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Erasmo_Mario [Adrianefendi]

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Erasmo Mario was born in the town of Creel on November 8 2003. His house stands at the end of a dirt road which every rainy season turns into a mud puddle. His father worked as a fisherman, while his mother sewed clothes for local residents. Their income is barely enough to cover food and electricity bills. Since childhood, Erasmo has been used to helping his parents. She went to school in the morning, and in the afternoon, she helped her mother deliver sewing orders to people's homes. From his parents, Erasmo learned that hard work and honesty are the most valuable assets in life.
 

When Erasmo was sixteen years old, a great storm hit the sea. His father's boat sank in the middle of high waves. Even though other fishermen found him, he could not be saved. This incident was a serious blow for Erasmo and his mother. In the years after the incident, he worked part-time as a package delivery man, helped out at a hardware store, and even worked at a car wash. Over the years, he set aside most of his income to help his mother and save money to pursue his dreams.


After graduating from high school, Erasmo used all his savings to open a small business for home and building repairs. Thanks to his reputation for honesty and neat work, his business flourished. Many of his customers came through recommendations from people he had helped while volunteering. With the little savings he had, Erasmo moved his mother to Los Santos to start a new life. There, he continued his business. Even though he has to start from scratch, Erasmo believes leaving the past behind is the best decision. For him, there was no greater treasure than seeing his mother living in peace and safety.

 


 

Questions

Character Story Pertama: No

Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 3 tahun lebih

URL Namechange:

Account UCP yang saya miliki:
Tidak ada

 

Account Forum yang saya miliki:

 


 

Saya XENDERS GMG selaku pemilik account UCP Adrianefendi bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Erasmo_Mario) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

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Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini:

  1. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak)
  2. Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih )
  3. Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange)
  4. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
  5. Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
  6. Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet)

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

  1. Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (BoldItalic, atau Underline)
  2. Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol image.png pada toolbar di atas.
  3. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ )
  4. Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English).
  5. Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. 
  6. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar.
  7. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan:
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Posted
3 hours ago, XENDERS GMG said:

Account UCP yang saya miliki:
Tidak ada

 

Account Forum yang saya miliki:

Klik titik 3 atas kanan CS mu, lalu edit bagian ini, isi nama UCP dan nama forum.

18 minutes ago, Takerukisamaru said:

Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol image.png pada toolbar di atas.

Edit juga bagian story nya, kasih rata kiri kanan atau justify.

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