[CN] Florence Ashford to Rachel Laquetta (Ansl)

[Ansl]

UCP Name: Ansl

Old Character: Florence Ashford

Old Character Story:

https://jogjagamers.org/topic/381060-florence_ashford-ansl/#comment-3881086

 

 

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New Character: Rachel Laquetta

Gender: Perempuan (Female)

Origin: United States of America

 

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Reason for name change request:

Mau mengubah alur roleplay.

 

Screenshots of '/myid' and '/mp':

Bukti

 

 

 

CK Story:

Spoiler

Florence Ashford, just 20 years old, wakes up at 7:20 AM in her house. She drags herself to the bathroom, splashes cold water on her face, and feels that morning freshness wash over her. She grabs her car keys, hops into her vehicle, and drives straight to a diner for breakfast. By 9:10 AM, she arrives at Masato's Burger Vinewood, a classic greasy spot where she grabs a quick meal. After finishing, she climbs back into her roadtrain and continues her drive through the bustling city streets.

While cruising along, she catches something odd in her rearview mirror. A dark car keeps matching her speed, staying close but not too close. Her instincts kick in hard that primal warning telling her something isn't right. Her hands grip the wheel tighter, her eyes switching between the road and that mirror. Los Santos is dangerous, everyone knows that, but she never thought trouble would find her today. She's young, confident, and used to handling herself, but this feels different. The car behind her persists, following every turn she makes, closing the distance little by little. She considers speeding away or finding a crowded spot to lose them, but there's no time. The vehicle blocks her path ahead, forcing her to slam the brakes. Before she can even react, a man in a mask jumps out and points a gun straight at her windshield.

He gestures aggressively for her to get out, but Florence refuses to be a victim. She reaches under her seat, pulls out her own pistol, and returns fire without hesitation. Shots echo through the street as she fights back fiercely, determined to survive. But her opponent is faster and more experienced. A bullet finds its mark, and she collapses onto the pavement. The masked man approaches slowly, checks her motionless body, and starts going through her pockets. He snatches her wallet, phone, and whatever cash she had, then disappears into his car. Florence lies there alone, bleeding out on the asphalt, her young life cut short in an instant. No one stops to help, no one even notices. The city keeps moving around her like nothing happened. She was brave, impulsive, and refused to surrender, and that stubborn courage cost her everything. In the end, Los Santos swallowed another soul too young to go.

 

CK Screenshots:

Bukti

 

 

Edited 1 hour ago by Ansl

[brainfreeze52]

Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu:

1. Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
2. Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
3. Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih?
4. Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK?
5. Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara?

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

1. Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong )
2. Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif.
3. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK.
4. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang.
5. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf.
6. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10.
7. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda.
8. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.

[Ansl]

11 minutes ago, brainfreeze52 said:

Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu:

1. Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
2. Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
3. Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih?
4. Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK?
5. Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara?

1. Sudah
2. Sudah
3. Sudah
4. Melawan perampok
5. Sudah