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Carlos_Oconor


 

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  Once upon a time, there was this young guy known for being straight-up ruthless in a ghost town. His name was Carlos O'conor, but people called him "The Slugger." He got that nickname from the locals. Word on the street was that Carlos’s punches never missed—not even once—and always landed clean right on his enemy's head. That’s exactly why they called him "The Slugger." Carlos grew up on pure hatred passed down from his dad, who used to beat him until he passed out back when he was a kid. His dad eventually dipped, leaving him behind to live with his mom, who worked her fingers to the bone day and night just to pay the bills. Carlos wasn't scared of nobody. He ran a small-time gang in his town, robbing local shops just for the hell of it. Him and his boys only had one goal: to take over the neighboring city. Right now, Carlos and his crew could only control this small town because they were short on numbers.
 

  Just when Carlos and his boys were about to roll a newcomer in town, he was blindsided by his old gang leader—the one he’d left behind. The old boss showed up entirely solo just to see Carlos. Carlos had been branded a traitor by his old leader for hooking up with the boss’s daughter, which was why he got kicked out of the gang in the first place. The old boss stared Carlos down, but Carlos ballsily walked right up to him, standing tall and full of confidence. A massive brawl broke out. The old leader and Carlos’s gang fought viciously. A few of Carlos’s boys dropped dead on the spot, and the rest scattered, abandoning Carlos all by himself. Now, it was just the two of them left in that place, both their faces completely beat up.
 

  The old leader explained that he just wanted to talk to Carlos one-on-one to get him to rejoin his old crew. The boss told Carlos, "You're still weak, especially living in a trashy, run-down little town like this. Come back, you’re still getting a warm welcome at my place." Carlos just laughed his head off hearing that, and the tension completely melted away. Carlos and his boss teamed up again, but on two conditions from Carlos: first, he wanted to keep seeing his daughter; second, the boss had to bring Carlos's mom to live together with his daughter. The boss agreed to the terms on the spot without a single doubt. Now, Carlos is back with his old crew, and the rest of the members welcomed him back with open arms.

 


 

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Character Story Pertama: No

Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 1 - 2 tahun

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Account UCP yang saya miliki:
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Saya Amariloo selaku pemilik account UCP Amarilo bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Carlos_Oconor) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

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Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini:

  1. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak)
  2. Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih )
  3. Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange)
  4. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
  5. Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
  6. Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet)

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

  1. Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (BoldItalic, atau Underline)
  2. Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol image.png pada toolbar di atas.
  3. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ )
  4. Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English).
  5. Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. 
  6. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar.
  7. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan:
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Character Story

Dear @Amariloo,

 

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website.

We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character.

 

Sincerely,
@bendhardyonas
JG:RP Helper Team

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