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Felix Castano


 

 

Felix Mejia Castaño was born in Medellín, Colombia, in 1986. He was born into a poor family with very limited resources. As a child, Felix often walked with his older brother to earn money to support the family and felix wasnt school he survive what he doing for his life. No matter how few pesos they had, they didn’t care; for the sake of their family, they were willing to brave the scorching heat, endure hunger, and endure pain. One night, Felix was pondering at home, thinking that even a small amount of pesos wasn’t enough to support his entire family, and he needed to remember that the city where he now lived, Medellín, was still controlled by powerful and feared cartels. Suddenly, Felix’s older brother came to tell him that they had found work as farmers. However, Felix warned his brother not to fall for a scam where a job as a farmer turns out to be slavery for the cartels. His brother tried to convince his younger brother, hinting that they would receive millions of pesos from someone even though Felix had only met this unknown person once. Tommorow comes Felix and his brother going to where his brother dealing offering with someone, suddenly  what felix thingking was wrong, it was a ordinary male who was have a very large coffee plantation the men offering to them both a money. Felix with his enthusiasm and spirit accepting the offering to his brother and his brother handshake with the men, Felix and his Brother started working from years to years, Felix are not fully helping his brother work but, he supporting his brother from the back like giving his water or else, he just follow his brother word.

 

Now that Felix has reached his teens, he helps his older brother with their work as coffee farmers, working hard to restore the family’s financial situation. But that afternoon, he felt something was off why was he working alone when his brother usually accompanied him in the coffee fields? When Felix decided to head home early, he was shocked by what he saw upon arriving: blood was splattered everywhere, and Felix saw with his own eyes that his family had been murdered by an unknown group. Felix collapsed to the floor and wept loudly, hugging the bodies of his family members. He called the local police, and they arrived immediately to secure the scene. Felix sat there with a blank stare he had no idea who had done this. Several weeks later, Felix at his new house he just sit alone eating his food, suddenly his friends come to his house and talk longer to him and explain who the group making this trouble but Felix need to promise that won't talk that to outside, Felix friend talk with carefull it was a troublemaker group near in Medellin city too, his friend offering a fight back but with extreme one, they using a gun for fightback. felix hesitates thingking like that and he accepting the offer the day was come Felix and his friend in his car preparing guns and they driivr to the places and shooting without forgive, after the a hours later felix running to his house cleaning what his done,

 

A few days later, the police came for him and arrested him in connection with a shooting that directly killed many innocent people. Felix was sentenced to ten years in prison. While in prison, Felix felt guilty about what he had done and felt as though he was being called by ghosts he recognized such as his family asking him to come home. However, Felix did not give up; he had to serve the prison sentence he deserved. Although his frequent escape attempts were always thwarted, it was not Felix’s intention to escape from prison. Ten years later, Felix was released from prison and returned home, feeling empty inside and seeing his home, which had once been his, Felix decided to immigrate to the Los Santos to start a new life. He packed his suitcases and bags for the move, and the very next day, he was at the airport, flying to the United States. As he set foot in the Los Santos airport, he took a deep breath and began to build his life anew, year after year.

 

 


 

Questions

Character Story Pertama: No

Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 3 tahun lebih

URL Namechange:

 

Account UCP yang saya miliki:
velinzasama

 

Account Forum yang saya miliki:
Alinko44

 


 

Saya Alinko44 selaku pemilik account UCP Velinzasama bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Felix Castano) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

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Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini:

  1. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak)
  2. Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih )
  3. Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange)
  4. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
  5. Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
  6. Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet)

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

  1. Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (BoldItalic, atau Underline)
  2. Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol image.png pada toolbar di atas.
  3. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ )
  4. Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English).
  5. Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. 
  6. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar.
  7. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan:
    Spoiler

    edit.png

     

 

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2 minutes ago, revanzaputra said:
  • Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak)
  • Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih )
  • Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange)
  • Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
  • Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
  • Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet)

1.Ya

2.3 Tahun

3.Namechange

4.tidak hanya ada Velinzasama

5.tidak hanya ada @Alinko44

6.Di rumah

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Jawab pertanyaan saya dengan JUJUR tanpa ada sedikit kebohongan.

  1. Sudahkah Character Story kamu berisikan 300 kata?
  2. Apakah Character Story yang kamu buat ini ada campur tangan bantuan AI
  3. Apakah Character Story yang kamu buat ini mengambil / mencuri dari hasil copy paste Character story orang lain?
  4. Ada berapa UCP yang kamu miliki saat ini?
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6 minutes ago, revanzaputra said:
  • Sudahkah Character Story kamu berisikan 300 kata?
  • Apakah Character Story yang kamu buat ini ada campur tangan bantuan AI
  • Apakah Character Story yang kamu buat ini mengambil / mencuri dari hasil copy paste Character story orang lain?
  • Ada berapa UCP yang kamu miliki saat ini?

1. Sudah.

2.Tidak sama sekali.

3.Tidak, semua Story ini dari pikiran imajinasi saya.

4. Hanya satu, Velinzasama.

Posted

Ikuti hal berikut yang perlu diperbaiki :

  • Buat latar tempat Felix Castano sedang atau sudah berada di kota San Andreas seperti Los Santos, San Fierro, dan Las Venturas.
  • Perbaiki format penulisan menjadi Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol image.png pada toolbar di atas.
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4 minutes ago, revanzaputra said:

Ikuti hal berikut yang perlu diperbaiki :

  • Buat latar tempat Felix Castano sedang atau sudah berada di kota San Andreas seperti Los Santos, San Fierro, dan Las Venturas.
  • Perbaiki format penulisan menjadi Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol image.png pada toolbar di atas.

Sudah.

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Helper Team
Character Story

Dear @Alinko44

 

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website.

We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character.

 

Sincerely,
@revanzaputra
JG:RP Helper Team

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