 1 bulan

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Saya ManXy selaku pemilik account UCP ManXy bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Rudolf_Wyman) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

Edited 18 minutes ago by ManXy

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Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini:

1. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak)
2. Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih )
3. Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange)
4. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
5. Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
6. Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet)

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

1. Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline)
2. Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol  pada toolbar di atas.
3. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ )
4. Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English).
5. Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. 
6. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar.
7. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan:
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[ManXy]

1. baru pertama kali buat

2. kurang dari 1 bulan

3.tidak

4.tidak ada

5.tidak ada

6.dirumah, kadang diwarnet