pending Ramiz_Blagojevic [Rasunputrabanyumas]

[kamal]

Ramiz_Blagojevic

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Ramiz Blagojevic was born in 9 July 1994 Ramiz was a youngest child from 3, Ramiz backstory is from a poor family from serbian its push Ramiz to be a hardworker, Ramiz never blaming circumstances because how his parents raise him to be a hardworker and never blame on someone. Ramiz is family man he care about his family so much he will do anything for his family

Ramiz's education only went as far as middle school because of Ramiz parents finance but its never make him feeling small and that make Ramiz to be a hardworker, at 17 years old Ramiz work as mechanic in Serbia its not going well, Ramiz`s colleague its always bully Ramiz because he is just middle school graduate. Once time Ramiz colleague its disturbing Ramiz at lunch and blame Ramiz`s parents, because Ramiz`s family man  he fight he`s colleague and accidentally killed his colleague. Ramiz Get jailed for 10 Years and sue for 5.000$. Because Ramiz from a poor family its make him unable to pay, his prison sentence was extended by two years, after released Ramiz go to his family and found his family is all dead because the accident that Ramiz killed his colleague found out Ramiz colleague was from a mafia family that makes Ramiz was chase everywhere anywhere and anytime. That makes Ramiz feeling extermely tired, Ramiz dream just to fought all of the Mob that chase him and just to be rich. after that Ramiz friend told him to leave the serbia because the mob never get tired to chase Ramiz. Ramiz`s friend told him to go to Los Santos

After Arrived in Los Santos Ramiz find a homestay and find a job. Ramiz dream to be rich and to get payback to the Mob that kill his whole family.

 

 

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Questions

Character Story Pertama: Yes

Durasi bermain di JG:RP: Kurang dari 1 bulan

URL Namechange:

Account UCP yang saya miliki:
Rasunputrabanyumas

 

Account Forum yang saya miliki:

@kamal

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Saya kamal selaku pemilik account UCP Rasunputrabanyumas bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Ramiz_Blagojevic) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

Edited Saturday at 07:55 AM by kamal

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Review

[raihanrawadi90]

 Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini:

1. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak)
2. Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih )
3. Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange)
4. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
5. Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
6. Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet)

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

1. Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline)
2. Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol  pada toolbar di atas.
3. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ )
4. Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English).
5. Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. 
6. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar.
7. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan:
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