pending Mike_Yian [mike969]

[danish paramaditya]

mike yian

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Mike Yian came from guatamela so he are latino.He consider to take a work on Los santos because dreaming to be profetional mechanic,Mike yian has mixed parrents half latins  and half asian,flashback when Mike was 26 years Old,Mike always pressured with their parrents his parrents dreaming mike to be miner in chemical engineering but Mike dream to be a mechanic.Mike always think how can he counter his parrents,everynight eat on dinner mike sleep earlier and won't speak to Mike's parrents at the night. Before he go to sleep he making decision to go work on Los santos.Making a hundread skenarios for being success on los santos,but Mike's decision not that good.He doesn't think that his decision are legal or ilegal,so he not making decision in a right way.Because its his first time to go became far from his  parrents last night before he go to Los santos he feel angry,sad,and always unsure about his decision.

 

Flashback to 1 week before go,He work ilegally on drug dealer he work on his friend,carried by his firend uncle.Mike always work after he study remind he still on university.After he work 1 month on drug dealer in short he got 0k dollar from its ilegal sallary.But when he take journey to a million dollars,police indicating his workplace,for 1 week he became wanted person.He always block news on tv for hiding his status from his parrents,in short Mike's friend offering helicopter sell on black market that is k,Mike thinking "but im not sure its healthy conditions or not","but aswell im a good mechanic"so he thought he could fixed up the heli," in short he paid the helicopter.He fix his heli only in 1 night,"i think i could hide this on abonnded building.

 

Tomorrow after he work his heli.life goes as usual only he sleep earlier afterdinner.His parrents worry about Mike's mentality.In the middle of night he make sure his parrents sleep well and won't hear his step to go outside.He walk slowly to 1st floor take his car key without sound and he make it clearly,his firend already waiting him in front of the garage.Mike give the car key to his friend and said "remember i trust you,you can use my car for help accses for sell a drug",no answer...  inshort he arrived at the abbonnded building,Mike prepairing his heli and his friend said "Mike thankyou you are my journey i couldn"t continue my bussines i know its bad i would take your car back to your house".Mike suddenly give his k to his friend for farwell,"oke i'll go mate bye bye thankyou for everything",and his friend take back his car to Mike's house without being caught with Mike's parrents.And mike starting his new plans at Los Santos

 

 

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Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 1 - 3 bulan

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Saya danish paramaditya selaku pemilik account UCP mike969 bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (mike yian) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

Edited 9 hours ago by danish paramaditya

[Lanxy]

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1. Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline)
2. Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol  pada toolbar di atas.
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4. Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English).
5. Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. 
6. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar.
7. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan:
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