[CN] Jaylon Kareem to Keegan Hensley (TirZ)

[TirZ]

UCP Name: TirZ

Old Character: Jaylon Kareem

Old Character Story:

https://jogjagamers.org/topic/301045-jaylon_kareem-tirz/

 

 

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New Character: Keegan Hensley

Gender: Laki-laki (Male)

Origin: United State Of America

 

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Reason for name change request:

New Roleplay

 

Screenshots of '/myid' and '/mp':

Bukti

 

/MP




JAIL







/myid

 

 

CK Story:

Spoiler

Finally one morning Jaylon Karem completed getting ready for work. After taking a shower and putting on his work clothes Jaylon stared at himself in the mirror just to make sure that his appearance was clean. Jaylon took his perfume out and sprayed both sides of his neck and both hands, this would keep him fresh at his workplace.
After doing this Jaylon then picked up his bag, the same bag he carried to work with him every single day.


His bag contained a laptop with data that was of great importance in relation to his job. However he forgot to back up his laptop before going to bed because Jaylon was very tired but even so he still knew that he was capable of completing all of his tasks at the office. Before heading out to his car he locked the door of his house very tightly so it was secure during his time at work. He walked towards his car and just as he reached the driver side door Jaylon's stomach grumbled.
He had totally forgotten to have breakfast that morning and he really didn't want to be working on an empty stomach.




Jaylon had intended to drive straight to work, but now that he realised that he hadn't eaten he had changed his plans; now he wanted to get some food. He then walked over to his Primo which was parked in his front yard since last night. Jaylon took his car keys out of his pants pocket and unlock his Primo carefully.He opened the driver side door and closed it after he had checked that he didn't forget anything at home. Jaylon slid into the driver's seat, started the engine and was on his way to grab some breakfast. While driving in his car Jaylon didn't know where to get food so after some thought Jaylon decided to go to a nearby pizza restaurant located a short distance away from his house. He didn't think twice to go there so he just turned his car towards the direction of the restaurant and headed off.


He parked his car outside on the side of the road, shut down the engine and stepped out of his vehicle before heading into the pizza restaurant. Once Jaylon got to the cashier he told them what food he wanted to order since he was alone he ordered a Mini Cheese Pizza for himself. As Jaylon was waiting for his pizza, the front door was suddenly flung open by robbers. In fact this was a terrible morning in Jaylon's life as these people raided the pizza restaurant and caused havoc.
Everybody in the restaurant were screaming Jaylon held his hands up in the air immediately Jaylon was scared.


One of the robber came towards him with a handgun aimed at his head and stole his bag containing various expensive possessions. Jaylon pleaded with him not to take the bag as his laptop contains some very important data, but the robber wouldn't listen. Desperate not to lose his laptop, Jaylon decided to make a daring run with the bag, but the robber swiftly grabbed his bag and sent Jaylon to the floor.
Without delay the robber shot Jaylon in the head and stole his bag and money and immediately ran away. Jaylon, who had been shot in the head, died at the restaurant before help could arrive.

 

CK Screenshots:

Bukti

 

 


 


 


 


 



 
 

 

[BGenk]

Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu:

1. Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
2. Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
3. Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih?
4. Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK?
5. Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara?

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

1. Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong )
2. Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif.
3. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK.
4. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang.
5. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf.
6. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10.
7. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda.
8. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.

 

[TirZ]

8 hours ago, BGenk said:

Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu:

1. Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
2. Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
3. Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih?
4. Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK?
5. Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara?

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

1. Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong )
2. Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif.
3. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK.
4. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang.
5. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf.
6. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10.
7. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda.
8. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.

 

1. sudah

2. sudah

3. sudah

4. cari sarapan lalu di rob

5. sudah